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on Sun Apr 23, 2017 10:07 am

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THE BOUNT APPLICATION



Name: Fafnir
Real Name: Ulrich Carrollson
Apparent Age: 25
True Age: 200
Sex: Male
Personality: To describe Fafnir's personality is quite simple, he is a greedy, gloomy, geek. Though there is more to this person than one would be able to tell just from surface glances. He is also extremely honest and blunt, preferring to just get to the point and get it over with.

First and foremost while Fafnir's primary motivation for anything is money this does not mean that he is not without a sense of honor or loyalty. If he accepts a contract he will see it through till the end unless his employer says otherwise. Basically this means that no matter what he is offered he will not take any job that runs counter to a current contract, even if he is working multiple jobs at once. On the rare chance that he ends up on multiple contracts that will run counter to each other he will return the money and drop both jobs. If his employer however is unable to fulfill their end of the bargain, for one reason or another Fafnir will give them a grace period before enacting his revenge, be it the mercy of a swift death or really depends on the mood he is in by the end of that period.

Gloomy well that sums up Fafnir's general mood pretty well, his emotions seem to run the gambit from depressed to livid with very few stops in between, and even fewer outside of that range. The only exception to this is when he is utterly distracted be it by combat, or gaming at which point and time he is basically an emotionless husk.

As previously mentioned Fafnir is also a geek at heart, if it wasn't for his desire for money he probably would be a shut-in neet spending all day playing video games, and watching obscure anime and movies. The fact that he does this in what little downtime he gives himself is only known by the obscure references that he has been known to make while talking.

Fafnir's relationship with his Doll Atem is both complicated, yet simple at the same time. He views his doll not as a weapon nor as his source of power but as a brother, another living being who shares the same primary goal as him, staying alive. It is because of this that Fafnir is some times reluctant to call upon his doll, for fear of dragging him into danger unnecessarily.

As a bount Fafnir understands that he, and his kind require the souls of humans to survive and extend their lives. Though he finds the practice of consuming the souls of the living to be reprehensible, especially those of the innocent and has even gone out of his way to put down other Bounts who have broken that taboo. Fafnir also feels like he has a certain kinship with hollows and their kin because of the fact that he both of them require the souls of others to survive, and will unless ordered otherwise leave them to their own devices so long as they do not attack living beings.



CHARACTER APPEARANCE



Height: 6'1"
Weight: 150lbs
Physical Traits:
Spoiler:

Tall, thin, young and pale. If one was to describe Fafnir's physical body those would be the words that they would use. His long limbs are wrapped in tight wiry muscle giving him greater speed and strength than it absolutely appears like he should be able to manage. His long black hair covers the majority of the right side of his face and is pulled back in a ponytail that comes down to the middle of his back, contrasting with his pale complexion that gives him a sickly almost deathly appearance in most lights. The most startling part of his appearance however would probably be his blood red eyes which are almost lizard like in appearance, some people think that he does this with contacts but that is what they look like normally. All in all physically Fafnir comes off as a borderline anorexic nerd who never leaves his mothers basement or sees the light of day.

His choice clothes are the only thing that belies his true age. He tends to wear an older style black suit, dark grey vest and tie, white button up shirt and gloves. He also wears a pair of small rounded spectacles, though they do not appear to have any purpose other than to complete his outfit. When taken as a whole Fafnir's normal outfit makes him look like an old timey british butler or some form of an Alfred Pennyworth knock-off.

His general expression is somewhere between depressed and bored, the only time it shifts from that is when he gets angry, At which point and time his eyes seem to grow and become almost evil looking, and his presence practically demands that you pay attention to him. At other times however he is easily ignored much like your average basement nerd.



FIGHTING STYLE



General Fighting Style:
Unlike most bounts who tend to leave the fighting to their Doll's, Fafnir prefers to do the fighting himself using his weapons to deal out the damage to his foes from a distance or up close in personal should he not be able to keep the space between him and his enemies.

Even when Fafnir is required to call upon Atem, he will fight alongside of his Doll mixing his own attacks in with the Doll's. They even have combination attacks where Fafnir will take advantage of the fact that the majority of Atem's body does not have solid parts and can be shot through. Or even will perform pincer maneuvers on their target attacking from multiple fronts at once.

Strengths:
Agility - Fafnir is extremely quick on his feet, and can keep track of even the most slippery of foes.
Weapon Skill - While Fafnir has a preference in the use of gun's he is none to shabby at using his twin knives.
Hakuda - Fafnir has trained in multiple martial arts at various points through out his life, and is quite able to hold his own even without weapons.

Weaknesses:
Durability - Fafnir is only human.
Strength - Fafnir's Physical Strength is only average (by normal human standards).
Reiatsu - As he has never truly needed it, Fafnir has not tried to develop the 'punch' of his spiritual power.
Boosts: Speed x2, Reiryoku x2, Control x2

Ability Name: Blink
Description: Basically his variation of Shunpo where by focusing his reiatsu to his limbs he can move at high speeds seeming to travel in a blink.



DOLL INFORMATION



Doll Name: Atem
Doll Personality: Atem's seems at times subservient, at others like a partner providing advice to Fafnir. He loves to fight and understands that both he and his master have a truly symbiotic relationship. He respects Fafnir's desires to not feed on the souls of living human's and to not involve innocents in their fights.

Atem doesn't have any feelings towards other people in general, the only one he cares about being Fafnir for without the gloomy human he would not exist, and should Fafnir die he knows deep down that he will as well.

Doll Appearance: While Sealed Atem looks like a golden pocket watch, with an intricate design raised on its lid (see spoiler below), Fafnir keeps this watch in his left breast pocket.

When released Atem takes on a semi humanoid form much like that of a djinn. Atem stands at the same height as his master Fafnir, a striking six feet tall. His upper body looks to be made out of a fluffy white cloud though when angered or in combat it turns dark gray like a storm cloud. His left arm is made out of solid ice with water for joints the finger tips on it sharpen to razor sharp claws in combat. His right is made out of lightning crackling and arcing off. From the waist down Atem is a visible spiral of wind like a tornado. Atem's head is also made out of water with glowing emerald green eyes.

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Doll Abilities:

Ability Name: Weather Manipulation
Description: Atem has the power to manipulate the weather. Allowing him to call in assorted weather patterns from rain and snow storms, to fog and sandstorms. All to make situations more beneficial for Fafnir and himself. Mind you this power not omnipotent, he can't create blizzards or monsoons in a desert, or sandstorms in a rain forest.

Ability Name: Gust
Description: Atem can create and fire gusts of wind, even at their most concentrated they are nothing more than a rank twenty equivalent of Sho.

Ability Name: Blitz (Lightning Bolt)
Description: Atem can fires a bolt of lightning from his right hand, normally from a pointed finger. This ability is normally equivalent to that of Byakurai, though he can choose to fire it from his palm/fist instead of his finger. Should he do this the cool down is increased to two posts, and it will act more like Raikoho instead of byakurai.

Ability Name: Schwall (Torrent)
Description: From his left hand or mouth Atem releases a torrent of water, it's destructive power would be equivalent to about half a cero.

Ability Name: Hagel (Hail)
Description: From his left hand Atem fires a dozen spears of ice at his target at bala speeds. Well I call them spears though it would be better to relate them to daggers being only about a foot long, and three inches wide at their widest. They are released with enough force that it would take a rank 40 or greater shield to stop all of them.

Ability Name: Durchdringen (Permeate)
Description: This is more of an ability Fafnir can perform than Atem. By shooting his gun's through Atem, Fafnir is able to apply special effects to his bullets based on where they passed through his doll's body. Each location has its own cool down separate from the other locations.
- Head/Left Arm - Fafnir's bullet takes up a freezing quality encasing one foot around the impact zone in ice equal to a Rank 60 Bakudo Cooldown: 3 posts
- Right Arm - Fafnir's bullet takes on a lightning effect, causing electrical damage and overloading the nerves in struck area causing a massive surge of pain followed up by 2 posts of numbness and sluggishness in the effected area. Cooldown: 3 posts
- Torso - Fafnir's bullet will take on a cloud-like form losing it's punch (will hit kind of like a punch instead of a bullet) upon impact it will create a smoke screen in a sphere with an eight foot radius. Cooldown: 1 post
- Legs - Fafnir's bullet spins faster increasing its penetration power, allowing it to go through up to rank #70 shields and still hit its target on the other side. Cooldown: 3 posts
Boosts: Speed x3, Control x3, Stamina x3



DOLL FUSION



Fused Appearance: The clothes on Fafnir's upper body tear away revealing a slightly more muscular version of himself. His Right arm will have arcs of electricity coursing up and down it. His left arm will become encased in ice with razor sharp claws on his fingers. His legs have small tornado's spinning around them. Above his head a storm cloud forms, crackling lightning randomly.
Fused Abilities:

Ability Name: Mjolnir
Description: This ability requires a storm to be in place, more specifically one involving clouds. Fafnir calls down a massive bolt of lightning from the clouds to strike his foe with the force of a Cero Oscuras. Cooldown: 4posts

Ability Name: Wetter Kugeln (Weather Bullet)
Description: The evolution of Durchdringen Fafnir no longer has to shoot through Atem to empower his bullets know being able to empower them himself. (same effects as Durchdringen, though he gets to choose effects at will) Cooldown: 2posts

Ability Name: Zyklongefängnis (Cyclone Prison)
Description: Fafnir fires off a small sphere of concentrated air at his target, upon contact it will expand to encase the target in sphere of wind, reflecting attacks weaker than hado launched 70 from inside, anything stronger will break the target out. Fafnir can turn this around on himself like a shield allowing him to deflect attacks away. This ability can also be used to fire a tornado at the opponent similar to Hado 58 Tenran. Duration2 posts unless broken, Cooldown: 3posts

Ability Name: Weather Creation
Description: Now that Atem is fused with Fafnir their control over weather is far stronger than before, allowing them to create any kind of storm no matter the area, even inside.

Ability Name: Ich bin der Sturm (I am the storm)
Description: Fafnir's body turns into a cloud becoming completely intangible for a period of time taking 75% reduced damage. Any physical attack that strikes Fafnir during this time strikes the attacker with an electrical charge equal to a rank 40 hado. Duration:1 post, Cooldown: 4posts.

Boosts: Speed x4, Control x4, Stamina x3, Reiryoku x3



EQUIPMENT



Item name: Colt M1911
Description: The M1911 is a single-action, semi-automatic, magazine-fed, recoil-operated pistol chambered for the .45 ACP cartridge. It served as the standard-issue sidearm for the United States Armed Forces from 1911 to 1986.
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Effect: Fafnir's particular models are the full sized model with a five inch barrel, and stander 7 round mags, he tends to keep one round chambered for a total of 8 shot. It is nothing fancy just a pair of basic 1911 pistol that he keeps in shoulder holsters under his jacket
Number of it you have/possible/allowed: 2x
Private Equipment or Public: Public

Item name: Magazine Rack
Description: Basically a long black rack that Fafnir wears on his back underneath his coat, it is designed to hold 10 magazines for the M1911, five on each side.
Effect: Allows Fafnir to reload his guns with one hand. He slams the gun into the rack barrel down, the magazine will lock into place and disconnect from the rack allowing him to pull his loaded gun away with a simple motion. The next magazine on that side will then slide into place with the help of gravity.
Number of it you have/possible/allowed: 1
Private Equipment or Public: Public

Item name: Twin knives
Description: Full length about 18 inches, kept in sheaths hidden up each sleeve.
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Effect: Just a pair of twin knives that he keeps up his sleeves for combat.
Number of it you have/possible/allowed: 2.
Private Equipment or Public:



BACK-DROP



History:

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Born in a coastal city of Germany Fafnir didn't realize there was anything different about him, well aside from his ability to see and interact with the dead. His early years were easy, his family was well off as merchants and he didn't have a want in the world. Taking up carpentry after his time in primary school, Fafnir apprenticed himself under a shipwright assisting the old man in repairs. This is how things went for the majority of his first forty years of life, it was then that he realized he wasn't exactly normal, his friends and family were all aging without him.

Not sure what the meaning of this was Fafnir didn't think anything of it at first, though on his mothers death bed shortly after his fortieth birthday she confessed to him that he had been born sickly, and a stranger had offered them a chance to save him. Though the stranger had warned that their would be some unforeseeable side effects. It was around this time that he noticed that his neighbors and other people that he had known his entire life started to avoid him. Feeling unwelcome Fafnir moved away, never looking back.

Unknown hunger:
In his travels Fafnir started to feel a pang of hunger that would refuse to be sated, no matter how much or what he ate. One night he found himself taking sanctuary in a church. It was there he came across a woman, more specifically the spirit of one who had known another like Fafnir, saved at a young birth by a stranger. The woman explained that the person she knew needed to consume the souls of human's to survive, and after meeting her he forsook that need until he almost literally starved himself to death.

Disgusted by the very thought of having to eat the souls of human's to survive like he was some kind of demon Fafnir was going to let himself starve. Fearing the same fate would befall Fafnir as her former lover, the young woman tricked the young bount into consuming her soul, and with her final words made him promise to do whatever it would take to survive. With tears in his eyes Fafnir began his trek again.

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Following rumors of odd people who didn't seem to age, liked to live alone, and had been seen around graveyards, and other such places Fafnir found another Bount, one who seemed more in the know about what he was and what they were supposed to be. This new bount took Fafnir under his wing, teaching him how to fight, and what it means to be a bount. Every decade or so the two of them would move to a new place where they weren't known.

During one of these moves they were assaulted by some former soldiers who was trying to rob them. It was at this time that Fafnir encountered his first Doll, a golem looking beast who grew out of the ground crushing their assailants. After they got to their new home Fafnir's teacher explained what the doll was, and started Fafnir's training to ready him for the summoning of his very own Doll.

Atem, The Storm's Fury:
After almost a year of training Fafnir was given permission to undergo the ritual to summon his very own doll. The ritual went off without a hitch, the creature summoned was a sleeping gelatinous blob. Waiting for it to awake Fafnir readied himself mentally and physically for the trial that would commence. Atem awoke, in a rather peaceful mood though as was detailed out by Fafnir's teacher Atem challenged him to see whether or not the bount could seal him away.

Overpowering the Doll's spiritual power with his own Fafnir sealed his new partner into a golden pocket watch. The next few years were spent bonding with Atem and learning the extent of his powers. It didn't take long however for his life to turn to crap. His teacher, the very same man who had taught him what it had meant to be a bount, and of the Taboo that was consuming the soul of a living human broke that taboo. Whether or not his first time was intentional Fafnir didn't know, what he did know was that his teacher became addicted to the surge of power that he felt. Drunk off of the sensation the man's gentle and patient personality turned sour and violent.

It wasn't long after that that he turned on Fafnir trying to kill him. Calling on Atem and everything that he was Taught Fafnir was able to win the day and survive, though to do so he had to Dust the first person that he had felt he could trust.

War Comes:
Fafnir went on the move again, this time alone, keeping his distance from everyone except his doll. Finding himself wandering through America trying to distance himself as far as he could from his past. Then the world went to war, and unfortunately for Fafnir he had gotten drafted. Joining the military he managed to stand out enough to get assigned to special forces. Thriving on the battle field surrounded by the souls of the recently departed from both sides Fafnir felt like he had found his calling in life. That is until a near by explosion knocked him unconscious.

Captured and imprisoned Fafnir survived his torture knowing full well that if he could manage to find his watch he would be able to break out of there, destroying the prison in the process. Finally managing to convince some other prisoners to try and help him, the day came when they were to enact his plan though there was a traitor among them who in trade for the promise of better treatment turned them in. For the majority of the following three years Fafnir was tortured, his faith in humanity thoroughly destroyed. Finally seeing a chance he killed a guard and made his way to the warden who had grown rather attached to the watch Atem was in. Killing the warden and freeing his Doll Fafnir Razed the prison to the ground, guards, prisoners, everything. The war ended shortly there after, and Fafnir returned home.

A new Life:
Taking his new found skills, and lust for battle Fafnir became a mercenary, trusting only in himself, Atem, and money. Greed became his motivation as he tried his best to live up to the promise he made so many years ago and survive. Forsaking the name he was born with and had been going by for more than a century he chose a new one. Fafnir, a dwarf so greedy he was cursed to live the rest of eternity as a dragon.

Oops, that might have been a step to far:
That more or less brings us to the present well just about. There was his incident with the last person to hire him. The fool thought it would be smart to try and kill Fafnir instead of paying him. Unfortunately for that man the bount proved to be faster than his guards. Taking great offense at the man's attempt to cheat him, Fafnir killed everyone who had been hired to take him out, leaving the one who hired him alive. Taking advantage of Atem's powers Fafnir skewered the man's limbs with chunks of ice, destroying his bones and muscles crippling him for life. Not satisfied with this alone, Fafnir had atem spend the next three days zapping the idiot in the testicles with electricity, not enough to kill him but enough to make sure that he would never reproduce, and probably wouldn't even be able to get it up. This incident apparently caught the attention of a collection of people called the 'Committee' as when he got home a few nights later there was a letter pinned to the counter in side of his house that said simply 'We know who you are, come to New York to meet with us or else.'

Side Notes:
Technique Disclaimer - Fafnir's Curse effects work like his healing while in the mirror field, and his healing effects work like his curse.
Technique Disclaimer - Fafnir's healing effects will cancel out the curse effect and vice-versa.

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on Sun Apr 30, 2017 11:01 pm

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I see no major issues with this aside from the fact that you should be aware of Mirror Field's energy drain. It will be watched.
Due to the nature of the abilities, we may come back for a revisit, but otherwise, I'll pre-approve Fafnir at 1-1.

I will also ask that Jeff or Rena review it as well to be sure that I'm not just being an idiot.

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on Tue May 02, 2017 6:35 am

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I don't know what I was smoking originally, I got distracted. I need to look this over further.


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on Tue May 23, 2017 5:40 am

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Okay, should probably mention he has since been rebuilt completely... so bump

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on Wed May 24, 2017 1:49 am

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Ability Name: Ich bin der Sturm (I am the storm)
Description: Fafnir's body turns into a cloud becoming completely intangible for a period of time. Any physical attack that strikes Fafnir during this time strikes the attacker with an electrical charge equal to a rank 40 hado. Duration:1 post, Cooldown: 3posts.

Still must take some level of damage. I'd prefer a 50% reduction or a 75 with an added cooldown. I'd also say Reitsu based physical attacks should be scaled differently as well, but we'll cross that bridge when we get to it.

Ability Name: Zyklongefängnis (Cyclone Prison)
Description: Fafnir fires off a small sphere of concentrated air at his target, upon contact it will expand to encase the target in sphere of wind, reflecting attacks weaker than hado launched 70 from inside, anything stronger will break the target out. Fafnir can turn this around on himself like a shield allowing him to deflect attacks away. Duration2 posts unless broken, Cooldown: 3posts

I'd give it an added usage, like a Hadou 55 gimmick for the hell of it. Just my two cents.

Ability Name: Hagel (Hail)
Description: From his left hand Atem fires a dozen spears of ice at his target at bala speeds. Well I call them spears though it would be better to relate them to daggers being only about a foot long, and three inches wide at their widest. They are released with enough force that it would take a rank 40 or greater shield to stop them.

If you mean to stop ALL of them I'm down, but Bakudo 37-39 should be plenty to block a couple of these lol.

- Head/Left Arm - Fafnir's bullet takes up a freezing quality encasing one foot around the impact zone in ice equal to a Rank 60 Bakudo
- Right Arm - Fafnir's bullet takes on a lightning effect, causing electrical damage and overloading the nerves in struck area causing a massive surge of pain followed up by 2 posts of numbness and sluggishness in the effected area.
- Torso - Fafnir's bullet will take on a cloud-like form losing it's punch (will hit kind of like a punch instead of a bullet) upon impact it will create a smoke screen in a sphere with an eight foot radius.
- Legs - Fafnir's bullet spins faster increasing its penetration power, allowing it to go through up to rank #70 shields and still hit its target on the other side.

I'd say Head/Left Arm probably needs to be closer to 3 posts, as does right arm, Torso I'd say can only be one, Legs can be three posts as well BUT, to help this whole concept out I'd ALSO say they don't share a cooldown. So you can use the Legs shot then the Torso then the Head shot, while they each only take 3 posts to recharge and you could still use the smoke screen Torso deal next post.


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on Thu May 25, 2017 6:42 am

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Thanks for the pointers, Updates Made.

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on Thu May 25, 2017 6:47 am

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Approved. 1-1


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