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#1 Hagane Jaken'na kokoro (Complete) on Sun Nov 20, 2016 11:55 am


Name: Hagane Jaken'na kokoro

Age: 22

True Age: Around 1500

Sex: Male

Personality: Hagane once had a very optimistic outlook on life. He once saw the world as a series of choices, to which if you made the right one's then you were rewarded with assurance, trust, and love. Now however, Hagane realizes more than ever that choice is a privileged illusion. He once told himself that he would never stray from his beliefs, and that no one would ever change that. He was sort of right in a way. The only one that changed him, was him.
"You cannot simply blame the world for your misfortune. You must blame the individuals. Then... You must kill them. Every last one of them." -Hagane Jaken'na Kokoro

Regardless of how much Hagane has changed, he is still considered semi-idealistic. He still follows what he believes, but with the overshadowing consideration of the realistic properties that matter more. Hagane will do what he must to survive and Hagane will do what he must to quench his thirst for vengeance and rage. Nothing will stop him.
"The void that plagues your existence. It's nothing but your useless conscience. Just ignore it, and it'll shut up. Just crush whatever stands in you way." -Hagane Jaken'na Kokoro

Hagane has and will always be considered an Imaginative and Logical thinker, and he still doesn't try to see the world for more than what it is. Problem is, is that in his mind the world is full of uncaring liars and cheaters. Hagane doesn't think much of people in general, usually considering them to be dead men walking. He once used to envision the potential of people and the world as a thing to be treasured. However having been ignored and irrelevant for so long due to his old views, he has himself become uncaring. although He's still never been the lying cheating type.
"Everywhere I turn I see nothing but liars, cheaters, and scum. They're all dead, every last one of them. Well... They're about to be. Nothing will stop my Hatred." -Hagane Jaken'na Kokoro    

Hagane is no longer the playful giant he used to be, more like quite the opposite. He has a very no-nonsense attitude, and hates being played around as an idiot. Hagane has very little patience, but only when progress isn't being made in a conversation or while doing business. It's almost impossible for Hagane to not react to someone calling him names, and he is very prone to outbursts of extreme rage. Hagane doesn't take jokes aimed at him very well.
"I once had an open heart, but what you have understand is that people only care about stealing away your life. If it's you or them, It is always them. I'll never leave my life in someone else's hands. I'll never let the same mistake happen again." -Hagane Jaken'na Kokoro  

Hagane is a very solitary type person, which has always been a staple about his personality. It just becomes even more true, now that he hates people as a whole. That's not to say it is completely impossible to get close to him, it just requires you to do something redeeming in his eyes.
"The only one you can trust, is yourself. However, you can't always rely on your own capabilities. Sometimes the less scummy people are necessary. It's just an added bonus when they trust in you, because it then becomes all the more easy to use them." -Hagane Jaken'na Kokoro

Hagane is a very fearless individual, which has been more than proven by his ability to run head on into attacks. He still stands for everything he believes is right, and gives little to no fucks about anyone else's point of views. Hagane still doesn't back down from a fight, especially when provoked heavily into doing so. Hagane is very rarely provoked into a fight he won't win, but it can happen.
"To live in fears shadow is a pathetic existence, but you won't fair much better without it." -Hagane Jaken'na Kokoro

Hagane has and will always be a confident person, he just isn't obnoxious about it. Hagane knows where his true strengths lie, and where he falls short. Perhaps a little too confident in his abilities, yet that's never stopped him before.
"If you can't run through it, then break it down and walk over it." -Hagane Jaken'na Kokoro

Hagane isn't the most intelligent individual, but he has the capability to learn and adapt like everyone else. He's a little more crafty and clever then what others give him credit for. Hagane just seems to always be in the wrong mindset, the rage infested kind.  
"All walls can be broken down, and all walls can be made stronger. Time is the only factor." -Hagane Jaken'na Kokoro

Unlike normal people, Hagane has a very unique mental ability that dwells inside him. It only ever comes out when he becomes extremely pissed or irritated, and while like this it is extremely hard to control him. It is quite easy to tell whether or not he is in still state or not, as when he goes into this state his eye will become incredibly red and bloodshot. While in this state Hagane looses most senses of judgement and reason from others, but with the payoff that his mind becomes highly enhanced. The world moves slower through his senses, allowing him to read things more appropriately. This mental state will last as long as his rage does, meaning that it's possible to never end.

Hagane's old personality:
Hagane has quite an optimistic outlook on life. The way he sees the world is that everyone chooses there own path, and only you have the capability to choose where it will go. There are a lot of things he hates about the world, and the people, but it will never force him to be someone he's not. He will not compromise himself for someone else, especially if he has to get rid of who he truly is.  

Hagane is considered to be an Idealistic person over realistic. He follows his heart and does the things he wants to do when he wants to do them, Even if he has to break rules, laws and regulations. He believes that to truly fill the void of ones own existence, they must be willing to try new experiences.

Hagane could be considered both an Imaginative and Logical thinker, but more often than not he doesn't really try to see the world more than it is. Simply put, he sees the potential of everything and everyone, he sees no point in believing there is more because what he sees should be enough. Sadly people don't see/nor think the same way often leaving his views ignored.

Hagane is playful when he wants to be, although perhaps sometimes his version of fun or playful is another's nightmare. For the most part Hagane is serious, especially in battle, even if it doesn't seem like it. He can seem stupid at times, but his head is screwed on just right. He is playful with others when they appear playful with him, and is serious with others when they appear serious with him.  

Hagane when not in battle or fighting, prefers to be alone. Although he enjoys the company of the people he knows, He just simply likes to be by himself. Perhaps it's just the large crowds or certain people that tend to get on his nerves.

Courageous is perhaps a very good way to put hagane. He will stand up for anything he believes is right, and he hates it when others try to force their ideals onto him. He will not back down from a fight especially when the things he cares for are in danger, however Hagane is not stupid. He knows when he needs to back down from a fight.

Hagane is a very confident person, and loves to show others it's true. Hagane knows where his true strengths lie, and where he falls short. Perhaps a little to confident with his strengths, yet that's never stopped him before, nothing has.

Hagane is perhaps a little more Naive than clever, but he has his moments. It seems however that sometimes he's too naive to trick and instead leaves a persons clever plan to fly too far, if that makes sense.

Clean. Hagane can be clean, sometimes. It's not like he leaves everything a big mess. Well the battlefield he does. He's clean when it comes to his appearance, most of the time. Everything else, not so much. It's not because he can't organised things. It's just because a lot of the time he doesn't know how, especially when it comes to paperwork.

Hagane may seem like a happy person on top, but inside, he's angry. As to where the anger originated is unknown. But it may have something to do with when he was still alive. Not many know or will ever know but Hagane's life was full of abuse and hatred. His family disregarded him as a failure and he suffered beatings constantly. His anger can often show the most while he is in battle, sort of a way for him to vent his rage.


Height: 6' 2"

Weight: 200 lbs

Physical Traits:

Clothing: As shown in Picture.

Accessories: He has a necklace which is made of red metal beads.   


General Fighting Style: Hagane is a pure brawler who uses his body as a weapon with high efficiency and power. His powers allow him to make strong attacks consistently.

Strengths: Strength, Reiryoku, Durability, Endurance (Extreme Pain Tolerance, Hagane is capable of withstanding a horrid amount of pain, almost to the point where torture is a cake walk for him).    

Weaknesses: Shunpo (Hagane's Shunpo is the slowest out of all the Captains and Vice Captains. He is also only able to use it once per post.), Hakuda (Hagane only has the basics learned from the Shinigami Academy, mostly due to his Brute fighting style), kidou (Hagane is only able to use Kidou up to 30).

Personal Abilities:

Self-sustenance: Alot of Hagane's physical needs are removed. He has no need to breath, sleep/rest, eat, drink, shelter to environmental effects and their lack (heat/cold, dryness/wetness), etc. This allows Hagane to survive in conditions that would kill most people. This means that Hagane has almost godlike resistance to heat and cold effects, but not impervious.  

Levitation: This ability essentially allows Hagane to Airwalk and fly without needing to use Spiritual Energy.


Name of Zanpakuto: Tomerarenai-ryoku

Sealed Appearance:
Sealed Zanpakuto:


Call Out Command: Tomerarenai-ryoku

Shikai Appearance and Hagane's new Appearance:


A two-handed War-hammer made of steel.


Hagane grows in size and mass. His height becomes 7 feet 5 Inches and his weight drastically changes to 600 lbs. His clothing also changes, giving him what appears to look like traditional armor. (Clothing in Appearance)


Subdermal Armor: Hagane generates an innate hard shell casing of armor underneath his skin. Blocking 10% of all damage taken. Also acts like an average Hierro. (When entering Bankai this percentage is raised to 15%)

Carbon Density: Hagane generates/subconsciously manipulates carbon in a way to make it form a hard shell casing of armor around his body. Blocking 10% of all damage taken. Also acts like an average Hierro. (When entering Bankai this percentage is raised to 15%)

Collision Inducement: With this ability Hagane causes damage equal to a full powered strike he can make, which occurs when anything makes contact with any part of his body. The damage is considered blunt force. This ability only activates if Hagane is IN MOTION and is always functional as long as the motion requirement is met. While moving this ability also Blocks 20% of all damage taken. (When entering Bankai this percentage is raised to 30%)(Note that a full powered strike from Hagane would equal that of a cero or higher)

Earth Manipulation: Hagane can create, shape and manipulate earth and "Earthen" elements including most solid objects, specifically all minerals and mineral compositions regardless of their state (mountain, boulder, sand or dust), dirt, soil, etc. Within a 100m Radius.

Earth Colosseum: Hagane can form 4 walls in a 30 foot area around him, with a ceiling over the top which allows enough light in for the opponent to see, but not to slip through. (Regardless of any shenanigans, teleportation doesn't work in here.) This essentially traps the opponent in a 20m arena with Hagane, making them far easier pickings for him. Hagane cannot use Earth Manipulation when this is active, and it lasts 2 posts with a 4 post Cooldown. The walls of the arena can withstand up to Gran Rey Cero damage. (When in Bankai the Coliseum is slightly smaller, being a 15m area around him instead. The walls while in Bankai can withstand up to Cero Oscuras damage, and the ability lasts 3 posts with a 5 post cooldown instead.)

Inertia Negation: Effectively Hagane is unaffected by Inertia. Essentially although his body has weight, this ability makes it so his body acts as if it had low weight or was weightless. Leaving his Body unaffected by the effects of Inertia while still retaining all his weight and momentum.

HAMMER OF THOR???: Pretty simple ability. Hagane can throw his Hammer just like Thor, with some pretty devastating effects. Also if Hagane's Zanpakuto is not in his possession for this reason or another, he can call his Zanpakuto back to his hand.    

Boosts: x2 Strength, x2 Reiryoku, x2 Durability, and x2 Endurance.


New Name: Chikara o koeta tsuyo-sa

Bankai Appearance and Hagane's new Appearance:

His Zanpakuto grows extremely large in size and turns into a two-handed giant mallet made of Steel. Surprisingly it doesn't weigh that much for Hagane, it holds the same characteristics as Thor's Hammer. Light for Hagane to lift, and heavy as hell for his Opponents to do so.

Hagane's musculoskeletal system grows massive in size and mass. Size and weight change drasticly. His height growing to 9 feet 5 Inches and his weight changing to 1500 lbs. His clothing changes into an armor like shell with a dome like helmet all bolted together.


Regeneration: Hagane has accelerated healing, he can heal all external damage such as fractured bones and deep cuts, burns, bruises, ETC. If a limb is cut off he can re-attach it, with a bit of time. Hagane is also capable of surviving severe blood loss. (It can take up to 6 posts to reattach a limb.)   

Enhanced Strength: Hagane is able to exert super physical strength. He can lift objects exceeding over his weight, up to 2 Tons, and cause blows and punches capable of making objects fly meters away from him. (This weight is not exact, but is the largest feat of strength that has been witnessed.)   

Absolute Fist - This ability allows the user to use his own fist as a means of dealing with abilities and attacks that normally transcend physical limits, but is not completely limited to such. While this ability is active the user is able to "punch" any single attack and cancel it. Effectively punching it out of existence. After doing this a single time however the power cannot be used again for a short time. That time is dependent on the power that was cancelled. So punching a cero would be a one post cooldown. Punching a level 60 kidou would be a 2 post CD. Etc. This ability does not function against powers and attacks whose power exceeds that of a Cero Oscuras. (This Ability can also be used as a means to mitigate damage, meaning if the user was to Punch a forbidden kidou with absolute fist the damage would be mitigated down by the highest amount of power it is able to cancel.)  

Shockwave: By clapping his hands together with immense strength, Hagane is able to emit a strong shockwave from his clap. The shockwave itself is equal to that of Cero force, Knocking opponents not only on their ass but also knocking them back. Its range reaches to 10m and is in a 270 degree cone. Can only be used twice per post. This clap can also incapacitate hearing and balance for a few seconds, depending on who it's used on.    

(When In Bankai, Hagane still has access to the abilities from his Shikai. Some of the Abilities increase in strength.)

Boosts: x3 Strength, x3 Reiryoku, x3 Durability, and x3 Endurance



Hagane's Hollow mask resembles that of a Human Skull.


Earth Liquid Swimming: An incredibly unique ability, Hagane can quite literally swim inside any form of earth as if it was water, at Cero speeds. Can be used in All release stages, and in sealed. Usually as a form of transportation in sealed. (Lasts 1 post, 3 post cool-down: Combat usage limitations)  

Hollow Powers: Cero, Bala.  

Boosts: Strength, Speed.


Hagane Full Hollow:
Changing in appearance drastically, Hagane becomes a monster. His Musculoskeletal system grows further and become vastly more dense, making Hagane add up to a height of 10'5" and a total weight of 2500lbs


Gaze of Stone: Hagane is capable of  shooting a Cero laser beam from his eyes, which travels at Bala speed. Which can be used once per post.  

Helm of Stone: Hagane has a constantly regenerating dense stone helmet covering his head and neck. It is boxy in appearance, It also has a visor gap to see out of and sits over the top of his shoulders (slightly resembling his Juggernaut helmet from bankai). It is capable of withstanding a Cero worth of damage, anything above this will shatter it. When shattered it can take up to 1 post to fully reform.

Magma/Lava Manipulation: Essentially Hagane can create, shape and manipulate molten rock, within a 100m radius. He can also instant cool or melt rock at any given moment, this being a conscious decision.   

Inferno of Hatred: This Ability can only be activated when Hagane is psychically on the brink of death or severely injured. Doing so will surge his body with massive amounts of Spiritual Power, healing all wounds (Does not include brain). His Stamina will become limitless while in this state. However while in this state Hagane will be subjected to vast amounts of physical pain, and will be mentally impaired (unable to tell friend from foe). Because of the large amounts of spiritual power being subjected to his body, his skin will burn continuously and his blood will boil inside his veins. Giving him limitless amounts of rage to direct at his enemies (or allies). (Conditional use. Can only be used once per battle, and will leave Hagane unable to battle afterwards.) (Lasts 5 posts)

(When In Toukai, Hagane still has access to the abilities from his Shikai and Bankai.)

Boosts: x4 Strength, x4 Reiryoku, and x4 Durability, x4 Endurance.


Background: UPDATE IN PROGRESS!...

Side Notes: N/A

Last edited by Hagane Jaken'na Kokoro on Thu Jun 28, 2018 9:08 pm; edited 51 times in total

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#2 Re: Hagane Jaken'na kokoro (Complete) on Tue Nov 22, 2016 3:12 am

tier 2-1

Good Job Necro. Jeff just wants me to remind you that since you can't use shunpo you aren't going to be very fast. Which is fine since you are a powerful tank character. Also he says you will have your bankai. So have fun with that. Smile

P.S. - "Tink"

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#3 Re: Hagane Jaken'na kokoro (Complete) on Tue May 22, 2018 11:18 am

Changes approved.

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#4 Re: Hagane Jaken'na kokoro (Complete) on Fri Oct 05, 2018 11:13 am

bump !UPDATE! Tag

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