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THE SHINIGAMI APPLICATION
Name: Chris Yagami
Alias: Tekka-Shinigami
Real Age: 22 Years Old
Phys. Age: Looks 17 years old though.
Gender: Male
Personality: A former neighborhood guy who seemed calm and having a cheerful attitude at times trying to have a noble hero shinigami role. In the beginning, He was more a down to earth guy having a responsible attitude and always being mild mannered. While living alone, Chris Yagami acted more of an adult thinking of a more greater responsibility to make sure other families didn't ask questions.

He loves animals except pitbulls, he truly believes that some animals like cats, birds and dogs are like pure hearted creatures so to speak. Every Friday, Chris will take bread and feed it to some birds despite many bird feeding laws. In his mind, birds have an unique ability to travel across the world to soar the known skies with their wings being one with the wind.

Always believing his new role was a higher calling in life bringing a certain determination into his heart of courage. Having a moral code making sure that he doesn't sometimes make a mistake casting judgment upon someone and always acting for the Soul society's interest. Through time, Chris started becoming more confident in his abilities enjoying the thrill of fighting against stronger opponents. Seeking improvement with each encounter, he constantly journeys in order to improve himself. Outside of battle, He's a calm, collective but easy-going man also having a romantic interest in some women. He's also admits to not being very smart at times and talented but he believes that these are obstacles for him to overcome. Chris has a sense of show mercy to his enemy or enemies in battle in his mind he believes everybody deserves a second chance to change their ways. Despite his neutral-kind nature, Chris can feel anger in cases of extreme turmoil, such as the death of friends even when someone murders many innocents needlessly.

Likes: Being defeated by a Noble Person, BadAss, Kindness, Caring, Women, Food, Power & Respect, Families Coming Together, Loyalty and Servitude,

Dislikes: Deception, Pain, Villains, Enemies, Family & Friends getting Hurt, Alcohol & Wine


CHARACTER APPEARANCE
Height: 5'8"
Weight: 190(lbs)pounds
Physical Traits: He's known to have very slim but muscular build for the solo training sessions almost looking more of an adult growing teenager. People have said that, he looks of combination of both asian and caucasian together because of his tiger-like facial features being his birthmarks. Known to have spiked blonde hair which is tie together of a japanese forehead protector bought a famous store. Having the nice blue eyes during his childhood but completely changed to a light blue color growing up. For clothing, Chris is seen wearing a some baggy black pants holding them is a unique belt with a japanese belt buckle on other times. He seen wearing some short black jeans for some unique or combat purposes. Wearing a white shirt and a black style uniform jacket wearing a shinigami red armband with the soul reaper's crest upon his left arm. On his feet, Chris wears some of black ankle-high boots, also reminiscent of Chinese influence.

For Jewelry, Around his neck is something called the Shikon Jewel known to be the jewel of four souls completely incase in rubies and diamonds. Representing the four lessons of power...(Wisdom, Friendship, Love and Courage)


THE COMBAT INFORMATION
General Fighting Style: In the past, Chris Yagami was weak in zanjutsu abilities but training with a wooden sword always trying to better his ability. Now a shinigami, Chris started improving more upon his zanjutsu abilities using it against within offense even at defense from months of determine hard work. After two years, Chris does have a great weakness of using hado kidou which can got completely out of control. He completely given upon Hado kido abilities about all of them. Yet having full use and control of using bakudo kido and some forbidden kido as well. Even though, He loves fighting and cherished his zanpakuto abilities which are needed to help to become something of a shinigami hero.

Still, Chris considers himself much more of an average fighter but a completely well trained warrior with focus and determination. With full contact and having no-nonsense attitude even though he's a renegade.
Strengths: Spiritual Energy, Spiritual Control Strength, Speed, Defense
Weaknesses: Hado Kidou, Forbidden Kidou, Reflexes, Durability, Weak Hakuda
Ability Name: Shadow Camouflage
Ability Description: The reiatsu within him warps light around Chris and projects a hologram of the wall behind it over top of the bent light, rendering him invisible. Whenever, Chris wants to get the upperhand on an enemy or when he wants to hide from an stronger opponent. Which is basically useless if the enemy has sensing powers. However, it is not perfect, as when the user moves, there will be a man-shaped, "bubble" in the air, and laser sights will be refracted by the field. It will disappear completely if it comes in contact with water of any kind.[Camouflage lasts for 2 posts]

Ability Name: Sage Mode
Ability Description: Known from many chi and magic users as "the acceptance of nature itself". By combining one's spiritual energy and natural energy can a person enter an enhanced nature state of enhanced abilities known as sage mode. A enhancement booster of good proportions unlike the evil version known to sinners as the Satsui no Hado. Unlike the evil one, Chris can enter sage increasing his physical abilities to a higher degree making the shinigami warrior stronger. This however had two modes which is Sage Mode and Perfect Sage mode that can make the shinigami into a deadly force. (This can be used once per thread.)
[Sage Mode boosts (Strength x 2, Speed x 2) for only 3 Posts. Needing a cooldown of about 8 Posts to completely recharge the power.]
[Perfect Sage Mode boosts (Strength x 3, Speed x 2.5) for only 5 Posts. Needing a cooldown of about 11 Posts to completely recharge the power.]


ZANPAKUTO
Sealed Appearance: Chris's zanpakuto is a black blood dipped katana; it is a something of a unique dark piece that looks as though it could be a very important weapon. The zanpakuto is a thing of beauty, from the tsuba (hand guard) and carved handle to the blade itself. The blade is highly polished and made of Stainless Steel. The white handle of the black demon katana like zanpakuto is carved in the shape of a wicked, red-eyed draconic demon that is gripping some sort of mysterious ball in its talons.
Zanpakutou Name: Myou Kyoukan
Zanpakutou Appearance: She is a mature, beautiful woman spirit in her late twenties. Myou has pure white, spiky hair. The hair is kept short on the sides and ponytail braided. The long strands hangs from the right side of her fringe down to her chest. Her eyes are light blue. She possesses quite an ample bosom. Myou has always been easily recognized by her skin tight bodysuits, tied up hairstyles, and demon protecting armor. Though she has always supported colored tights as a base for her outfits, her armor and hair accessories have been consistently upgraded throughout the spirit's years. But their have been times that Myou has been in different attires depending on the spirit's mood or whenever she wants to impress her master. In her different attire, her dark hair is let loose instead of being tied in its signature ponytail. In future encounters, Myou has on warrior inspired gauntlets, navy blue tights, and added fishnet elements to her primary costumes. The warrior huntress's alternate outfits usually consist of tight, stylish robes, headbands, as well as thigh high stockings or boots.
Spoiler:
Call Out Command: "Awaken and Thrive Myou Kyoukan"
Inner World: Myou's Inner world is almost like a three way combination gothic/satanic cemetery and with demonic front castle base. Inside the castle lies gigantic arena where the spirit can train her master to become stronger or where her master wants to improve Myou's shikai and bankai skills. The castle is demonic with black demonic bricks and demonic looking structure representing the gothic blackness within her dark soul. The cemetery has a number of tombstones with some of people that Aaron's had killed and some of friends that have died in battle. The gigantic arena covered in black and white.


SHIKAI
Appearance: The shikai of Myou Kyoukan, has a form that suits it’s dark warrior name. Taking the shape of large serrated scimitar roughly 5 feet in length and 3 inches in width. It bares a considerable weight and adding momentum to it destructive potential. Along its dark steel sides are small designs of little white wisps of flames streaming all the way to where a hand-guard should be present. It’s handle is merely wrapped tightly together by a dark crimson fabric, with a metal ring roughly 4 inches in diameter severing as the pommel to this malicious weapon
Abilities: Kazan Nobakabe(Volcanic Nova Wall): His Zanpakutō will lava reform itself into a large lava wall covering 20 feet area around him. Most shikai attacks and Kidō won't penetrate the wall they just be absorbed into the lava wall. Yet Stronger attacks could damage the shield wall and his zanpakutō reverts back into it's shikai state. The wall is a pure molten lava but durability isn't really full-proof after 2 posts the wall start turning back to normal. [The wall can break little by little by projectiles like cero. kido(hado) and other energy attacks.]

Kazan Yaibabatsu(Volanic Blade Attack): His blade will start glowing as it will start to absorbed fire particles circling around it charging up for an attack. Chris get into a fighting sword stance as his energy from the Zanpakutō as then his sword will start pulsating. Chris draw his Zanpakutō like he was getting ready to slash an enemy drawing it weapon pointing at the enemy. The blade will shoot out a fire large bladed energy projectile which is designed to hurt enemies and block certain attacks. The energy blade projectile is shaped almost like a large triangle with bladed spikes. Chris has noticed the projectile attack can't stand the power of much stronger abilities. [The Blade can also be smacked away by weapons, zanpakutos even kidou]

Kazan Heruhachiken(Volcano Hell Bee Sting): A technique when his Zanpakutō started producing flame created bees. They started circling the blade until then fused together with the blade as the sword started glowing crimson. The tip of the sword glows black almost the bee stinger. Then Chris unleashes a powerful thrust after lunging forward, plunging the equipped sword into an enemy. If the sword pierces the stomach the tip of the blade unleashed a bad burning sensation. But an enemy can dodge or block the attack with their speed ability.
Boosts: Strength x2, Defense x2, Sensing x1.5


BANKAI
New Name: Tek-Setta Myou Kyoukan Zashorenai
Appearance: In bankai, Chris is completely changed into armored power state which seemed full white with unique armor settings. While in bankai, The Zanpakuto is transformed into a double bladed spear weapon capable of dueling against one even many people. Having a height of 7'2" and a almost human weight of about 180(lbs)pounds. The armor also acts like an environment suit granting the shinigami much stronger abilities and stronger attack powers then shikai. Which, Chris took the name of Tekka Shinigami because the warrior looks more of a mecha warrior then a shinigami even arrancars called him "White Hollow Hero".
Abilities: Kazan Voltekka: This is his signature attack. When his mecha eyes starting to flash just once. This activates the shoulder cannons upon his shoulders which they unlock revealing an energy cannon on each shoulder they start gathering both air & spiritual energy powering up the energy cannon. Chris yells "Kazan Voltekka". The energy green cannons are fired which dish out having the same strength of arrancar's normal cero. [His shoulder cannons can be damaged though. But both shoulder cannons need to be activated before using the technique. Having a cooldown for  1 post.]

Kazan Raikouketa: The piercer technique is a strong spiral magma laser beam to hurt her enemies. The move is performed by touching the index and middle fingers of one hand to the forehead and charging enough energy to attack. Its speed changes to the spiritual energy of the person performing the move. When ready, the fingers are extended forward, and two thin magma laser beams are unleashed from the fingers. One remains straight while the other coils around the straight magma beam. The resulting hot beam is quite powerful, drilling through most targets, and exploding on the ones it can't. It can also be used with only one arm. The weakness is can be blocked/dodged easily. [Having a strength of cero x2. With a Cooldown of about 2 posts]

Kazan Enkouyari: Chris places his zanpakutō in front of him in a horizontal position as the tip of his zanpakutō starts generating a sphere of fire. After the required sum of energy is generated into the sphere then transforms into a long spear homing onto the enemy. Chris point his zanpakutō at the enemy the flame spear charges towards his opponent. The spear hits the target it explodes with a blast radius of 25 feet. which with enough power burning a enemy's flesh. It can leave some damage like second degree burns or worse. However the drawback is the attack can be stopped with a high ranked attacks like bankai and other stronger yet powerful attacks like Hadō, bakudo & gran rey cero attack. Yet the technique has a flaw if the spear is destroyed then the attack is worthless meaning, Chris will have to do it all over again [This has a cooldown of 6 posts if the technique is successfully]
Boosts: 3x Strength, 3x Speed, 3x Spiritual Pressure, 3x Senses


TOUKAI
New Name: Myou Bishamon Zashorenai
Appearance: In toukai, Chris is completely changed into super armored power state which seemed full pure white with unique mega armor settings. While in toukai, The zanpakuto is transformed into a super bladed spear weapon capable of dueling against one even many people. Having a height of 7'8" and a almost inhuman weight of about 270(lbs)pounds. The armor also acts like an environment suit granting the shinigami much stronger abilities.
Abilities: Kazan Tek-Voltekka: This is higher version of the Kazan Voltekka. When his mecha eyes starting to flash just once. This activates the shoulder cannons upon his shoulders which they unlock revealing an energy cannon on each shoulder they start gathering both air & spiritual energy powering up the energy cannon. Chris yells "Kazan Tek-Voltekka". The energy green cannons are fired which dish out having the same strength of a gran rey cero. [His shoulder cannons can be damaged though. But both shoulder cannons need to be activated before using the technique. Having a cooldown for 3 posts.]

Kazan Kashou-Voltekka: An super version to kazan voltekka. Chris Yagami started yelling and the super energy cannons in his shoulders and arms are activated. They all start drawing energy into them powering up the super energy cannons formed four air black balls started to form one black air ball. Chris gets into a stance yelling rage reforming the black ball and recreating it into a mega energy blast. Once this thing hits is leaves a giant explosion which can cause massive damage. An enemy must an very fast speed to dodge it. [The technique can be only performed once. Which can drain him completely because of the great amounts of spiritual pressure it uses. This has the strength of a strong Cero Oscuras x2]
Boosts: 4x Spiritual Pressure, 4x Zanjutsu, 4x Strength, 4x Speed, 4x Durability, 4x Endurance, 4x Senses


BACK-DROP
History: Chris was born within the Rukongai district with no memories of his family raised all alone by himself. He started helping people around town doing low paying jobs and helping sometimes with families, Chris had a pure heart. Being more of a hero to the people but other times seeing people on the streets with families no idea what happen. In those days, He felt a little sad with nobody to talk to about the whole situation about his family problems with so many questions. He started living everyday life in the Rukongai district living at home and getting to know his neighbors making a few members along the way. Everything was moving along....

It was strange though at nights, Chris felt a strange power it was Boogeyman or anything but it was somewhat protecting him. He couldn't explain it completely like a ghost-like guardian it didn't really matter to him. Weeks later, He started making some friends which felt pretty maybe people the young kid could talk to about his growing problems. He managed to stop a local gang from beating a girl finding out she was a part of royal clan. They heading to a place called the "Soul Society". He heard stories about that place but never really believed it.

Three years later, Everyone was talking about that Soul society garbage but Chris thought this might be something important. Still, It would mean he'll have to leave his home and his friends at the time he refused until months later people talked about an entrance exam. Thinking about it some more maybe this would be a golden opportunity to get some questions answered about his past. Finally decided to leave the Rukongai district and enter the Seireitei for the entrance exam following the crowd the people to the academy. Meeting people called shinigami hearing about the high ranks of the Gotei 13, Chris sat down to the instructors and took the exam.

He failed the first time and then was kicked out and had to wait a week before trying again calling him a knucklehead for failing. People started laughing at him but it came time for his second attempt which going through the academy procedures again but this time doing well. One of the new students thought he cheated, Chris was ready to punch the sonuvabitch until the big cheese showed up. The Captain Commander, Chris sat back down seeing this was serious as the commander started talking to new academy and role of a soul reaper. He thought it was boring but the commander was serious nothing the recruit could do but listen and follow through with his instructors.

Academy instructors were pointing at Chris looking at him with great importance...Chris didn't like it. They felt his high spiritual pressure feeling this was unbelievable. The only problems from Chris's academy training he couldn't perform hado kido well it would always explode on him. Watching so many others to it well his instructors thought kido would be his only weakness...Chris hated that scolding and the laughing. He started training hard to get a handle on his kido abilities finally controlling bakudo kido but not hado. It didn't make sense as the student was wondering what the hell is his problem with hado kido abilities thinking this would be his downfall.

With difficulty, Chris managed to get through most of the trials on the academy test then fourth exam everybody was given a break. But Chris was assigned to a team because the final exam was coming up soon where the student met two more recruits with the same determination as him. The two teammates wanted to pass the final exam as he did this was a great importance to them then three days passed and the final exams were beginning. The team was set and headed out to kill some hollows, Chris wanted to kill these things and be done with but this require teamwork to help members of the squad. These hollows were coming the team got into as one of them struck hard, Chris managed to block the attack. The team came up with a plan and proceeded to put into motion as one of getting the hollow attention. The other was firing off Hado #33. Chris had the chance to slaying which he did that was something called teamwork. It felt pretty good too helping each other the team started killing a few hollows until the final exam was finally completed. The team passed with flying colors understanding what the lessons of teamwork brings (honor, respect and friendship).

Chris graduated from academy from student into soul reaper in time growing a strong zanpakuto naming it Myou Kyoukan. After graduating, He saw how the families were proud of their kids becoming Soul reapers for a higher calling still the new soul reaper would love to know. What happened with his parents??? Only time will tell that answer.
Side Notes: His bankai is Tekkaman Blade, I do apologize about the first history. Though I wanted Chris to be Tekkaman Blade and Menma(Sirhc) to be Tekkaman Evil a lot of spelling errors and op moves.
Roleplay Sample: The Seireitei didn't know much about just that the killer had been eliminated but they wanted to find out what happen to a certain squad member. Chris couldn't not like this and not after the shocking revelation of this arrancar's identity before even considering on going back the shinigami needed to find out the truth. Confronting the espada would be the hardest challenge known to anyone but questions needed to be answered and Chris wanted revenge on the arrancar's creator. After doing a final search on the arrancar's clothing only one name seemed to be his only lead someone by the name Szayel Apollo Granz. Heading into the heart of Las Noches and finding this espada scientist on his own but what then so many questions. After sneaking into Las Noches, Chris finally saw this scientist making some shinigami duplicate from a cloning tank. He finally demanded to know what was going on here, Szayel thought the subject was returning back from his mission. The shinigami thought that was right the arrancar looked exactly like him this might be his only chance to get the information from him.

Szayel was given the whole rundown to him one last time but after explaining the master plan there was talk about the destruction switch. With great interest, Chris managed to activate the destruction switch destroying the clones as the scientist wondered what happen. He was wondering if the clone was defective and showing signs of rebellion. Szayel realized his hair was yellow the creation's hair was black this was original but how did he not know.

Chris managed to escape destroying the cloning labs, Szayel managed to get to the shinigami and confront the bastard. Szayel was about to use some technique on him but Chris was about to enter Sage mode and defeat the arrancar. They somehow he was teleported out of Las Noches and even Szayel was wondering what happened then he was back within the Rukongai district. Why was he back here???? He wondered.

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Okay. Gonna take a very close look at everything. Not gonna be nice about it either.



How I feel about your name and history.:

Name: Chris Makishima
Alias: Tekka-Shinigami
Real Age: 20 Years Old
Phys. Age: Early Beginning 20s

You share a 'clan' with an 'unmentioned captain'. Your character's face claim is Naruto. The only other Makishima I know is Akane,
whose face claim is Kushina, Naruto's mother. Not only that, but your character, in your history, proceeds to graduate the Academy somehow while barely knowing anything about his Zanpakuto and trains after graduating in secret. In addition to this, he gets caught, not having been assigned to a squad, and is as far as I can tell.... "a wanted man" for trying to learn how to use his powers. Then, an unranked, fresh graduate of the Academy, heads off into HUECO FUCKING MUNDO, not only happens to survive,
but finds a fuckmothering Arrancar that just so happens to look just like fucking Menma and then survives a fight with said arrancar in Segunda Etapa (0-5 tier or higher.) But... the fucker lets him go. And this kid, Chris, decides that he's just gonna chill in HUECO FUCKING MUNDO, as a rogue shinigami. But wait he also hopes someone comes to find him, so I suppose he's not a rogue afterall. I mean he's not technically wanted for anything, we run a system, not a fucking zoo....

So let me get this straight. You're 20. As a spiritual being. You have already graduated the Academy, become strong enough to fight a 0-5, and self-declared yourself a rogue because you think you're going to get in trouble. Okay then. I have nothing.

In regards to Shunpo: Don't bother listing an ability that literally everyone has.

In regards to Sage Mode: I don't care who you are. You are NOT getting boosts of any kind as a personal ability, especially not x5 and x6 boosts. On top of that, if you're going to 'use' something so powerful, that it takes 11 posts to cool down,
it's gonna be a once per thread ability. Not approving this ever.



In regards to Kazan Nobakabe (Volcanic Nova Wall): I don't care if it's a lava wall. I don't care if it can block Shikais.
However, if it stops ANY ability, it should have some sort of max durability, or some sort of breakage if it's able to absorb say... a Cero.
We'll talk about this later.


Kazan Yaibabatsu(Volanic Blade Attack): So you're telling me you have an energy based ability that's designed to hurt people? Cool. But it can be smacked away by a Zan, a weapon, or a Kidou... Okay. Sure. You do that.

Kazan Heruhachiken(Volcano Hell Bee Sting): A technique when his Zanpakutō started producing flame created bees. They started circling the blade until then fused together with the blade as the sword started glowing crimson. The tip of the sword glows black almost the bee stinger. Then Chris unleashes a powerful thrust after lunging forward, plunging the equipped sword into an enemy. If the sword pierces the stomach the tip of the blade unleashed a bad burning sensation inside the enemy's bloodstream. Kinda like a mini sharpnel explosion which the enemy joints will start to weaken for a while(2 posts).. But an enemy can dodge or block the attack which the enemy will still fell 50% of the attack because the tip will still unleash a explosion like a super grenade-like bomb.

I'll let you know when I can actually entirely understand what you're trying to say. Until then, causing pain on contact is fine, but you are not deciding what happens to someone's joints, nor are you going to guarantee a 50% effect auto hit. No, just no.

Kazan Shunpo: A new form of shunpo when from blaster rockets granting the mecha shinigami a stronger high speed movement ability. Not only that it also gives the bankai warrior almost the ability to fly even glide towards using a green flame energy. He wanted to train hard to be like a shinigami captain with this ability. Training with his higher shunpo abilities to become a better practitioner almost a focus shinigami or prize fighter.

So you have a super-shunpo. Here's an idea. No. You're literally taking something that is the fastest speed in the game,
strapping rockets to it because somehow your shinigami who need I remind you is supposed to be Naruto has now become a fucking Gundam. No. Remove this. It's useless.


Kazan Voltekka: This is his signature attack. When his mecha eyes starting to flash just once. This activates the shoulder cannons upon his shoulders which they unlock revealing an energy cannon on each shoulder they start gathering both air & spiritual energy powering up the energy cannon. Chris yells "Kazan Voltekka". The energy green cannons are fired which dish out having the same strength of arrancar's normal cero but more.

I mean, this is fine. It's a generic Cero-y ability. I just have one question, does Chris say the incantation inside the mecha shinigami gundam cockpit, or does it play out loud through some futuristic sound system? By the way, Cero has a cooldown of 1 post.

Kazan Raikouketa: The piercer technique is a strong spiral magma laser beam to hurt her enemies. The move is performed by touching the index and middle fingers of one hand to the forehead and charging enough energy to attack. Its speed changes to the spiritual energy of the person performing the move. When ready, the fingers are extended forward, and two thin magma laser beams are unleashed from the fingers. One remains straight while the other coils around the straight magma beam. The resulting hot beam is quite powerful, drilling through most targets, and exploding on the ones it can't. It can also be used with only one arm. The weakness is can be blocked or dodged easy enough if the enemy had faster speed/defense. It has the same strength and weakness as cero burning flame sort of way.

I'm confused, is this a Gurren Lagaan reference or a Special Beam Cannon? It's also a second Cero. By the way, Cero cooldown is 1 post. By the way, if it moves, it can be dodged. Just a thought.

Kazan Enkouyari: Chris places his Zanpakutō in front of him in a horizontal position as the tip of his Zanpakutō starts generating a sphere of fire after the required sum of energy is generated into the sphere transforms into a long spear homing onto the enemy , Chris point his zanpakutō at the enemy the flame spear charges towards his opponent. The spear explodes leaving a massive explosion which with enough power can disable a person the giant flames of the explosion actually attack the nervous system and burning a enemy's flesh. It can leave a great high amount of damage depending of the strength of the volcanic flames it can completely burn a person or leave a deadly violent flame burn which can be healed. However the drawback is the attack can be stopped with a high ranked level attacks like bankai and other stronger yet powerful attacks like Hadō, higher bakudo & stronger gran rey cero attack. Yet the technique has a flaw if the spear is destroyed then the attack is worthless meaning, Chris will have to do it all over again.

Sooo this is a Cero made of fire. That explodes when the explosion explodes. But it's also a spear. Wait... wait a second. That red stuff?
No. You are not disabling anybody, especially not with some magical flame gimmick that knows how to kill someone's entire nervous system. I could understand second degree burns, but come on.


Kazan RyokChoyo: Chris swings his zanpakutō above him for a few seconds as a current of red magma energy starts to form. He then stabs his spear zanpakutō in the ground which the ground starts to burn as his spiritual pressure around him. Everything will start burning around him slowly almost reaching 260 meter radius putting everything into a burning holocaust. Then a red ball starts to form then the shinigami grabs the red ball as he squeezes it everything of the radius explodes sending an burning hot sensations to enemy or enemies around the radius. Yet the problem with this ability is that he can only use it once a battle the drawback is only used a portion of his spiritual pressure is taken from him during a deadly effect of the massive explosion. The other drawback is it takes one post to charge the sword if anybody hits him the attack power is reduced.

So everything within a 260 meter radius (that is a 520 meter diameter, mind you) is engulfed in a holocaust. Where the jews went, I have no idea but they're gone now. An entire SUN appears on the field, then the sun explodes. Assuming we're not already frying to a crisp from the fact that the sun is in our faces, and there's a holocaust going on too, we're also getting hit with more burning. And the drawback is you use energy to cast this and people can no longer detect you? And all we have to do to avoid this at all is just... hit you.

No. Denied.




Soooo... onto Toukai. I can say this now, you are probably never even going to see what your Toukai does. Ever. Hate to shit on it, but seriously.
This is not gonna work.


New Name: Myou Bishamon Zashorenai
Appearance: In toukai, Chris is completely changed into super armored power state which seemed full pure white with unique mega armor settings. While in toukai, The zanpakuto is transformed into a super bladed spear weapon capable of dueling against one even many people. Having a height of 7'8" and a almost inhuman weight of about 270(lbs)pounds. The armor also acts like an environment suit granting the shinigami much stronger abilities and stronger attack powers then bankai.

I know this isn't an ability. But you're just a bigger Gundam.
You're also a Shinigami, therefore inhuman, and the whole stronger than bankai thing is moot because this is a Toukai release.


Kazan TekShunpo: A higher form of shunpo when from blaster rockets granting the mecha shinigami a very high speed movement ability. Not only that it also gives the bankai warrior almost the ability to fly even glide towards using a burning green flame energy. He wanted to train hard to be like a shinigami captain with this ability. Training with his newer shunpo abilities to become a better practitioner almost a focus shinigami or prize champion.

So this is a super-super-shunpo. With bigger rockets. Oh and you can fly. That's cute. Also, he wanted to train hard with this abil- If you used anything at this point you would already be a Captain. Remove this, it's just as useless as the last one. You can walk on air, and practically 'fly' anyways, what good does this even do you?

Kazan Tek-Voltekka: This is higher version of the Kazan Voltekka. When his mecha eyes starting to flash just once. This activates the shoulder cannons upon his shoulders which they unlock revealing an energy cannon on each shoulder they start gathering both air & spiritual energy powering up the energy cannon. Chris yells "Kazan Tek-Voltekka". The energy green cannons are fired which dish out having the same strength of arrancar's gran rey cero but more.

The magical upgrade. It's now a Gran Rey Cero. Just Green.
By the way, a Gran Rey Cero is a 3 post cooldown. So your magical Gundam shoulder-cannons will have to wait for 3 posts.


Kazan Kashou-Voltekka: An super version to kazan voltekka bolt. Chris Makishima started yelling and the super energy cannons in his shoulders and arms are activated. They all start drawing energy into them powering up the super energy cannons formed four air black balls started to form one black air ball. Then suddenly super nova starts and energy starts forming within him, then Chris starts yelling. Chris gets into a stance jumping into air unleashing a giant massive energy spear beam. Once this thing hits is leaves a giant tri-explosion which destroys anything in it path. An enemy must an very fast speed to dodge it if blocked the the attack will dish out about two forbidden kidou abilities. (Because from the immense power it has the mecha warrior can only use this technique only twice per thread. With a cooldown of 8 posts)

Your body becomes so hot and dense with energy, your body acheives a supernova state, which would mean that your body would explode, then you'd be dead because your molecules would expend themselves across the known universe. An 8 post cooldown isn't enough when you're dead.

Kazan Shinsei Voltekka: It has been known to be the true power of Kazan Voltekka because of it deadly power of pure destruction. The only way he can use the attack is if this was his very last resort, if he chooses to or if the enemy forces have defeated all his comrades. Chris can only use this once if used a second time he'll start gaining memory loss and extreme fatigue to his body. He starts the attack like a regular Kashou Voltekka stance. But suddenly his leg shoulder cannons are activated forming six air bubbles and pure energy bombs. They all form into one giant nova energy bomb which he starts yelling turning the giant and massive bomb into a huge energy blast mega wave. [Because from the deadly immense power it has the mecha warrior can only use this technique only once per thread. This is a final technique and it can drain him completely.]

Wait, there's another final attack? ... Sure, let's take a look. I mean you're dead, what harm can you actually do?

-This can only be used once. Okay, I like that.
-If used a second time, he'll lose his memory. Oh. Okay. Well what happened to once? I mean this is a final attack, right?
-insert redtext from above... So what does that translate too? Secondly,
where are you even getting all the Reiryoku for this? Is there a backup generator somewhere in there? I mean, you cause a holocaust, blow up a fucking sun, blow yourself up, then there's something in the way of "oh btw I survived and have an even stronger attack than blowing myself up"

D.E.N.I.E.D.


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on Sun Jun 25, 2017 10:05 am

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Bumping

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on Sun Jul 23, 2017 2:06 am

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bump again

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on Sun Jul 23, 2017 2:41 am

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Listen, I'm going to say this once. I have never intended to tear an app into shreds like I did this one. Not gonna apologize for that. But in regards to the current situation of this app, I refuse to approve it until I see some form of activity on your other characters that have already been approved. You have 27 posts, and 4 of them are this thread. Before I tore into this app, your post count was 10. 2 of which were on this app.

I'm not trying to be a major asshole here. I'm also not trying to goad people into thinking they can have every blessed thing they want on this site just because it adheres to our rules. Start being active and actually posting instead of hanging around in chat and pretending to be online for 20 minutes a day.


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on Sun Jul 23, 2017 3:54 am

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Seconding that motion.


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on Sat Jul 29, 2017 11:10 am

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I think I've proven that my activity is really moderate. Seriously two people with one of them being a sinner really nothing has my characters interest into joining other threads. War thread isn't going to cut it.

Nobody asked me to join threads or PM me to join.....Yes, I'm active.
Considering past events....You know what I mean Noz.

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