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on Sat Sep 02, 2017 8:43 am

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Shinigami
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Herminia's:

Item name: Royal Blackened Steel Longsword
Description: http://vignette2.wikia.nocookie.net/elderscrolls/images/4/46/Ebony_Longsword_OB.png/revision/latest?cb=20120612163218
Effect: Has Zanpakutou Durability.
Number of it you have/possible/allowed: 1
Private Equipment or Public: Public, the character buying the item has to purchase the item in a thread.
Price: 200 coins

Item name: Royal Blackened Steel War Axe
Description: https://vignette1.wikia.nocookie.net/elderscrolls/images/5/55/Ebony_War_Axe_OB.png/revision/latest?cb=20120612163255
Effect: Has Zanpakutou Durability.
Number of it you have/possible/allowed: 2
Private Equipment or Public: Public, the character buying the item has to purchase the item in a thread.
Price: 200 coins

Item name: Ivory Sword
Description: https://pre00.deviantart.net/4449/th/pre/f/2017/214/1/3/1330a8f18a982b8fa9c5284c68a84014-dbinbnd.png
Effect: As the name implies, it is a blade carved of ivory. It is very lightweight and is a great conductor of spirit energy, as such attacks with this weapon are swift and grants a 15% boosts to attacks using spirit energy. However it can easily be broken since it is a material not suitable to be used for weapons of this size.
Number of it you have/possible/allowed: 1
Private Equipment or Public: Public, the character buying the item has to purchase the item/have the item repaired in a thread. Repairs are half the point cost of purchase.
Price: 250 coins

Item name: Runic Japanese-Style Longsword
Description: http://vignette3.wikia.nocookie.net/elderscrolls/images/b/b3/DaedricKatana.png/revision/latest?cb=20120512225329
Effect: When given a slow and steady supply of spirit energy, equal to a level 10 Kidou, the blade of this sword will ignite. Attacks with this weapon are enhanced with power equal to a level 20 Hadou. Areas struck by this blade while it is on fire are likely to get 1st degree burns. Has durability equal to tempered steel.
Number of it you have/possible/allowed: 1
Private Equipment or Public: Public, the character buying the item has to purchase the item/have the item repaired in a thread. Repairs are half the point cost of purchase.
Price: 300 coins

Item name: Malachite Staff
Description: http://vignette1.wikia.nocookie.net/elderscrolls/images/8/8e/M_GlassStaff.png/revision/latest?cb=20130122030526
Effect: This is a great conductor of spirit energy, especially Kidou and other attacks similar. Attacks using spirit energy gain a 15% speed boost. Has durability equal to an iron weapon.
Number of it you have/possible/allowed: 1
Private Equipment or Public: Public, the character buying the item has to purchase the item/have the item repaired in a thread. Repairs are half the point cost of purchase.
Price: 250 coins

Item name: Malachite Battleaxe
Description: http://vignette1.wikia.nocookie.net/elderscrolls/images/c/c7/Glass_battleaxe_skyrim.png/revision/latest?cb=20130120152447
Effect: Made and hand carved using lightweight materials, this weapon has a 10% boost to attack speed. Has durability equal to an iron weapon.
Number of it you have/possible/allowed: 1
Private Equipment or Public: Public, the character buying the item has to purchase the item/have the item repaired in a thread. Repairs are half the point cost of purchase.
Price: 250 coins

Item name: Sapphire Crescent Blade
Description: http://orig15.deviantart.net/69e6/f/2016/042/5/b/croissant_aedrique___aedric_crescent___fan_art_tes_by_etrelley-d9rdqqg.png
Effect: Fires a rope of ice at the target to bind them in place using the wielder’s spirit energy, equal to a level 45 Kidou. While using this ability the user cannot move from the spot they're using it. Lasts for 2 posts and has a 3 post cooldown. Has Zanpakutou durability.
Number of it you have/possible/allowed: 1
Private Equipment or Public: Public, the character buying the item has to purchase the item in a thread.
Price: 300 coins

Item name: Malachite Shuriken (10)
Description: http://pre14.deviantart.net/16ae/th/pre/f/2016/054/a/e/glass_shuriken___shuriken_de_verre___fanart_tes_by_etrelley-d9stfrv.png
Effect: Simple shuriken which breaks off into whatever wound it makes into the target. (Can be custom filled with customer’s own poison. Poison must be supplied by the customer, filling charge is 50% total cost of shuriken.)
Number of it you have/possible/allowed: 30
Private Equipment or Public: Public, the character buying the item has to purchase the item/have the item repaired in a thread. Repairs are half the point cost of purchase.
Price: 100 coins (+50 if filled with custom poison.)

Item name: Leather Armor
Description: https://i.pinimg.com/originals/fe/0a/f3/fe0af39a0ec2996207bca0a569fdd59b.jpg
Effect: Provides a 25% damage reduction, with durability matching extremely tough leather. Can be broken/cut, takes more damage from physical attacks than energy attacks. Once broken it will no longer provide proper support and must be repaired.
Number of it you have/possible/allowed: 1
Private Equipment or Public: Public, the character buying the item has to purchase the item/have the item repaired in a thread. Repairs are half the point cost of purchase.
Price: 250 coins

Item name: High Carbon Steel Plate
Description: http://steelandstone.wdfiles.com/local--files/warfare/fullplate.jpg
Effect: Provides a 50% damage reduction, with it's durability matching the material it is made of. Takes more damage from energy attacks than physical. Once broken it will no longer provide proper support and must be repaired.
Number of it you have/possible/allowed: 1
Private Equipment or Public: Public, the character buying the item has to purchase the item/have the item repaired in a thread. Repairs are half the point cost of purchase.
Price: 400 coins

Gregor's:

Item name: Strength Phial
Description: https://pre05.deviantart.net/a98d/th/pre/f/2014/309/a/6/fiole_blanche___white_phial___tes5_skyrim_by_etrelley-d84yi1c.png
Effect: Gives the drinker a +1x boost to strength for 3 posts, after which they suffer  -1x Strength for 2 posts.  
Number of it you have/possible/allowed: 1
Private Equipment or Public: Public, the character buying the item has to purchase the item in a thread.
Price: 400 coins

Item name: Spirit Potion
Description: https://pre10.deviantart.net/e766/th/pre/f/2015/056/e/9/phial_of_morrowind___fiole_de_morrowind___tes3_by_etrelley-d8jg7oj.png
Effect: Restores 20% of the drinker’s Spirit Energy in the post it is used. Disables  any other “Energy Regen” ability
Number of it you have/possible/allowed: 1
Private Equipment or Public: Public, the character buying the item has to purchase the item in a thread.
Price: 400

Item name: Healing Potion
Description: https://pre09.deviantart.net/9931/th/pre/f/2017/220/a/4/fire_phial___oc_by_etrelley-dbjb0rg.png
Effect: Gives the drinker High Speed Regeneration for 1 post, healing all minor wounds and stops the bleeding of all major wounds. Absolutely will not regenerate cut off limbs or vital organs.
Number of it you have/possible/allowed: 1
Private Equipment or Public: Public, the character buying the item has to purchase the item in a thread.
Price: 400

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on Sat Sep 02, 2017 11:00 am

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Princess
Princess
Royal Blackened Steel Longsword
• Zanpakutou Durability essentially means that it cannot break without OOC permission. Remove "Can be broken".

Royal Blackened Steel War Axe
• See above.

The World's Burden
•I'm not sure I like the idea of damaging an opponent's Stamina... or any stat, really... I'm gonna default to a more experienced staff member for this.

Runic Japanese-Style Longsword
• Quantify how much spirit energy must be fed into the blade. I would suggest A level 10 Kidou.

Nightmare Scythe
• I'm not going to pretend to understand what you mean by "Instill Fear" up to a level 75 Kidou. As-is, I'm not going to approve this. If you were to say something like, each hit increases the damage it can deal, from 0-60 (increments of 15), that I would be okay with.

Malachite Battleaxe
• I dislike the attack speed boost... but it makes sense given the "Glass" properties of the weapon. Lower the durability to Tempered Steel, and I'll approve.

Sapphire Crescent Blade
• Add in that the user cannot move while binding someone, and that it drains reiatsu from the user to use this. Up the cooldown to 3 posts.

Malachite Shuriken (10)
• These... are actually fine.

Leather Armor, High Carbon Steel Plate, Strength Phial, Spirit Phial, Healing Potion
• I'm gonna default to a more experienced staff member for these.

Overall
• I would prefer you link to the images rather than host them. Would make this entire topic a lot easier to look at in my opinion. For those items which are ready to be approved, and eventually all of them should they be approved, it is up to you to price them, though we may suggest changes to the price. Give everything a price, since they're for sale.

♥ Lexie



Malachite Battleaxe
• Debating on this.... getting hit with an item like this would drain stamina by way of being naturally heavy/strong. Lower it to level 20, and make it only able to happen once per post (so getting hit twice would only make you lose it once)

Leather Armor * High Carbon Steel Plate
• Needs a slight elaboration. It functions like a hierro, but breaks when hit with energy attacks? To be honest, I'd prefer a Ring gimmick that bestowed these effects, but if you wanna walk out of battle in crumbling armor... hey, you do you boo.

Strength Phial
• This is okay, provided it's a +1x (so 2x would become 3x) and not a direct 2 times current strength (so 2x would become 4x). I'd ask for clarification to make sure that's right, and if it is, change the 30% to -1x.

Spirit Phial
• Depending on what Seralin prices this at... I'd adjust the energy regen potion's effects based on that, but not to exceed 20% at the most. It would also have to disable any other "Energy Regen" abilities for the thread.

Life Potion
• I'd change to high speed regen for 1 post, curing all minor wounds and starting to heal major ones, at least stopping their bleeding.

♥ Noziel

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on Sun Sep 03, 2017 4:41 pm

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Shinigami
Shinigami
Edits have been made based upon what you have both said.

♥ Seralin

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on Sun Sep 03, 2017 11:46 pm

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8th Division
8th Division
Final request for edits. Nothing serious, mostly notes.

Everything but the armor is okay.
-Leather Armor: Damage reduction is okay, just need to note it'll take more damage from physical attacks then energy
-Carbon Steel Armor: Damage reduction needs to be taken down to 30-35%, note that it'll take more damage from energy attacks than physical attacks.

Aside from that, you're golden. Sound fair, Serry?


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on Mon Sep 04, 2017 12:28 am

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Shinigami
Shinigami
Sounds fair and the changes were made. ^^

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on Mon Sep 04, 2017 12:35 am

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8th Division
8th Division
Formally approved, have fun haggling~


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