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#1 Balthazar RaVakko [Completed] on Sun May 28, 2017 9:49 am

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THE SINNER APPLICATION
Name: Balthazar RaVakko
Former Human Name: Trevor RenGouki
Other Aliases: Lord Balthazar, Lord Azure, The Azure Knight, Bale, Belial
Apparent Age: Looks Old/Demonic (33 Years Old)
True Age: 789 Years Old
Sex: Male
Personality: He has both calm yet violent demeanor when it comes fighting enemies the important thing is not to lose his cool in battle. For the most, Bale's human memories being fragmented the man considers violence, destruction and death as living life. With everything gone, Nothing else matters to him now maybe something if it should benefit him or change his mind enough. The thought of improving his power is always something to think about just another day someone could be better than him and that worries his dark mind. To improve his dark nature to grind his enemies into the dust making sure there no longer a threat to him. If defeated, He thinks revenge is always the answer the chance of paying back that with interest is so much sweeter to him.

Lord Azure does believe in keep your friends close and keep your enemies closer still people do surprise him. Almost aspire him to become better than or close to perfect finding deadly ways into increasing either his power or his fighting skill. Seeing either his friends or enemies fighting just another optional choice to fight alongside even befriend them. It really a flip of a coin to the violent warrior which are Neutral-Dark hearted with benefits or purely Evil Incarnate to his allies.

His anger is immense to due to his past thinking upon key moments of pain and suffering just really nourishing his rage. Drowning out the fears from his mind and fighting more like a ruthless monster without any restriction. In this state, Balthazar thinking is that of a hell-seeking tyrant craving destruction even violence everywhere even if he dies in the process. To make his vengeance a reality which the people that he hates the most that they aren't safe at all from his wrath.


CHARACTER APPEARANCE
Height: 6'0
Weight: 189.1lbs(259.8 lbs in Nightmare Armor)

Physical Traits: Being sent from hell most of his human appearance was completely burned in the satanic fires. Then his body was torn apart and rebuild into a more sinful form looking almost like a demonic warrior. His skin is complete tanned to burned style way but having a muscular build having both red eyes which can be changed into demonic yellow eyes. Trevor's hair once brown was pulled from his head as witch sinners restored it into a pure dark red color of blood. To show his loyalty, Trevor had his right arm sacrificed burning it an unknown level of hell. Completely replaced from the satanic fires, Lord Balthazar's arm is now a demonic berserk arm having a three finger claw hand.

He's seen on having dark knight armor after years in hell. Known as the Nightmare armor, Lord Azure thought it would give off a certain fear to this enemies. Making it for defending himself in battle and showing the sinner is purely ruthless in combat. Once he had in complete black color representing that he was the Black Knight. After being revived as a sinner, Lord Azure had it remodeled in dark blue.


WEAPONS
Weapons: Soul Edge: The dark lord after Trevor swore to become evil in his actions and allow his heart to seek vengeance and revenge. Allowed the creation of one deadly sword from the depths of hell. The Soul Edge sword was formed from the bodies of countless shinigami warriors broken down and forge by a sinner blacksmith. An unique thing of the evil sword is that of an animate eye in the middle as the demon sword is alive evil weapon. After Lord Azure's revival the sword started getting better becoming more of an pure evil sword with new demonic flesh upon the blunt side with "The Evil Eye of Sin" in the blade's hilt.
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Known to be his best sword been known to his enemies as the Butcher Blade. A two handed durable to handle itself against zanpakutos almost being as strong as the sinner himself.

Monster Killer: A mega bowie knife made completely from metal.  Also Infused Brass Knuckles into for slash and bash. The last weapon...He remembers having when the sinner was once human. It was given to him as a gift for finishing a hit. His mafia family rewarded him as a token of acceptance into the family.
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Made to be completely sharp by sharpening it down every day.

Ability Name: Ranzig
Description: Sinner's version to a shinigami's shunpo technique. Allowing Lord Azure to move faster at a high speed. Still, He doesn't like using it unless it necessary or an emergency.


FIGHTING STYLE
General Fighting Style: His fighting is nothing more than ferocious really attacking at the ready. Fighting at his full potential without a care in the world having much of an offensive berserk style fighting with weapon and pure strength. The man loves using weapons the one that aid him in battle and the ones that can cripple and completely injure his opponents. His items of choice: Large Bladed & Zweihander Swords for handling zanpakutos and other weapons fighting one or groups of people at a time his first weapon of choice handling his enemies. After discovering his desire for more blood from his enemies the sinner desired using two handed weapons instead of one handed weapons. Although, When the situation calls or fighting in rage perhaps maybe he'll used one handed weapons for fighting people but rarely.

Fighting with a berserker fury wondering how much blood will be drawn from him or his opponent. Seeing blood gives him a certain focus meaning the battle is becoming serious this is where the man becomes more of a deadly skilled fighter. Focusing upon more of enemy's weaknesses, ways of countering them and how hard to hurt them the most.
Strengths: Spiritual Power, Strength, Sensing, Durability, Zanjutsu
Weaknesses: Spiritual Control, Agility, Hand to Hand, Defense
Boosts: Strength x4, Durability x4, Spiritual Power x3, Zanjutsu x3, Sensing x 3
SINNER POWERS

Ability Name: Satsui No Hado{Night Terror mode}
Description: This something of a enhancement booster to some sinners as the intense rage of violence. A purely dark power rooted upon the darker aspects of human instinct the desire of bloodshed, violence and ultimately survival. However, Balthazar embraces the power differently allowing the chaos power to completely consume making him like a demon in his actions. Craving more blood from his victims and more violence from the actions he'll take in battle. He'll start growling and then he'll be completely empower with red energy wanting more violence feeling his muscles grow stronger. Lord Azure's eyes will turn pitch black meaning the dark energy has consumed him in mind and body. This enhancement booster of chaos red darkness that temporary increases his power and strength. [Satsui No Hado Empowerment (Strength x 5, Reiatsu x 4) for only 3 Posts. Cooldown: 8 Posts]

Ability Name: Magic Materialization
Description: It took many years to learn this completely, Lord Azure had to do jobs to obtain this. Concentrated magic of where the sinner can create things out of thin air. This takes both willpower and focus to use the sinner's power and breaking it down into manipulation process. Then focusing upon and item, object, clothing or weapon of choice. Thinking about it and trying to materialize it from the sinner's magic. From this power, Lord Azure can create clothing, weapons or even food for himself this really depends on how powerful he is.
[Clothing: He can create instantly.]
[Items & Objects: Mere thought but the sinner must be focus on it which take a post.]
[Weapon Empowered: A weapon empowering with a red flame aura. {F.Aura has strength as Cero} C.Down: 1 Post]

Ability Name: Volcano Blaze
Description: A focused lava blast from hell; Balthazar forms a energy ball placing spiritual energy into it. Once charged it produces flame energy then released it takes the size of a red molten lava ball leaving magma trails from it. However, Volcano blaze having the speed and the strength of an arrancar's cero. Yet, It has the same shape of an medicine ball. It can be shot from his hands or his mouth. [Cooldown: 1 Post]

Ability Name: Genocide Hell Buster
Description: Augmented form of Volcano Blaze; Balthazar placing more power into the attack. Producing a chain reaction within the energy ball which actually explodes releasing an red hot lava energy wave from his hand. Almost feeling like and enemy's skin melting under lava itself. But it has the same strength to Cero Oscarus which his arm is seen glowing after the attack. [Cooldown: 4 Posts]

Ability Name: Inferno Hellblazer
Description: The final form of Volcano Blaze; Balthazar will start by getting angry as blood start to drip from his fingertips. He'll start forming an energy ball within his hand as the blood is absorbed into the energy ball. The blood travels inside the center producing a energy vent as lava starts emitting almost like a flame aura. Once charged the energy sphere grows bigger to the size of an giant granite sphere glowing completely black. Lord Azure will release the energized lava sphere as red flames emit from the attack almost like a banshee's cry. Once the the attack hits the enemy it hit like a complete bomb having a blast radius of just 60 feet. The bomb attack has the strength of Hado #80; blowing up in a big explosion.  [Charged: 3 Posts; Cooldown: 6 Posts]

Ability Name: Hell Slasher
Description: Bathazar will create a flame energy ball within his hand and clenches as the flame energy emits from it. Whenever using swords/claw hand it starts by imbuing it with flame energy as particles of lava will begin gathering together. Once charged it energy will begin covering the sword or his claws with a dark red flame aura. Either with his claws or sword, Lord Azure does a single slash releasing a very strong condense wave of dark orange spiritual pressure. The attack leaves very small traces of lava which begins turned into an acid started burning slowly upon the ground. It takes focus and spiritual energy to create the condense lava energy wave from long hours of training. The red chainsaw version of the Getsuga Tensho, having the same strength and speed of a Gran Rey cero. [Cooldown: 3 Posts]

Ability Name: Pure Hellstorm
Description: A final technique to bring forth destruction upon the world. The technique starts as blood will begin dripping from his fingerprints. Focusing his spiritual pressure into his one hand slamming it upon the ground his blood begins entering the ground. By focusing his spiritual pressure into the ground creating a certain hotspot that continues to build up. Bale's spiritual pressure actually dissolves into the earth actually connects with the magma at the earth core slowly manipulates the little traces of magma. Which then, Bale's spiritual pressure starts erupting from the ground create a strong tremor. Creating about a volcanic meteorite made of hot molten lava with his spiritual pressure, Bale uses a form of telekinesis. Allowing him to control/manipulate the Giant Volcanic Meteorite either to attack the enemy. Once a Volcanic Boulder hits a target it explodes with a blast radius of 50 meters. As traces of volcanic ash emits from the explosion. The Volcanic Meteorite having the pure strength of Hado #90. [Charged: 4 Posts; Cooldown: 7 Posts]


BACK-DROP
History: His past is unclear even to him but his childhood was turning point of where his abusive father. Always wanted him to go down the evil path showing the young boy the path of violence which started him upon him on a very dark path. Starting crimes at a young age stealing from the rich and giving to himself which brought in a lot of money starting a criminal empire in the process. This led to some deadly business deals where innocent people got caught in the crossfire and dying in the process. Nothing was safe from his greed of money but little did he know his father had other plans for his son. Trevor was growing into power too quickly and few friends were paid off to befriend the youngster which was working. The plan was to execute Trevor but fate something else in store after graduating from high school with the best grades.

After some drug deals and gang shootouts, Trevor wanted out of the criminal empire that he helped his father create. Enough was enough too much blood and death upon his hands really this wasn't a decision for him to make but someone made it for him. Someone had sent a few thugs to attack his home and his kill his pet dog as a sign of sending a message to him. As a sign of revenge, Trevor hunted down two people that we're made men that sent red flags and turmoil to the vast empire. The big bosses finally decided Trevor has had enough of violence and bloodshed leaving the group with a sizeable amount of money of a billionaire range. But, He still needed to keep a low profile even thought finally the man was going to live a peaceful life leaving the criminal life behind. No more guns and no more hits just living on his own and normal yet typical life for the guy but something was missing.

Trevor did some major job work after finding an unique house for himself but things started getting difficult. People were asking questions about his money wondering why the man ha so much his low profile wasn't working. But maybe something else might work going to college which might keeping people on his back for a long while making friends wasn't difficult either. Having good grades and studying to further his knowledge helps bring friend element when it is least expected. But bullies were known to be here in the college as well the higher ups just bullying people as long they didn't bother him. Hoping his criminal methods won't be used. But something was happened a group of people after years of being bullied came up with a deadly plan.

Some friends managed to take him to a party a bunch of people were having a good time no one knew the fruit punch was spiked. Then everybody was chained to the ground by a leg handcuff something was wrong here. Some people in costumes started making their intentions known  cold hearted revenge for years being bullied suffering a fate worse than death itself. One of them said "Consider this the Final......And tell yourself what did I do to get here?" Trevor was shocked the way these people got unspeakable revenge going through deadly pain, horrow and agony. After a few deaths, Trevor was next wondering why?? these we're his friends why??? but one of them stops Dane saying this guy didn't do anything to them. Dane didn't care this one was going to example to bullies after years of harassment and pain his vendetta is set in his mind. The asshole pulled a shotgun pointing at his friend, Trevor swore he would come back from hell and make them all pay. Dane was laughing thinking he couldn't do nothing and in a fit of rage saying "I like to see to try, Goodbye Trevor".....Dane shot Trevor in the head thinking this fool was a joke.

At that moment.....Trevor descended downward into hell with his skin burning and landing upon a burning rocks. Wondering what part of hell was this getting up was a problem because the moment he entered the man felt his soul being devoured. When it was devoured the human felt every injustice and evil crime that he ever committed the man and it was maddening. Then hearing a voice "I have a bargain for you......Serve me well and you get a new body and soul for your vengeance". Trevor didn't care at that moment the man would take anything to make relentless pain and torment stop at any cost. He agreed to the Horned Demon's terms as a hole opened and Trevor fell into a tree growing inside the tree being reborn again. A huge sap fell upon the ground and Trevor started clawing out from it as he was breathing but something was gone his soul. This was just great  getting his new soul was completely difficult decided to worked hard for his new masters now with no failure. In time, Trevor started earning a reputation for his new violent nature killing demons and kept working to increase his body and strength gaining the name Balthazar the Violent. He started learning new abilities from other sinners from the depths of hell and started making himself powerful in the process. After enough jobs, servitude and missions,.....Balthazar was granted a new soul having his body to be rejuvenated and alive once more. Able to return back to the world of the living with one thing on his mind just revenge upon on his former friends. Killing Dane was the most important thing, He found out years had past it felt like an eternity down there but his revenge is what fueled him.

Something caught his attention....Dane was a quincy a honorable one receiving an award his outcasts can suffer later. This was most important a bunch of groups were there soul reapers, humans, quincies and maybe a few bounts. Everybody was dressed for the occasion for the event. He was ready to kill Dane and everybody until the sinner saw something the quincy wasn't alone. Balthazar realized three more people we're alive the remaining friends that acte on Dane's behalf however. It was going to be a bloodbath until, He realized something it was too easy to kill them the sinner wanted them to suffer forever. The best way of his revenge was turning their very families against them and went the time was right strike them down. One by one they felt they used their quincy powers providing a good fight but the sinner overpowered them. However, Balthazar was saving the best for last however the sinner wasn't going to kill Dane's family realizing the wife and daughter we're having problems with him. He used their feelings against him admitting to what he did in the past. In months time, Balthazar actually ended a father and daughter relationship the sinner wasn't done the wife was next planting the seeds of evil. Tricking her with some manipulation Dane's wife finally learned what a monster Dane was and after years of love they got a divorce. Dane was destroyed and it was perfect timing as the sinner waited for a right opportunity at a local party for the quincy was heartbroken. He tracked him and waited some hours, Dane finally went to the bathroom and then it was finally time to end this once and for all. Dane was crying as Balthazar locked the door saying something "Consider this the Final......And tell yourself what did I do to get here?" The quincy pissed his pants looking it was impossible but Dane knew who is it and scaring the fuck out of him. Waiting years for this one moment sacrificing everything that he once was to get to this certain point to exact revenge on his former friend. Balthazar RaVakko killed the quincy in a sheer rage but while the former friend but while his former friend was dying. The sinner whispering yet claiming the quincy's greatest fear wasn't over yet it was just beginning "Don't worry, I'll be taking good care of them the honeymoon will be my greatest birthday present". Balthazar broke out the window started a new chapter of life....Trevor Rengouki was dead but his revenge lives on being the new father and husband to Dane's family. They say revenge is a dish best serve cold however when you  have a chance at revenge and the opportunity to complete humiliate them forever in the worse way it so satisfying.
Side Notes: Trevor's death was a scene taken from "The Final" 2010 movie. Not actually what happened in the movie but something made up.
Roleplay Sample: Coming back here was a trip because everything has changed then before when he could get away with stuff. Things have changed with these new laws and rules for the city meaning a demon sinner would have to be careful. After working so hard to reclaim what he lot it going to be so fucking hard to get that all back it not like before. When he could ask his father for help anymore the man knew that guy is good and gone meaning to make a name for himself again. Trevor could let his enemies and those outcast bastards know he was alive killing Dane was a demonic blessing just sending a message to the outcast fan base. He was back with a vengeance who knows if any of them knew that he has returned from death itself but the berserker was going to bide his time waiting for the right moment. Then when they think their safe when nothing can bother them in a instance then their new lives and free from pain and suffering. He'll strike putting the fear of death back into their hearts everyday would be evil moment to fear something. Basically to give them something to be scared of but really thinking about they maybe in their personal hells already without him lifting a finger.  He had a new body which was good let them call him a freak still his revenge was met with pure bloody vengeance but that was just one. So many more to go before this demon can rest maybe munch on something called popcorn and enjoy the show.

But who should start on next after stealing Dane's belongings finding something called a cell-phone looking the fool's friends. This was going to fun after all think of the possibilities of what he could do to that bastard's friends no killing them would be way too easy. Destroying the image of their friend and ending their relationships that would be most satisfying to him. Now which one of them to pick they were a female would promising but who.....Tyra sounds interesting ...ohhhh his girlfriend this was going to be good.

"Trevor????" Someone said and everything stop at that moment who the hell but sinners could know who he was. "Someone saw me returning back from hell unless it a soul reaper or a quincy that caught me" He thought.

He was still under his hood and slowly turns around looking who the hell this person was but it was someone he knew.....how is this possible.

"Abigail........" He thought.

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#2 Re: Balthazar RaVakko [Completed] on Mon Jun 05, 2017 12:49 pm

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#3 Re: Balthazar RaVakko [Completed] on Tue Jun 06, 2017 6:43 pm

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Well, let's get started.

Strengths: Spiritual Power, Spiritual Control, Weapon Mastery, Strength, Durability, Stamina, Speed
Weaknesses: Some Bankai Powers, Hado Kidou, Ice Based Attacks, Holy Water, Blessed Bullets, Cero

None of these weaknesses are actual weaknesses. If you still want your character to essentially be vulnerable to any sort of energy attack and all these other things, that's fine, but the weakness section of your app is specifically designated for what your character is NOT good at doing. That on top of having 7 strengths. If you can find 6-7 actual weaknesses to balance that out, go for it.

Ability Name: Satsui No Hado
Description: This something of a enhancement booster to some sinners as the intense rage of violence. A purely dark power rooted upon the darker aspects of human instinct the desire of bloodshed, violence and ultimately survival. He'll start growling and then he'll be completely empower with red energy wanting more violence. This enhancement booster of chaos red darkness that temporary increases his power and strength by 30% percent.

I believe our 'temporary stat boost' caps off at around x5 or x6, not an additional 30%. So for example, say you were at x8 total? (x2 from strength and x4 from sinner boosts.) 30% of that is an additional 2-3 levels, and we can only extend them so far without applying repercussions. Maximum boost without penalty is x5, if you want x6, then you're going to have to tax yourself in soe notable way.

Ability Name: Tyrant Blast
Ability Name: Tyrant Genocide

Just be aware that all abilities need a cooldown. This includes Cero and Gran Rey Cero clones..

Ability Name: Sonido
Description: An arrancar technique of where they could move at a high speed movement almost producing a certain sound to it. Which is known to be the same to an soul reaper's shunpo or an quincy's hirenkyaku. A technique belonging to arrancar; Trevor had to take years to master it completely. Learning it from arrancar that he killed.
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Ability Name: Bala
Description: Bala is an Arrancar alternative to Cero. The technique hardens the user's Spiritual Pressure and fires it like a bullet. Although it is weaker than a normal Cero, it moves about twenty times faster and can be fired at a much higher rate, but the damage is much the same. Stronger Arrancar can also fire a more powerful Bala, while retaining its twenty-fold speed.

Okay, I know you can do better than this. We literally cannot allow you to have the 'exact' racial abilities just because you saw someone use them. You can however, get away with making clone-type abilities like you did for tyrants.

Ability Name: Magic Materialization

As Written, it's fine. Just don't do something stupid with it like oh say.... drop a 20 ton weight on someone's head.
The staff will be looking out for stuff like that.


Ability Name: Last Hell Rites

Okay, so sounds cool and all, but really? You can't have anything that outright causes paralysis. Causing intense amounts of pain without the actual damage is fine, but no damage shenanigans on top of it. i.e., we are not letting you have nukefists.

Ability Name: Raging Demon
Description: Known to some masters as the Instant Hell Murder or Flash Prison Killer. Because after the technique is done most people are dead from the technique being done to them. The technique itself can start off with stance of Trevor will appear in a ghost like state traveling at both a sonido speed. Saying the Ancient chant "Metsu" and then grabs the opponent when pieces of cero starts breaking off and start attacking the opponent in a fast series of bala style punches. It doesn't stop until the opponent is beaten to death or dead leaving 670 bala punches being hit. What it does? This technique violently attacks the spiritual pressure, bone structure and flesh beaten it death. After the final punch, Trevor turns around and energy kanji as his victim fallen to the ground. This is 10 times as deadly then Hado #90 because it can almost suck away a person's very life force.

I'm having a hard time actually figuring out what's going on here. It sounds like this used to be an Arrancar sheet,
and you decided to make him a sinner. I don't really care much about the aesthetics behind it, but you are NOT getting an ability that does 10 times what a Hadou 90 does. The damage cap for ANY ability is 2 forbiddens, or 2 times what a Hadou 90 can do. That in and of itself WILL put your character out of commission for the remainder of the thread.


Lastly, our rules for 'age' and characters is that your history's word count should be greater than your age.
You are 3100 years old with 837 words of history.


You must make the necessary changes before they are approvable. It is open for discussion if you contact any of us via Discord, but do not expect us to let things slide just because you want this character to be 'just so'.

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#4 Re: Balthazar RaVakko [Completed] on Tue Jun 13, 2017 12:42 am

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#5 Re: Balthazar RaVakko [Completed] on Tue Jun 13, 2017 1:48 am

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Ability Name: Last Hell Rites
Description: A descent to Hell which is a powerful technique which consist of two parts. If the first part hit then Trevor can move onto the second one. Trevor raised one hand gathering his energy and reishi particles are absorbed at well something like a burning red super bala fist. Then his skin with turn completely black and his eyes turned red. He begins to punch the opponent hard causing a massive energy pillar exploding. Leading into the second either the opponent hit gets badly or sent flying upward. This lead to Trevor started flying upward after the enemy saying an ancient chant "Shishi seisei, koko ni kiwamaru". Upon the word being said ancient wrath power begin empowering his bala fist transforming it into a burning inferno fist. His appearance at that moment is like a ravage beast getting ready for final blow. Once this hits it could lead to about a giant bomb exploding but the strangest thing is. The enemy feels an unholy yet immense burning sensation throughout their body making it feel like the descending into hell was complete.
[The Burning Fists need a one post charge time each to use them correctly and having a striking power on par with Cero Oscarus attack.]

We've been over this. This isn't how you want this to work, and I can't approve it this way.

Ability Name: Omega Beams
Description: From his eyes, Trevor can generate small reserves which his eyes will start glowing pitch black. Shooting precise black laser-like beams shot from both eyes. The eye lasers can be used for various attack procedures like nullify weak attacks and small projectiles. The damage from eye beams are strong which can really hurt weaker enemies and 50% hurt stronger ones. It can block with attacks or defenses easily. But by using the Satsui No Hado the technique it can be made a little stronger for hurting enemies only 90% Stronger.

Needs to be quantified, how strong is it? Hadou or Cero Equivalents will do and it'll need a CD to match the equivalency.. Also needs a range.

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#6 Re: Balthazar RaVakko [Completed] on Tue Jun 13, 2017 6:51 am

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#7 Re: Balthazar RaVakko [Completed] on Tue Jun 13, 2017 7:54 am

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#8 Re: Balthazar RaVakko [Completed] on Mon May 07, 2018 12:24 pm

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Ability Name: Magic Materialization

Specifically referring to the Weapon creation here...
Denied. You do not need to have weapon creation, seeing as you already have a set of spiritually enhanced weapons. The rest of this is fine.


Just as a general gripe, you have a lot of very high-damaging attacks, a couple of which exceed our 'two forbidden' damage cap.
-Inferno Hellblazer (Hadou 85 x 4 > 2 Forbidden)
-Pure Hellstorm (3 Hadou 90 = 3 Forbidden)

You seem to have it in your head that making a fuckton of weapons and stupidly intense powers will make your characters strong. That's simply not the case. Every character has strengths, weaknesses, and an overall combat style that defines them so that they can be useful in certain situations. Most of the time, blowing all your energy on superbomb attacks will end up with you drained and out of power, and your opponent only moderately injured. At least you've gotten over the "I need to have all the elements to be good" gambit. We're not trying to be assholes when we tell you 'No, you can't have this.' It's a matter of balance, and needing to make sure the kit isn't filled with jargon that translates to either broken elements or useless ones.

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#9 Re: Balthazar RaVakko [Completed] on Mon May 07, 2018 1:50 pm

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#10 Re: Balthazar RaVakko [Completed] on Wed May 09, 2018 1:52 am

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Approved.

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