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#1 Red Queen Sen (Done) on Thu Aug 30, 2018 1:31 pm


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Name: Sen Yoshimura
Alias: the Red Queen
Race: Human
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Personality: Sen has a sadistic personality, often expressing joy at the expense of others' suffering. Her twisted personality is possibly the result of fighting to stay alive all her life.  Sen  has no qualms about remorselessly slaughtering anyone that gets in her way., and shows happiness when inflicting pain on others. Sen hides her true nature behind a alter ego and can easily change between the two with out showing her true nature. Sen Completely believes that the world is survival of the strongest and that humans are meant to be violent and bloodthirsty. The strong are meant to fight the strong and week should crumble and die. Because of that Sen seriously respects the strong and is rather friendly to those she sees as wolves, For anyone that may come along that stronger then Sen she shows even more respect and gratitude. These however means anyone Sen sees as weak as sheep meant to crumble die and wait for there slaughter. Sen has a very sharp intuition about the feelings and desires of people, which she exploits to the fullest whenever possible. She is deceptive and fine manipulator she enjoys using a pawn to the fullest almost as much a she enjoys crushing her opponents. Any time Sen is not acting as her alter ego and is not committing any crimes, anyone that sees hr sees a girl who is blunt and straightforward to the point of being mean, though it pairs with a brutal honesty.  She tends to give others backsides compliments  

When hiding her other personality Sen pears to be quite playful and ditzy at times. She is usually late almost always do to oversleeping, for what ever reason she always seems tired. Well in her facade Sen portends to care for the needy and helpless, even going as far as donating to charity. Sen also acts friendly to those she normally wouldn't and seems to just be an average girl with a simple quirk. She even uses her quirk in a much weaker form of her quirk having it registered and seen as a simple Hardening quirk.She may also seem rather lazy at times as well and might even shrug off a challenge or fight just because she doesn't feel like it at the time, but if some truly annoys her then she wont ignore them any longer.

Sen  hates cigarettes and the smell of smokers. She loves coffee, especially Espresso and Affogato. Sen absolutely loves spicy foods, her favorites would be  Kimchi fried rice with chicken or bacon or gochujang meatballs.
Alignment:  Chaotic Evil
Blood Type: AB+
Birthplace: USA New York
Current Place of Residence: Musutafu, Japan
Appearance: Sen has soft, fluffy, wavy, Bright pink hair, styled in a chin-length bob, with fringes reaching her eyebrows. Her eyes are a golden. She is considered as a beautiful and very cute young girl. Her typically civilian outfit is normally some kind of t-shirt either being blue black, pink, or yellow, along with loose comfy looking sweet pants in matching color. As a villain she wears a tattered maroon cloak with droopy ears attached to the hood. She also wears a floral scarf around her neck. Her arms and legs covered in bandages, and a white mask with a wide brim smile.  Sen does also attend UA and wears the standard uniform when in class but remarks that its rather uncomfortable   
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QUIRK


Quirk Name: Haemokinetic
Quirk Type: Emitter
Quirk Description:  Sen is able to utilize blood with their physical combat, creating weapons or tools.Sen she call make her own blood flow out of the pores of her skin. Applications of these allow her to create various weapons and armor from blood, that protects her from small arms fire  and light attacks. Sen can also make barriers shields and walls that can take on heavier  fire arms and attacks. She can also do things like tentacle extension, wing manifestation. Sen can telakenticly control any object. The limits of her quirk are  needing blood to create anything. Using too much of her own blood makes her light headed and dizzy.
When acting under her alter ego Sen only uses the Armor aspect of her quirk and even as it officially registered as Haemo Armor.but she tends to use it in a weaker regarded only ever covering her arms and legs and never her full body as she would do normally when using the armor.  



HISTORY


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History:  Sen was born in New York City an orphan  her parents hero having dies at a young age. The orphanage that Sen was put in the staff were all abusive and cruel and made the kids work for there meals, but Sen was never one to gravel and refused to work for her abuse caretakers which lead her to a life of thievery and mugging individuals for food and money.Over the years Sen acquired power, strength, and slowly formed a gang of thieves, that would change when Sen got her quirk.  When Sen got her quirk which was firsts show when her body was covered in her blood armor when a caretaker at the orphanage struck at her with a knife. After she gained her quirk her Sen took to fighting to gain money that was what she must enjoyed fighting to prove her superiority among the weak. It was around these tie that Sen started stashing her winnings away using the money she stole or got from her gang. Then one day Sen met a women that would show her that the world it still so much bigger. The strange women was able to strike fear in to the strongest of Sen gang members, only Sen was the one to attack her, and was beaten quiet badly, but the women seemed to respect Sen attempt because She offered to take Sen and train her to survive.That day started the next 4 years of Sens life where she would learn  the meaning of pain and what it means to survive in a world filled with murders and psychos. After four years of hell The women that Sen now knew as Ayu Valafi  separated  on the understanding that from there on out they would have to fight the next time they met. Sen decided to head off to Musutafu, Japan, but first it was time to clean up. Before leaen Sen dismantled her little gang and completely destroyed the Orphanage she once called home
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Last edited by Kawa Kensai on Sat Sep 08, 2018 6:43 am; edited 4 times in total

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#2 Re: Red Queen Sen (Done) on Mon Sep 03, 2018 5:16 am

Since its been a couple days just gonna bump these and also make sue peaple knew its done now

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#3 Re: Red Queen Sen (Done) on Mon Sep 03, 2018 6:35 am

There are some things here that needs to be relooked. Particularly given that she's 16. As strong as my twins are, even this seems a bit much. Particularly since this is blood.

enhancing their own abilities or directly manipulating their opponents blood. One of Sen darker application is use blood to manipulate the bodily movement. manipulating some or something through there blood makes her tired quickly and can only manipulate one player at a time. I read the entire description, and not once did you give any example of enhancing their own abilities, and I'm confused as to how that would be able to do so, please get rid of it. Then there is the rest of that red. With this, no. Not even player permission only. And no manipulating another person's blood, even outside their body. We have at least two other blood manipulators, and neither one of them can do that, and both are adults. Just stick with your own. Have it tied to your specific DNA, and boom, makes perfect sense.

Yeah, no clones of yourself. Unless they're one foot tall and made of blood (since it would be an entirely different quirk altogether). You only have a finite amount of blood, any larger than that, even for just an outline and hollow inside, just seems too much, especially at this age.

I'm fine with everything else, as long as you know that it takes more blood to protect yourself against heavier attacks and firearms.



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Riku Tomoshibi. Shinigami. 0-5
Tegan Tristan Tomoshibi. Human. 2-1
Kuro, Tegan's talking cat. 4 tier noncombatant.
Reo Sato. Shinigami. 2-1
Jin Midokawa. Human. 0-5
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#4 Re: Red Queen Sen (Done) on Tue Sep 04, 2018 11:44 am

Alright i think that fixes up my quirk.

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#5 Re: Red Queen Sen (Done) on Sat Sep 08, 2018 4:18 am

heavy like a bowling ball. Sen can even make her blood explosive.

How? Unless you're forcing your blood down or something, I'm not seeing how you can make it heavier. It makes no sense...only thing I'm thinking of is if you add in more blood to it and condensing it. But the human body only has about 5 quarts of blood, for an average adult male weighing 154 pounds. You're not an adult, and I'm assuming much smaller given you're a female, and not even as tall or heavy as an average adult male (but you have height and weight not filled in, so I don't know). Same with the blood explosion thing. Blood isn't flammable. Or anything like that.

I can see you having more blood than average, but still...and those two parts don't make any sense. The rest does...*looks at deadman wonderland.* Pretty sure most of their blood based abilities are perfectly fine. Or even combined. Though if they do stuff like the above, not so much, but I know blood blades, blood armor, blood whips/tentacles (length determined by how well you stretch it and thin it), even blood bullets and yes, those blood wings...though flying would still be incredibly difficult for you, but as a defensive measure, could be a good idea. You're adding things that are not properties of blood or is super unrealistic, even for the realm of MHA. Get rid of those two things, and don't add anything else, and I'll approve and tier you.



Jun Tomoshibi. Human. 0-5
Riku Tomoshibi. Shinigami. 0-5
Tegan Tristan Tomoshibi. Human. 2-1
Kuro, Tegan's talking cat. 4 tier noncombatant.
Reo Sato. Shinigami. 2-1
Jin Midokawa. Human. 0-5
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#6 Re: Red Queen Sen (Done) on Sat Sep 08, 2018 6:45 am

Alright yeah that actually makes sense, i was tying to get away with some if not all the ability i know of in Deadman wonderland but yeah i should have considered the amount of blood one has . Its been removed

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#7 Re: Red Queen Sen (Done) on Sat Sep 08, 2018 8:13 am

I don't even recall explosive blood or anything of the like in Deadman. I could be wrong though, it was a long time ago since I watched it.

Approved.

B- with A- potential.



Jun Tomoshibi. Human. 0-5
Riku Tomoshibi. Shinigami. 0-5
Tegan Tristan Tomoshibi. Human. 2-1
Kuro, Tegan's talking cat. 4 tier noncombatant.
Reo Sato. Shinigami. 2-1
Jin Midokawa. Human. 0-5
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#8 Re: Red Queen Sen (Done) on Sat Sep 08, 2018 12:01 pm

Gonna down this to c since we don’t know much about your rp and you’re just a kid in rp. Approved.

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