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#1 Colbolt Raizel [done] on Sun Feb 14, 2016 11:28 am

Who are you?

Name: Colbolt Raizel
Alias: The Grey Maiden
Age: 99
Age of Appearance:about 19
Character Alignment:Neutral Evil


Colbolt has gorgeous Steel Silver hair that would remind one of a brand new sheet of flawless metal, ready to be bent and shaped into what it is destined to be.  For its length, it flows down to her waist and has movement of a gentle moving stream. No matter how much she tries to mess it up or style it, it never gets messy or tangled and always holds a soft elegant flow of shine. Her usual hair style is just the usual down and goes with her hair parted above her right eye. Sometimes her bangs are tucked behind her left ear, out of the way of her eyes and sometimes she allows her bangs to completely cover her left eye.

Her eyes are much like her hair only they are more of a baby gray like what one would find in a newborn's nursery. Her eyes are big and gorgeous like two silver-ish pools of life though if one stares into their depth long enough they can find that the bright brilliant sparkle is a mask, hiding the pain, sorrow and secrets of the past she works so hard to hide. When she is in battle her eyes hold no sign of the fun scientist that Cobolt is but the cold steel of a junkyard filled with rage and hatred of being tossed aside to never be used for anything by others.

Her skin has never been the sun kiss brown but more of a porcelain with no visible flaws besides the large burn that starts under her chin, covering the right side of her neck, down to her right shoulder reaching from her collarbone to the bottom of her shoulder blade. It expenses all the way down covering her whole right arm and hand.

Colbolt body type is considered an 'A' type with definite curves. Her hips are the largest part of her body as her shoulders are narrow with her hips being a bit wider, making them the widest part of her body. At first glance, Colbolt looks to have a very frail and fragile body that didn't have fat on her body. she has a normal length neck for normal standards with a soft

Style/Clothing: Colbolt has a very provocative style using her body and looks to her advantage to get through her enemy or her target.

First is a form fitting black cloth that hides under her neck piece. it covers her large burn and fits perfectly on her skin as it ends at her wrist. On top of that piece of clothing is a thicker white turtle neck type neck piece that connects with her sweater vest type top. now this top is not the itchy type of vest you would find nerds wearing 24/7 it is actually a form fitting stretchy type of material that allows movement as well as allows air to cool down the body. the neckline clearly exposes her collar bone and the upper half of her cleavage. it molds to her body well and ends at the bottom of her ribs allowing her abdomen and tone stomach to take a front seat. The back of her sweater vest. actually, has a train that covers her sides and gives the appearance of a lab coat without there actually being one. The train is part of her top and is very loose flowing reaching to her ankles

to make her outfit fit her more 'scientist' personality but still have a very sexy feeling she has two large detached sleeves that are very loose and flowing as they reach three inches past her hands, She prefers these sleeves because they make it easy to conceal anything she needs to whether it is a simple knife or a small book or even some snacks, she doesn't want to share with anyone.

Now for her lower half she usually has a pencil skirt style skirt that fits the length of a miniskirt but somehow it never rides up on top but it gives her enough room to move around without restricting her. Now most people say you don't need stockings with boots. to Colbolt, it is all about having the stocking with the boots for she usually wears some stockings up to the middle of her upper leg then she has her favorite pair of knee high boots with two-inch heels to finish up her outfit,

(just in case my wording doesn't make sense here is an image to base my wording on since I have some issues describing things sometimes:


Colbolt seems like any other Arrancar with first impressions of wanting to destroy everything whether it is human, Shinigami, etc. However there is actually many levels to Colbolt's personality and depending on who you are to her depends on what you will be able to see of her.

When you first meet Colbolt, she first comes off as one who sees themselves above all others. She personally hates being around those who she views as morons. She isn't one for caring about power or wars unless it involves her finding a way to finally end the nightmare of her past and to feel whole once again. She use to be about killing when she didn't have a very high-risk weakness roaming around on its own living its own life.

When it comes to being around others she prefers to remain silent unless she absolutely needs to input her opinion in the situation. She carries herself in such a way that when she enters a room, all go silent and all stop to watch her. Maybe it's just the mystery and aura of her existence. Maybe it's just her looks that can make her a show stopper. When she speaks, she isn't the snotty girl that thinks she is all that. She is straight to the point and only states what she absolutely needs to. she will ignore stupid and unneeded questions. When she is done, normally she will just leave to go back to her sanctuary unless told otherwise by those of higher authority.

Now when she is alone, the hard shell she keeps up will come down revealing an unsettled, lonely Colbolt that will often say she isn't whole and trying to become whole again is one thing she deserves to achieve a lot along with the simple wanting to forget the past of those she lost and the one she herself had lost when she was 'killed'. When one manages to get into her hard shell and allow this side out, she isn't as strong as she seems around others and does show the true loneliness she keeps bottled up inside her. but it is hard to see this side as she is not the type to let anyone in and will fight you to keep it hidden.

Her personality truly changes when she is in battle and even then it will change dramatically whether she is taking the battle seriously or not. When she isn't taking it seriously, she likes to 'play with her food' as she calls it where she will play mind games and get under her enemy's skin. You could say she is testing her enemy's limits and how they deal with the heat of battle. She will use anything and everything she can to toy and wear them down till she is tired of their existence or finds them annoying, then she will go in for 'the kill' as it is a call. When she is taking it seriously, she is a silent hard hitting killer, she won't mock, she won't taunt. She will strike with all she has and use whatever she needs to finish the job quick and painless.

Likes and Strengths:

• Intelligent people - Colbolt consider the world to be split into two categories, Intelligent people and morons. Colbolt enjoys the company of intelligent people that can actually hold a conversation that will keep her interested the whole way through.
•Sweets - As much as she hates it she has a weakness to sweets of all kinds. She prefers more of the colder sweets like Ice cream, etc. however, she does enjoy the richer chocolates and often she is found to have some sort of sweet with her even in battle.
•Research and Experimentation - She absolutely loves to Experiment and Research all sorts of things, whether it is testing a theory of how small she can cut a small square of chocolate to testing parasites on various hollows, humans, even Shinigami alike even if the parasite does nothing at all.
•A good memory - Colbolt has always been the type that could retain information from battles, books, etc. She is able to basically recite all she remembers on the needed subject
• Morons - In turn, she enjoys listening to those who she feels is below her intelligence as she enjoys making fun of their said intelligence whenever she can.
• Suffering - She loves seeing others suffer. For one who  can live practically forever, seeing others suffer just bring a rush of being alive since sometimes existence can truly be a boring thing without a little excitement

Dislikes, Fears and Weaknesses:

•  Colbolt can't stand a messy place. when it comes to keeping a place clean and organized. maybe it is just her but she finds it relaxing when it is nice and clean and to know where everything is when she might need it.
• one fear she has is an irrational one which is bugs, even though she loves researching things she will NEVER be found around bugs and can't stand them whether they are Arrancar or not. She is crept out by them and she cants even figure out why and it annoys her.
• One thing she cants stands is someone getting the better of her at her mind games. She can't stand anything thinking they are smarter then she is or stands anyone using her own games on her.
• Ignorance - She can't stand ignorant people of any level. She honestly sometimes feel she should kill all ignorant beings…if she did…who would be left?
•  Loneliness -  Even though she really doesn't like being around others. She Really can't stand being alone. Yes, there are times she wishes to be alone but there are times she can't stand to be alone for very long periods of time without needing someone to at least pop in to even say hi.


•  Colbolt has the goal of figuring out how to fully and completely separate herself from her Vizard counterpart so she can fully destroy her and feel whole once again
• Another goal and dream are to recreate the virus she made and fully destroy the Shinigami with in and help the hollows and Arrancar rule all dimensions.
• An ambition that she has and wants to work on is doing better at trusting others and being more willing to allow people to see the real her the side she hides deep inside.

Hollow Type: Pre-Vasto Lorde
Hollow  Hole Location & Appearance: Her hole is in the middle of her neck, she prefers to keep it hidden cause she hates the place it is located
Mask Fragment Appearance &  Location: Colbolt's mask fragment look to be some broken feathers that rest on her right hairline, where she parts it for that very reason so in a way her mask fragment can be mistaken for a hair clip.
Number  & Location: As of current, Colbolt isn't part of any organization but when and if she does become part of one, she would love her number on her outer thigh
Aspect of  Death: her aspect is considered to be primary Loneliness by how she felt when she died but also rage for the promise broken. Lust could be added by how she acts but it actually ties with her loneliness.

Battle Specs

]Fighting  Style: Colbolt is a mixture of long and close range. She will remain a long range fighter

Personal Abilities:

Colbolt has one huge weakness that she didn't even think could exist and that is her counterpart, Anna. Though their souls were separate in many ways, she has found if Anna is attacked, those wounds will randomly appear on her along with the pain and visa verse. She has tried attacking and both she and Anna found they can't even get their bodies to land a blow like a negative polar force is always pushing them away from each other. This secret she is forced to keep watched and make sure no one finds out or she could be in big trouble.

Name: Ice elemental Reiatsu
Effect: light sparkles of ice form around her the larger she stays put and the air around drops a few degrees and sometimes a slight trial of ice will follow but melt when she is far enough away

Name: Frost's gift
Effect:  this is more of a passive healing technique in the sense that she will take one of her feathers from her wings and holds it against an ally’s wound or against a wound on which she is healing. She uses her energy and the ice to help accelerate the healing process most every Arrancar or Espada gives up upon change.

General Techniques:

Technique Name: Frost's Protection
Technique Description: this is where a large wall of ice is formed in front of her blocking a lot of attacks but when it comes to an attack from a Bankai it shatters like glass it lasts one post but it is a post cool-down.

Technique Effect Chart: stand withstand a well aimmed bala

Technique Name: Ice Rain of Feathers
Technique Description: she will fly into the air and send a storm of feathers and shards down upon her opponent as her ice will explode on contact with the ground or the opponent. This attack lasts one post and cools for 2 posts

Technique Effect Chart: cuts and possible frostbite.

Technique Name: Feather blade
Technique Description:this technique deals with her blade.

To start, her wings will glow as they will flap three times, releasing feather and regrowing. The free feathers will then wrap around her blade, some becoming part to make the blade longer, lighter, and stronger as well as with each swing will release a blue resist of ice that where this wave of blue light passes over and touches, huge thick ice shards will sprout up. When this attack hits it will automatically encase her victim in ice. To finish off the move Colbolt will be appeared above the ice and strike down. The striking on the large ice will send shards into her opponent

Technique Effect Chart:cuts and possible frostbite.


Zanpakutou Type: a zanpakutou
Zanpakutou Appearance: Her weapon does not have a hilt but it has a dark blue cloth to be wrapped in as it rested diagonally down her back
Ressurrecion Name: Azura Iris
Ressurrecion Representation: hers is more of a mixture of a Bird and Loneliness.

Ressurrecion Element:her element is simply ice as to her, she feels it is a lonely element.
Ressurrecion Appearance: Colbolt's appearance doesn't change much on body shape. to start off her silver hair gains streaks of Teal and Ice blue within its deep waves as her hair will pull itself into a ponytail. Her mask fragment will repair the feathers that look broken and expand to around her left eye forming a feather mask over that one eye that changes her left eye color to a bright neon teal. she gains a mixture of gray and teal feathers that encase her neck like a scarf reaching around her shoulders ending parallel with the lowest point of her collarbone. her two small partial wings will grow into two full-size wings of pure ice. She also gains a long ice feather tail. As for her hands, she gains gray and teal feathers as her hand will morph into talons with long Ice nails. underneath her feathers is a thick layer of icy type armor over a layer of material that is consistent with her mask.

Ressurrecion Ability: for some reason when she is in her resurrection from the air around her literally drop to below zero and Ice will begin to form on all surfaces around her.

Resurrecion Techniques:

Technique Name: Azura Gust
Technique Description:This tornado is first caused by her wings flapping, causing a wind shift to form a huge tornado, the wind turned a brilliant blue as her wings release some feathers into the tornado, which will track its targets. Once a target is inside the tornado the feathers attack at lightning fast speeds slicing at the trapped opponent. This move takes two posts to charge and lasts two posts. This attack can’t be used for another four posts.

Technique Effect Chart: cuts and possible frostbite.

Technique Name: Blizzard prison
Technique Description: this attack is where she literally causes a blizzard around her opponent and herself. She releases her feathers into the storm and blends in. while her opponent is trapped in the storm she escapes to the outside of the storm to where a barrier contains her storm. She has two techniques that go within this technique that is the part but also separate from her spell. If This attack takes 3 posts to charge and lasts about five posts but takes 10 to cool down.

Technique Effect Chart: large shower of tiny needles that will impel the opponent and leave frostbite and possible Paralysis needles and the slight ice effect along with ice forming through the wounds

Technique Name: Azure strings
Technique Description:her feathers will rain down upon the opponent below. Some will be on the ground and others will be floating aimlessly around the battlefield. When the opponent and her fights in this small forest of feathers, small threads are caught around the opponent but not her. When it is the time she will have all the feathers move strengthen the fibers caught her opponent in a web. She will then hit the strings with the blade cutting into the opponent wherever the strings touch. This Attack has a charge of two posts and lasts five posts and takes 2 posts to cool down.

Technique Effect Chart: cuts and possible entanglement

Tell me your story...

History:  Colbolt’s real name in the human world was Annamaria Armenia Yashia. She was the youngest of the Yashia family. Her past wasn’t the best due to the fact that she  never go and post to know her older brothers, any of the six and her older sister had to raise her. Their dad was never home, always any business trips and such. Their mother was too drunk to give a care for her two  girls.

Annamaria died at the young age of seven. Anna had always been able to see spirits ever since she was young. There were times she did manage to help spirits and such, but doing this didn’t help the fact of her death. She had just got back from staying late over at a friend’s house, helping with a project. She was on her way home before she heard a scream and followed it seeing a girl around her age running towards her. She didn’t know what the girl was running from till she  felt a huge gust of hot breath behind her. She turned to stare face to face with a frog/snake hollow that quickly sent her to her death.

Annamaria did not get saved by shinigami, sent to the society.

She landed in the land of the hollows, becoming one herself from the fear and hatred in her heart from still remembering the promise from her older sister that she would come get her, she never did. Annamaria sent who knows how many years, killing shinigami and spirits and humans alike. Gaining enough power to go through the painful process of tearing off her mask. It took several attempts but she managed to tear off her mask, finally becoming an Arrancar.

Soon after she had found  another group of hollows much like her but they served a considered powerful Arrancar named  Berenguer Espetón. Cobolt had to go through many different fights with the other Arrancar but somehow she managed to be allowed among the Espada ranks under his leadership. A few years past and her role changed to that of a lab experiment. Her destiny in the experimentation was something she was tell was soul splitting, trying to create an Arrancar that was as hostile as the gods themselves. the experimentation was never fully completed because of the leader's downfall but the result she was stuck with was two souls stuck in one body; two different personalities that should have never existed within each other.

When a new group of Arrancar took the role of the Espada she became the ironic 4th of that group and grew into the woman she is today. She also took on the liking of researching and science of working to destroy the other soul within herself while trying to survive herself along with experimenting with hollow type viruses for the purpose of infecting the shinigami and tearing their whole existence apart.

Over the course of a decade or so, she had somehow managed to have a group of followers, a few shinigami that deserted their way of life to become vizards and some just followed because of them falling for her other personality, even at one point she had a strong alliance with the demons as one became very close to her and would be one of the many reasons for her future downfall.

It took a few decades to create the virus she was ready to try and the unfortunate guinea pig was the shinigami captain of the second squad Amaya Yashica. the virus worked better than she expected and found it was mutating and transforming quicker than expected as she sent her followers and demons to the Series to capture Amaya for the fact of research and to see the demise of her once human sibling that betrayed her.

it only took a month to see a full hollow fixation that caused her supposed end by none other than the shinigami that had fallen on her other side. Somehow at the moment of her death, the body that the two souls shared was destroyed and both were set free.Somehow there was an odd occurrence, instead of both souls being destroyed ,the Tame kind soul ,who called herself 'Annamaria or Anna' for short was reincarnated as a vizard while the Soul of Colbolt was also somehow able to survive and that is the thing that Colbolt herself couldn't understand or figure out. Even to this day, she somehow gained a brand new body but what happened between being destroyed and awaking in her hidden lab was blank to her memory.

Rp Sample:
((already done many threads with colbolt in it before i rebooted her but here we go))

What happened to me....Taken down by the pathetic Shinigami and HER...THAT parasite who calls herself...Anna...She took everything from me...Her existence...her...EVERYTHING....She will pay, even if its the last thing I do...She will pay dearly. Screamed a voice in the head of a sleeping girl as her closed eyes shot open only to close quickly in response to the light sensitivity of her surroundings. two bony arms reached up crossing in front of her eyes as she gasp of pain escaped the female's lips.

She lay still and silent listening to the tempo of various sounds of beeping, bubbles bubbling to the surface as if the water was being boiled...what happened...where was she. She hesitantly  uncrossed her arms and slowly opening her eyes blankly a few times before the light didn't cause any more pain. she flexed her fingers a few times as well as her toes as she slowly tried sitting up only to fall back down on the soft cushioned surface she was laying on. she reached a hand to her head before bringing some of her hair to in front of her eyes. Her eyes widen at the color was she seeing. hair...was never was Teal....screamed the voice in her head as she shut her eyes putting her hands on her temples feeling a searing pain of a headache mixed with a few moments of her death. she shot up quickly into a sitting position before letting a loud cry of agony escape her lips from the pain. Her breathing became rapid and staggered as she was more or less having a panic attack from what was happening.

after a few minutes, she got herself calmed down by listening to the machines in the room, their unbroken rhythms somehow calming her down. she felt this room was a familiar scent to it...maybe she had been here before...many times maybe? She let her hands fall into her lap as she blinked letting her eyes take in her surroundings. She was right, this room....these machines...they were hers once before...but she had died right? there was only her voice in her head, No one else's. She let out a light laughter that got louder by the second but was cut off after a few minutes. Yes, no other voices...this was ONLY her one else's. it was all hers once more. hers and hers alone.

She got up using the table near her to help stable her as she felt her legs were like jello. What the hell happened to her body, it was never like this. after a few minutes of falling and craving she managed to find her bathroom and used the sink for assistance as she managed to stand, with its help. Her left hand extended to the dusty mirror in front. the mirror was cold and dusty. she took a few soft weak strikes at the dust clearing a hole in the dust. the sight she saw...was truly terrifying.

She didn't see the familiar face she had always known...No....this face that stared in shock right back at wasn't her face.

"No....That is not mask's not me!"
She managed to say reaching her hand forward against touching the mirror before touching her face. The Reflection did the same had to be her.... She was in utter shock, unable to explain what happened when the answer hit her like a ton of bricks "I died....Anna died. I am the only one in this body....I am this what I was meant to look like without her.?"she asked herself before she looked at the figure "Who are you?"she asked the mirror as three single words escaped her lips in response.
"I am....Colbolt."

Last edited by Colbolt Raizel on Mon Oct 31, 2016 8:13 am; edited 31 times in total

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#2 Re: Colbolt Raizel [done] on Sun Feb 14, 2016 6:59 pm

A few things before grading. You can't mention Aizen ashe is in the canon universe, we aso haven't started the canon plot yet so Aizen has not yet had his downfall. Your "Frost's Protection" also needs an effect chart, for example someone who is naturally two tiers higher than you would be like fighting a shinigami with bankai and that is leaving out the fact they might be using a release. Please address these and we will get to it ASAP.

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#3 Re: Colbolt Raizel [done] on Sun Feb 14, 2016 7:05 pm

Thank you I read my app three times and felt I missed something I will get on it mwuhahaha

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#4 Re: Colbolt Raizel [done] on Sun Feb 14, 2016 7:08 pm


also, I would mention that I'm the one playing Aizen ^^ so if you do mention him, please inform me so I'm aware of it and can act accordingly Smile btw, you can mention Aizen, but I must ask is your character meant to be in the cannon or alternate universe?

#5 Re: Colbolt Raizel [done] on Sun Feb 14, 2016 7:29 pm

((This is sakiko btw) and when this site originally had Canon characters that was colbolts past but I have had to change it over the years so I will leave it up to you cause she is adaptable

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#6 Re: Colbolt Raizel [done] on Sun Feb 14, 2016 7:38 pm


Ik Smile and I ask because how the site works now is that the cannon and alternate are two seperate universes and in the alternate universe, they ain't aware of anyone from the cannon universe besides Mayuri and Renji so to the alternate universe, Aizen still doesn't exist, but you could have Colbolt exist in the cannon universe so Aizen would exist for you to use, I was just wondering which universe you wanted colbolt to exist in?

#7 Re: Colbolt Raizel [done] on Sun Feb 14, 2016 7:43 pm

Well I think alternate is best cause amaya and Anna are two large parts of her past and both are only alternate

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#8 Re: Colbolt Raizel [done] on Sun Feb 14, 2016 7:50 pm


Ok then, then you'll need to replace Aizen with someone within the alternate universe that can do the same job, may I suggest this one?

#9 Re: Colbolt Raizel [done] on Sun Feb 14, 2016 8:03 pm

He works perfectly

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#10 Re: Colbolt Raizel [done] on Sun Feb 14, 2016 8:07 pm


thanks and your more then welcome to use him since he's just a NPC so go wild good

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