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on Fri Aug 28, 2015 6:09 am

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2nd Division
2nd Division



Who are you?






Name: Izuna Kimura
Alias:
Project 10: Esper
To be earned IC.
Age: 114
Age of Appearance: Dependant
Gender: N/A
Race/Species: Shinigami Mod Soul/Shinigami Kaizo Konpaku
Character Alignment: Lawful Good

Appearance: Izuna's appearance starts with his Reigai's most common form, his hair starts with his pitch black hair, his hair is very dark being black is borderline raven black in colour. His hair is of short length and very thick while the main style it tends to take on is the hair is spiked at the back to create points at the back of his hair and a flat top and sides. His hair frames his face with bangs, his hair is free of accessories and other bits and pieces. Sometimes however Izuna's hair takes a different form which is completely different from his usual one and that style is flat and hangs all around his head like a veil, it is swept to the sides of his face although sometimes his bangs fall into his eyes.

His eyes, like many suggest are the "windows to the soul", there to show the true depths of one's mind. While normally a dark shade of black many would call "coal-like" due to the sheer emptiness about them, those that peer into Izuna's eyes while are often surprised with the colour find it even more harder to read him. It is as if someone has drawn the curtains and locked the world out but funnily enough it is the stark opposite. While it often appears that he is blocking everybody out of who he is it is actually completely different. Izuna wishes that people could read him, he wishes his eyes conveyed what he wants them to convey although it is like Izuna's eyes let him see out but let nothing see within.

In some cases Izuna's eyes have been noted to be a deep shade of crimson, strangely though the eyes are completely different to normal human eyes, his eyes take on a three tomorrow design which circle his pupil leading many to call him the "Akame Oni", "Akame" from the red colour and "Oni" from the rye design and colour which shouldn't belong to any human leafing many to even fear him as something from the depths of Hell itself.

He has a angled face, very sculpted to say the least. His cheekbones are pronounced but high and his face is adorned with a rather small nose and tight set lips. His features are often soft which makes him look very kind and easy to approach although it rarely changes unless he is smiling or frowning, he rarely cries and often tries not to express any negative emotions for some strange reason. In many cases he often appears in a serene mood with a blissful appearance which adorns his features.

He is quite attractive, being able to swoon a lot of women with just looks alone. Izuna's body structure is one of someone in their prime, while he isn't in the age group of someone in their prime Izuna's body is at its peak for someone of their adolescent years. He is 5'5" in terms of how high his body naturally is and weighs about 115 lbs. His body is well toned, with defined muscles and a strong frame although it doesn't lose it's slender and agile form unlike many people like body builders who are just all muscle. He has a visible six pack with good pecs but he isn't so strong that his veins pop out when he flexes.

Face Claim: Sasuke Uchiha | Naruto Shippuden

Style/Clothing:
Shinigami Uniform - As a Shinigami Izuna wears a variant of the Shihakushō, he wears a black hakama held in place by the traditional white obi, adorning his feet are the standard shinigami footwear: white socks and Japanese sandals, Izuna's upper body is covered by the standard Shihakushō top as well although with a few alterations.

On his lower arms Izuna has plain grey bracers which he often uses against sword blows or other weapon attacks, they are usually concealed under his slightly longer bell sleeved top although the bracers also cover the top of the hand. His outfit also has a necklace which has two magatama being perfect reflections of each other. They are pale green and one of his greatest treasures, he also keeps a traditional Shaolin spade on his back which is held on by a cord which holds it in place and runs along his upper body, it appears to be made of dark red magatama.

Shaolin Spade:


Mod Soul Attire - If he needs to Izuna seems to wear long trench coats and pants, he usually always wears black but some exceptions have been made, although none of them seen by his fellow shinigami. So far no one has ever seen anything other than his usual attire; black shoes which double as dress shoes but also combat boots, black pants which have small pockets capable of fitting a dagger in them the pants feel rough and have little to no luster about them.

The upper half of his outfit is a simple shirt which is dark black much like his pants but a closer inspection shows it to be light weight and breathable so it doesn't absorb moisture or sweat. Most of his outfit is covered by a black trench coat which reaches down to his mid-shin. The coat has a high collar which hides his neck, it is closed at the front and hides his upper-body inside the coat he keeps multiple daggers, throwing knives and other bladed weapons. He has also been seen in other variants of the outfit such as the exact same outfit as the aforementioned one but white.

Casual Wear - When relaxing or in the human world, Izuna will usually try to wear something that doesn't draw attention to himself, in the human world for example he would probably settle for just faded blue jeans and a T-Shirt. In Soul Society he wears things more complex, often wearing loose fitting traditional attires he can be commonly seen in a pale blue kimono with a radiant pattern of dark blue adorning it.

Another attire is his common attire, when just relaxing but still needed to be ready for combat he wears a loose white shirt which is open to reveal his chest and long white sleeves, like his shinigami attire he wears his twin magatama necklace and his pair of plain grey bracers. His shirt is made of a light fabric which doesn't restrict his movements. On the back of the top near his neck is the symbol of Squad Three, the Marigold in the colour of the squad: Spring Green.  

For his lower body he wears dark navy blue pants which is covered at the top by a lighter shade of blue cloth which is held in place by a purple rope belt which is tied in a bow.

Formal Attire - If Izuna would ever be invited or forced to go to a formal event he usually takes on an attire that is dependant on the kind of event, in a modern setting he usually wears something along the lines of a suit, black and white a the main colours but in a traditional Japanese outing he tends to wear a long turquoise robe which is adorned with a silver scale like pattern, it is finished with long bell sleeves which cover his hands and a high mandarin collar.

Tattoo's/Scars/Etc: Technically Izuna can alter his bodies form in his Reigai/Gigai but over years of missions and hollow fighting of course Izuna has gotten a scar or two although they have been removed by his ability of altering his genetic code. He doesn't really even have any tattoos, his skin is clear as a blank canvas.

Personality: Izuna is a young adult who is quite a kind fellow, he is very nice and polite usually being described as a person who is easy to approach, many even claim his presence is comforting to be around but that is simply his "aura"; the feeling he gives off to those around him. Quite a generous person too especially when he happily gives up things he needs for other people who he seems need it more than he does, a lit of times he as even offered his umbrella to another person and allowed himself to become drenched in the process.

He is remarkably calm and collected as well, he has a fun loving almost boyish feel but when necessary it is like something switches in his head, he can become calm, collective and completely cool in a moments notice, almost like nothing can bother him and this like before tends to rub off on people and can reassure and give confidence to people. When he is calm and reserved many are actually intimidated by how confident he is, how it is like the world can't affect him at all.

Another trait is his incredible mountain of knowledge, he has almost limitless access to knowledge no matter what it is and since he has an eidetic memory he never forgets, this makes him and excellent teacher and tutor as well which often makes him take on a monk like persona, he acts really calm and wise by talking in riddles but still getting his point across. It is quite funny considering the fact he will be cheerful and carefree then going on about the meaning of life and sounding like a wise old man.

Because of his humorous nature he takes pleasure in making people smile and/or feel happy, it brings joy to him wen he brings joy to others and will always try to lighten the mood with some humour except certain situations, he doesn't crack jokes at funerals or important meetings to be clear and that is just who he is, always trying to make people calm and feel better, he rarely ever thinks about himself though an sometimes when he makes unnecessary jokes it is because he is trying to cheer himself up.

Izuna is recently finding himself to become more human in many ways, originally he was "empty" but developing empathy has changed him from his old and empty self, he is finding himself becoming more and more like a human, more independent and less drawn to those that made him. He is in a sense one of the most human-like modified spirits seen especially when he decided to take up a lower position in squad three and forsake his position in Squad twelve. He is also very empathic as seen when he seems to be able to read people's emotions and understand how they feel.

Some might describe Izuna as lazy due to the constant appearances he gives off of not actually doing any work but strangely it always seems to get done. Often this leaves others dumbfounded but Izuna is quite organised and is constantly making sure everything is done, it is what he does best being similar to a control freak when it comes to work. He never leaves anything unfinished and follows through with what he says which leads many to find him a trustworthy person.

Izuna is a person who doesn't take favourites. In his eyes everyone is equal regardless of strength, wealth, gender, race etc. Izuna doesn't believe anyone is better than another and as such he treats everyone the same no matter who they be. His enemies he gives his respect to the same as his friends although he has a strong sense of justice and will always try to ring about what is right if it is within his power to do so.

When with his friends and allies Izuna is a cheerful person who is easy to to to, he often lightens the mood and seems to raise morale wherever he goes. He will always help his friends and if need be he will protect his friends wherever possible. When meeting new people Izuna is polite and kind to them, he will treat them with respect and try to befriend them although be isn't pushy about it and will back off if it is clear they are against his presence.

If ever facing an enemy Izuna isn't an arsehole about it, he will talk to them like any other person. With respect and kindness, he will however maintain a vigilant eye and alertness about him which makes him tend to stand a bit more on edge. When faced with despair Izuna often hides it and prefers not to share it, he tends to leave other in the dark about his inner emotions although he rarely will ever show his emotions outwardly.

In the middle of a fight Izuna's priority is those around him, he will try to protect others, the landscape and then himself. He is determined to end the fight as soon as possible to minimise damage and death due to the fact he truly hates those things. Although when in a fight and his lord ones are in danger he still has an aura of analytical behaviour and calmness although he focuses more on them than anything else as he tries to somehow get them out of that danger.

(For Likes, Dislikes, Ambitions, etc, go for 1-3 sentences per point, more if you wish.)

Likes & Strengths:

• Meditation - Izuna spends a lot of time in meditation, the result is total calmness, he has learned how to not be distracted and stay focused although when he meditates he can do it for hours on end which passes a lot of time, in a light meditation he can be easily disturbed but in the very deepest of meditation he will not wake for sometimes days despite outside interference.
• Illusions - One of the things Izuna likes is illusions, things that should be real because your mind says so but aren't actually real. He loves to see things that aren't real but because of this he can often catch onto illusions very quickly, optical illusions are among his favourite.
• Training - When someone says training Izuna will always be up for it , he is determined to get stronger. Hopefully he will become stronger to protect others and maybe even become strong enough to be captain.
• Strategy Games - Games which involve making tactical decisions and using the mind brings a great deal of enjoyment to him. Not only that but what he does in games he often applies to reality. He is an excellent strategist and tactician for these reasons.
• Nature - In nature everything flows, beautiful plants and animals he is simply attached to nature, in nature everything is more blissful in particular meditation. He also is much more relaxed in a natural environment.
• -minimum of 5 things


Dislikes, Fears and Weaknesses:

• Interruptions - While meditating, sleeping or basically anything Izuna hates to be interrupted unnecessarily, sure it's okay if it warrants the interruption but "Hey Izuna,can you do this?" while he is meditating and it lacks importance just irritates him.    
• Boredom - Does anyone like to be bored? Izuna doesn't, well sure he can for short periods of time but for hours on end doing absolutely nothing, he will become restless and seek to do something.
• Hypocrites - These people contradict whatever they say. They say they don't like this and then you would see them do that just after they say it. Izuna finds deep dislike in this dice it completely denies what one just said and then is such a complete lie.
• Destruction - What good comes from    destruction, nothing. It simply causes set backs from progress and that is counter productive and annoying. Izuna hate when things are destroyed, particularly his own objects and creations.
• Death - Death is pointless, all one can gain is the satisfaction in knowing a person is dead. Death just wastes human life and life isn't second chances so one must make the most of it while they can. It is simply stupid to waste a life for no good purpose but to say you can.
• -minimum of 5 things

Ambitions/Dreams/Goals:

• Mod Soul Developer ~ Izuna wishes to continue research into Mod Souls, he finds them very valuable for the future as they provide soldiers immediately with enhanced and possibly incredible powers.
• Squad Twelve Captain ~ The young ESP Soul desires to one day become the captain of squad twelve, to become the first captain who is a Mod Soul of course his mod soul nature he likes to hide and reveal it as little as possible but he deems that he needs a zanpakuto before he can become a captain.
• Psionics Master ~ Izuna is one of the few individuals in the world that has the ability of psionics (a psychic ability of any form), he wishes to one day become the master of psionics and be able to be undefeated with mental based powers.
• To find a Zanpakuto ~ Izuna wishes to be able to bring out a zanpakuto from his soul, he has been seeking out one of decades and wishes that one day he will find one. With a zanpakuto he can become stronger and protect others.
Great Inventor - In just five years Izuna created a reigai/gigai that can alter the biology of the artificial body at the will of the user. He is filled with ideas and for that reason he desires to one day be able to create them and be known as a great inventor, who knows maybe one of the inventions will be legendary.  
• -minimum of 3 things




Kaizo Konpaku Specifics




Container Appearance: A White Sphere
Host Object: Custom Reigai, can be put into anything really though.
Host Name: Izuna




Battle Specs




Fighting Style: Izuna is quite a capable fighter, being able to learn and memorise everything around him he sees Izuna is very adaptive and flexible as a fighter due to this trait he possesses. It also allows him to quickly analyse his opponents and learn their fighting style. This leads him to quickly find weak points in his opponents style and exploit him, using this trait he can also fight on par with those of higher strength.

While Izuna is alright at fighting he excels in tactics. Due to being an ESP Soul he has a higher brain capacity than normal humans, he is very skilled in the art of war and battle strategy. He is usually underestimated in terms of his combat prowess but has been known to surprise others and is often known for creating highly complex strategies and maneuverers which often befuddle even master tacticians.

Despite being a capable fighter Izuna has many handicaps, he lacks a zanpakutō and many traits which is present in other shinigami, he doesn't have skills such as shunpo or kidō as of yet while he is currently working on those aspects although it really is a huge handicap considering he poses as a Shinigami and doesn't have a zanpakutō, can't use Kidō etc although some people confuse Seipo with Shunpo which allows him to get away with that. Izuna strangely seems to not use what he is best at, being capable of psychic abilities Izuna rarely ever freely shows them due to the fact he tries to appear as a Shinigami, it leads him to only use them in dire situations or if alone.

Modified Ability:  (Personal abilities are special powers unique to your character, such as being able to put your enemies into an illusion trance by touching them, or being able to turn your energy into solid dirt permanently. These are traits your character was either born with or attained through special circumstances. They cannot be taught to or learned by others. Examples would be fire elemental reiatsu, unnaturally sharp reiatsu sensing, and genetic mutations.)Limit: 2


Name: Maximum Brain Capacity
Effect: This is the trait which defines ESP Souls from normal Mod Souls, this trait is found in all ESP Souls although it is usually only Enhanced Brain Capacity, with very few ESP Souls ever gaining Maximum usage of their brains capacity. In a common sense it is simply using more than the average human's brain capacity which often leads to the users being able to do Psychic Abilities.

Izuna is an excellent example of this ability in its peak, it allows rapid processing of knowledge and an accelerated learning rate. One trait which stands put among all is an eidetic memory which is a chronological photographic memory. Izuna cannot forget something once he knows it, it is both a curse and a huge benefit in the sense he can learn things incredibly fast and also remember them for future use. Not only does this do them benefits for memory and learning it also allows them to concentrate on a level in which they are focused and incredibly competent with concentrating which makes it hard for their mind to wander.

While the mind is concentrated they can do a range of things such as multitasking and other incredible things since their thought process is enhanced, they can go through thoughts in rapid succession unlike most humans who tend to have to think about it consciously ESP Souls can do things like incredibly difficult mathematics in a matter of seconds. They are indeed incredibly enlightened.


Name: Omni-Psionic
Effect: While it is technically the ability to utilise any and all psychic abilities. Izuna as the first ESP Soul was lucky to obtain this ability. It grants him the ability to use all psychic abilities although they are dormant which new has only granted him a small portion of its power, he is just scratching the surface if you will of his true potential. Unlike many other Mod Souls whom fall under Izuna's classification he can learn them all while others may only be limited to a certain amount of psychic abilities.

He currently has the two basic kinds of psionics; Telepathy and Telekinesis. With these it allows him to use one which affects the mind and the other to use in the real world. This allows a sense of balance to his abilities so that he is capable of fighting on two fronts. He is currently unable to use the ability to its maximum potential although it is quite capable, his two sub-abilities are currently quite advanced and has allowed him many more capabilities than those of his form who tend to rarely achieve his level.



Mod Techniques:

(These are moves your character was taught or trained and developed on their own. They are things anyone would be able to learn and perform unless they are dependent on your unique race or abilities. Examples are custom shunpo variations, hakuda/zanjutsu techniques, and using your reiatsu on an object to simulate telekinesis.) Limit 8


Technique Name: Psychic Navigation
Technique Description: This is a simple technique that uses Izuna's telepathy to work like a bat's echolocation, he emits a constant stream of reiatsu which his mind interprets to create a map of the building or area he is in, this is excellent for being in buildings since it will also highlight other people when the reiatsu passes over them, it lasts for five posts but the map stays with him indefinitely but has a three post cool down. By having contact with someones reiatsu or something that has a fragment of their reiatsu he can track it over long distance although it is not entirely accurate and cannot pass through other dimensions as he isn't experienced enough right now.

Technique Effect Chart:
Similar in theory to an Arrancar's Pesquisa




Technique Name: Psychic Binding
Technique Description: The use of psychic binding allows Izuna to implant his willpower on another person's mind, while using this abiltiy Izuna must maintain almost flawless concentration to even use it let alone hold it. He can only hold a person for a maximum of five posts and afterwards he suffers a terrible headache. When binding someone he cannot move and even then a he can't hold more than one person so a group can easily overpower him and negate the entire purpose of the technique. While it usually only causes headaches overusing the ability for more than five posts will make his nose bleed and after ten posts he loses consciousness.

Technique Effect Chart:

*The effect chart is for damage, durability, or any other after effect of a technique. The damage/effect/etc will be based off of tiers.*

Opponent is Two+ Tiers Lower: The target of this tier are bound with little resistance, because their mind is weaker than his own he is able to bind their mind and in turn their bodies for as long as he desires so long as he isn't distracted.  
Opponent is One Tier Lower: A target of this tier is bound with a small struggle, he can bind them indefinitely although the longer he binds them the hardw it is to keep it up.
Opponent is Equal Tier: Against someone of equal power Izunaiant able to fully bind them although this allows them very sluggish and restrained movement like they were covered in chains.
Opponent is One Tier Higher: People of this level have more freedom than those of less power, being stronger than Izuna they can move although they still feel bound and -1 FAR in Speed.
Opponent is Two+ Tiers Higher: Aside from a -1 FAR in Speed the target is unaffected.





Technique Name: Telekinetic Body Puppet
Technique Description: Should Izuna turn out to be poisoned or stunned which would ultimately lead him to be unable to move he can telekinetically control his body like one would a puppet. This ten prevents him from being stunned and paralysed although this doesn't mean his body isn't still affected an should someone be able to mess his thought process up the whole technique falls apart. It has a ten post cool down after use.

Technique Effect Chart:
N/A




Locked (unless permission is given by the other rpers in a thread):
Technique Name: Mental Invasion
Technique Description: Izuna does this by forcefully projecting his will into an opponent, at its weakest he can cause headaches although in reality it allows him to forcefully obtain information and other personal knowledge. This ability is also able to enter others illusions and if he is the strongest there he can manipulate it to a small degree. The possibilities are endless, this also allows the chance to predict what they will do although he can't predict things which is done off impulse.

It also grants him a strange effect known as upload/download. the purpose is to be able to quickly give or receive information at an almost instantaneous rate, when Izuna touches someone he can insert some of his consciousness and in turn create a temporary pathway which allows him to take and give information to anyone he desires, although it is needed to be with the target's consent he will find it harder depending how much harder their mind is to enter as some who mentally suppress things from him when he enters makes it harder for him to use the technique.      

Technique Effect Chart:

*The effect chart is for damage, durability, or any other after effect of a technique. The damage/effect/etc will be based off of tiers.*

Opponent is Two+ Tiers Lower: Someone of this tier allows Izuna to enter their mind very easily although if they revolt wildly then it begins to make it harder on Izuna, in particular if someone has an inner hollow it makes it much harder.
Opponent is One Tier Lower: Someone of this tier allows Izuna to enter their mind easily although if they revolt wildly then it begins to make it harder on Izuna, in particular if someone has an inner hollow it makes it much harder.
Opponent is Equal Tier: Someone on par in power with Izuna allows Izuna to enter their mind with some difficulty though if they revolt wildly then it begins to make it harder on Izuna, in particular if someone has an inner hollow it makes it impossible for him to invade their mind.
Opponent is One Tier Higher: Someone of this tier allows Izuna to enter their mind with a big struggle although if they revolt wildly then it begins to make it harder on Izuna.
Opponent is Two+ Tiers Higher: Someone of this tier makes it impossible for Izuna to enter their mind. It would be like trying to go through someone with a psychic shield.




Technique Name: Seipo (Mind Step)
Technique Description: This is a simple technique used to replace the Shinigami's shunpo, why he did this is because he doesn't actually obtain the natural ability from his artifical body or modified abilities which means he had to develop his own. Izuna must be able to look at where he will Seipo to. He then will begin to glow before speeding off to his destination although it is completely silent, unlike the Shunpo however using it to much makes him weary and makes him likely to pass out with to much use.

Technique Effect Chart:
Izuna's equivalent to Shunpo.





Host Body




Host Power/Ability: (These abilities are pertaining to the body that you are currently using. Was the body previously a quincy or shinigami's? Or was it created for the mod soul. Tell us what their body is capable of.) Max of 1


Ability Name: Biological Alteration
Ability Description: Izuna's gigai is quite unique, he is very intelligent but many underestimate his true amount of knowledge that is at his disposal, he singlehandedly created his own modified gigai that can manipulate its genetic structure. Because he is genderless and technically has no natural form he has made it to be able to shapeshifting, transforming and reshaping the entire genetic code. This allows multiple forms of enhancement, impersonation and even just being able to change the form at will to anything. He can currently turn into only humanoid beings but with training he can learn to turn into animals or make a form of genetic reconstruction/regeneration. Unfortunately for him he lacks to ability to manipulate his reiatsu and reiryoku output which may give him away to an accurate eye. The form he takes must also be able to live, which limits him to life forms and not inanimate functions.

Host Techniques: (These are techniques available only to the Host Body. Limit 4)



Technique Name: Augmented Body (Passive)
Technique Description: Having the body being able to alter itself allows Izuna to develop superhuman abilities, his body naturally enhances his physical power by adding +1 FAR to strength and speed, this allows him to preform incredible feats such as lifting cars with ease and moving incredibly fast. This can also be changed up a bit which allows him to loose -1 FAR from one of the stats to temporarily add +1 to another physical stat.

Technique Effect Chart:
N/A




Technique Name: Shape-Shifting
Technique Description: Using his genetic alteration Izuna is capable of shape-shifting his form into whatever he desires although currently he is limited to humanoid forms, he can change his entire appearance from anything, gender, hair colour and overall genetics. Basically anything really, it is perfect for infiltration and disguise although if used in quick succession (more than three times per two posts) he becomes stuck in the form for the rest of the thread. He is completely different making him unable to be recognised by anything other than his psychic footprint and his reiatsu or reiryoku.  

Technique Effect Chart:
N/A




Technique Name: Rapid Growth
Technique Description: Izuna is able to rapidly grow, using this he can replicate his cellular structure at an incredibly fast rate. This is mainly used for rapidly growing his limbs to act like a snake which grants him a larger attacking distance however he can also grow his body on a massive scale. This leads him able to grow to being up to twelve feet tall although it makes him a larger target and lowers his speed by -1 FAR for every two feet he grows.

Technique Effect Chart:
N/A




Technique Name: Accelerated Cellular Regeneration
Technique Description: Izuna can rapidly regenerate. In other words, he recreates lost or damaged tissues, organs and limbs, sometimes slowing, or even stopping, aging. The rate and amount of healing varies widely, he can regrow missing limbs. He is generally in very good physical shape as their bodies are constantly reverting to healthy state, granting them nigh-inexhaustible stamina and vitality.

At higher levels, Izuna can regenerate not just their cellular tissues, but also his DNA, undoing genetic mutations and breakdown, as well as maintaining one's youth by extending telomeres. This also gives him immunity to earthly (Not Spiritual ones) diseases and infections, undoing any unwanted symptoms, as well as provide a form of self-sustenance, forgoing the needs for oxygen and food intake. If advanced enough, the ability will cause the body to cease aging as the cells are regenerating and dying in equilibrium, granting immortality. (Age wise. Can still be killed from wounds).

This technique is always active and is passive;
1 post - Able to heal small wounds such as cuts and bruises
2 posts - Able to heal medium wounds, deep cuts and cracked bones
3 posts - Able to heal major wounds, broken bones and and tattered flesh
4 posts - Able to heal severed limbs, liver, etc.

Technique Effect Chart:
N/A





Tell me your story..




History: 115 years ago as we all know there was Project: Vanguard which began late in the year. While only one hundred mod souls were created in the first bunch Izuna was privileged to be created as the tenth Modified Soul, created from Project 10: Esper which was aiming to enhance mental aspects of the soul. While it was only expected that they would have a faster thought rate and a better brain capacity, they got more than try bargained for when Izuna's enhanced brain capacity bestowed him with mental-base powers.

From the moment he was made Izuna was raised by his "mother" Marie Takeda, it was by her research Izuna was born and so he referred to her as his mother. He also grew up with an older brother although only older by a few months who was Project 8: Eye. Little is known about his older brother who is named Kurochi Kimura, he and Izuna spent much time together when not being tutored by Marie, he was older although seemed much older than the young Izuna. When they would be called into have check-ups from scientists it was seen that they both were developing at an extremely fast rate, this is because of Izuna using his Telepathy to bring Kurochi up to his level of thought.

After five years of growing Izuna and Kurochi had reached the time when Central 46 cancelled the project and forbade continuation of Modified Soul development. Izuna and Kurochi were able to hide within two temporary Gigai which Marie made an they took false identities. When Marie added Izuna to the research team that was tryin to develop the idea of what could bypass the law of not using human corpses Izuna raised the question of spiritual bodies called Reigai. Despite his first theory on it Izuna cannot be acclaimed for the creation and development of it as that credit goes to Marie who reverse engineered Gigai technology to become Reigai for Mod Souls to inhabit.

Immediately the proof was handed to Central 46 and they were forced to allow the project to continue due to the loophole that Marie found and exploited. It was reinstated as Project: Genesis with the purpose of diving into the depths of Mod Soul possibilities, this could be the answer to an army in just months. The power to create super soldiers and fight off Hueco Mundo's hollow population. Izuna had also taken to it and began working on it, he would go on to develop his own Reigai which could genetically change its DNA coding at will.

Soon enough even Captain Oleg Atanasi took an interest in the project and in particular Izuna who had become quite the genius. He would be taken under Oleg's wing as a student although Kurochi strangely disappeared one day with no explanation or warning, he was just gone. This left Izuna remarkably upset and lost without his brother, But Izuna knew he had to keep going. He was promoted to become Squad Twelve's Third Seated Officer and was known quite well as one of the most enlightened minds due o his higher rate of learning and eidetic memory, he was quite literally one of the best scientists of his day and age.

Soon enough however Izuna decided he wanted to learn more on medicine and healing, applying to train with Squad Four but not abandon Squad Twelve he was permitted to learn and after a while Izuna was capable of doing medical procedures and surgery in the Squad Four barracks while using his research to develop multiple things of his own designs. But soon enough he fell out of medicine, already a capable medical officer he turned towards other fields.

He had been developing his Psionics and learning more of the "ESP Category Modified Souls" and made the breakthrough of them being one of the most excellent groups of all the mod souls. Intelligent and skilled, capable of learning incredibly fast not to mention psychic abilities made them excellent scientists and warriors. Oleg took to Izuna's kind and began reproducing his set up to create one hundred ESP Souls although they were set up in a crazy way since very few ever reached the pinnacle of the ESP Soul potential. Izuna and only a handful of other "ESP Souls" have been known to be able to reach maximum brain capacity and omni-psionics.

Izuna, ever growing and economy more and more human met a woman who was the tenth seat of Squad Three, Violet Kurotsuki was her name and Izuna instantly took a liking the the young woman. They became close friends and worked together a lot. When she was assigned to the human world Izuna decided to tag along since he rarely left Soul Society. It wasn't until they were attacked by a Hollow that everything went horribly wrong, unknown to Violet she was a Vizard and the attacking hollow was able to amplify its power to make her under go Hollowfication.

While this occurred Izuna fought off and mentally tore apart his foe until he returned to Violet, he quickly devised a method to save her but it would destroy her Shinigami powers, she agreed and Izuna did the procedure which first involves cutting her soul chain and soul sleep to make her human and then balance the hollow and human power in her body although this lead for her to become a Fullbringer and strangely her powers were more hollow-based. With this Violet and Izuna spent a night together which would lead them to have two children, which isn't known to anyone else as Izuna claims Violet also died in combat.

Izuna later applied for a position as a seated member of Squad Three under the mysterious captain although it has long since been delayed and no reply has been received because of Squad Three's captaincy change during the time. Izuna has also been in constant search for a zanpakutō, it would assure that he would be seen as a Shinigami and not a Mod Soul to keep up his current deceit of being a regular Shinigami.

Rp Sample:

Kuroi - Kuroi had been walking for days, of course he felt no exhaustion from it, who would after all. It would be quite pitiful for a spiritual being to not be able to walk three days straight on the lovely soft sand of Hueco Mundo. Well Hueco Mundo is great, think about it sand, sand, more sand, eternal night and more. To be honest Kuroi thought of this place not as hell like many would think but actually he saw it more as Purgatory. So why was Kuroi walking for so long, well a few days ago or whatever it was since Hueco Mundo has no days Kuroi felt a battle of epic proportions after sensing it on his pequisa he decided to join the fight. Sadly when he arrived everything was over he was able to clearly see everything about who was there: A nice little girl, human and quite inexperienced, a rather dark lad who seemed to possess Bankai, multiple lieutenants and a captain but they don't matter. The real interest was the arrancar. Male, hungry and so ever strong it had to be Anamist the man he had been looking for. But alas he arrived to find weak little whelps of hollows trying to scavenge what they could but nothing was available.

So after butchering them for trying to attack him he started hunting Anamist, he had been following for however many days and finally pinpointed where he was going: Las Noches. Despite its strange ghostly halls Hollows and Arrancar used it for shelter and home. Anamist who was obviously injured and weakened came here for shelter and now the Swordsman had found him. But the devilishly handsome guy had no interest in fighting he wanted a nice little chat with the red butler. So I must be pretty close to him now, maybe a few kilometers. Kuroi dived in sonído to cover the last of the distance, when he emerged he looked up at the looming shadow of the fortress. Why has no one claimed this place to live yet? It's huge and well established Kuroi said to himself. Upon entering its halls he would continue to trace Anamist to his room and then he would reach the door. Considering Anamist had used Pequisa to find him then he would remain undetected until he knocked on the door, if he did it would clearly show Kuroi as an arrancar. So now the swordsman waited patiently and professionally at the door until Anamist opened it or he was welcomed inside.

Anamist - The red butler had recently been in a long struggle with the shinigami of Soul Society. What had been a normal day in Hueco Mundo- had turned into a peculiar and unforunate turn of events. Where he had first met and started a fight with a human shinigami- i had turned into a semi-friendship and then into a battle of the death. From that point, another shinigami who both fighters knew, respectively on separate sides of the fight. Anamist had never intended to kill either of them, but he had wanted to scare the human girl into not being gullible about the terrible nature of hollow and arrancar. Anamist was an exception most of the time. He possessed proper etiquette and gracefulness that even the majority of the shinigami lacked. Few and far between were people who could match the odd butler's properness. Most of them were humans, long dead in the 16th century.

Reinforcements had arrived on that fight however and forced Anamist to retreat. Had he truthfully been intending to kill them, he wouldn't have backed down from the greater number of them: his opponent Luke was moments away from exploding and all of his other foes had been entrapped like puppets with his cero garrote wiring. A simple mental command and they would have been torn to shreds: he had suppressed his beast form's killing intent though and by sheer willpower he had retaken control of his body. Afterwards, his mental capacity was severely drained and any further aggression between the shinigami and he would have lost his sanity permanently. Luckily, he had been able to retreat by escaping into the Menos Forest, a place where even most shinigami refused to enter because of the number of hollow who lived there.

He hadn't stayed there long however- even someone of his caliber could be overrun by the sheer number of hollow. Dumb creatures who thought more of food than their very lives: truly formidable foes. After leaving Menos Forest, the butler had sought a place of solitude. In the distance, the large compound known as Las Nochas was visible. It was an avoided place- yet no one seemed to know why. The monsters tried not to stay there but to sleep from time to time. The truth was, Las Nochas was built upon the very spot where Anamist had once held his own kingdom within Hueco Mundo. Back over two thousand years ago, it had been a vast empire with servants everywhere. He had been a cruel master back then, though still very proper and graceful. he had lost the ability to taste everything however and that caused him to lose interest in power and eating.

Now here he was again after two thousand years, standing on the sand which never seemed to change the appearance around him. To a timeless being, it was as if in a blink of the eye- his kingdom had risen and crumbled. Now here he was at the recently constructed Las Nochas... recently in terms of the last thousand years or so... It was a vast complex with many rooms and sleeping quarters. All of which was barren, lacking both taste and color- as if the very life itself was gone from the building. That was something that Anamist could not have: to live in a place of ill-taste was not something he could stand. Perhaps it is fitting that I reconstruct an organization where I once ruled... but first, this place should be remodeled. he spoke out loud as he snapped his fingers. His spiritual power beginning to emanate from his white silk gloved hand. Suddenly, a polite knock on the door nearest him snapped him from the beautiful display he had imagined.

His body tensed momentarily and he reached out with his sense, he sensed no real threat- no killing intent or ill-will. Curiously and hesitantly, he opened the door and peered through the doorway. He blinked in confusion for a moment, was he staring at a mirror? No... this version had raven black hair instead of his own crimson hair. Umm.. Yes? he was speechless, normally in this situation he would wait for them to introduce themselves and then he would bow eloquently and introduce himself. Something told Anamist that if he did this, he would feel more like he was a copycat.

Kuroi - It took very little time for Anamist to open the door, inside Kuroi felt his Reiryoku flare up but he didn't know what the man was doing in there. The almost comical expression on Anamist's face, a face of confusion brought mental laughter to his mind. He was expecting a similar appearance to Anamist, the first hollow he ever met which mentioned the man had mistakes him for Anamist. Although even now he was surprised by the striking resemblance in their appearances if it wasn't for the difference between hair colours Kuroi would've been very quizzical on the situation.

He smiled politely, all Anamist seemed to be able to say was question why he was here and the appearance seemed to get to him. Kuroi would put his hand across his chest before bowing, a courteous bow. Hello Anamist Souigetsu, My name is Kuroi Shingetsu but I go by multiple aliases such as The Black Swordsman or Black Knight, you probably have never heard my name but the titles are quite known along the white sands of Hueco Mundo he would say, he looked at Anamist more closely although still appeared to be looking him in the eye He doesn't seem to be injured anymore. He must have recovered but either way I hope that he won't attack. Kuroi would make a gesture which worked perfectly with his next question, May I come in? I would like to talk and that is all Anamist

If Anamist allowed Kuroi to come in he would walk in and stand out of the man's way until he indicated where he wanted Kuroi to sit. The swordsman had no visible weapon on his body and the only thing that could be his zanpakuto was a pocket watch, this indeed was his zanpakuto but he would never bring a weapon to a social place, such a thing was only used to kill. If Anamist didn't permit the black butler's entry he would stand patiently waiting for his response.

Anamist - Anamist's eyes inspected Kuroi quickly as the black-haired butler went into a butler-like bow. Their butler outfits were very similar and they both wore pocket watches, each of slightly different taste. His mannerisms were quite perfect as well, his movements graceful and his voice rolling off his tongue like centuries of practice proper speech. He would introduce himself properly as Kuroi Shingetsu and Anamist would find himself bowing in turn: he bowed deeply at the waist with one arm across his chest and his other arm out-stretched to the room behind him. A pleasure to meet you, Kuroi Shingetsu. Allow me to properly introduce myself as Anamist Souigetsu, the Red Butler... or if you are old enough- the Crimson Butler of Hueco Mundo.

His latter reference was dated over two thousand years ago when he ruled a great portion of Hueco Mundo with an iron fist and an empty stomach. He had been called the Crimson Butler because not a day went by where he didn't bathe himself in a feast of foe and servant alike's blood. That was a distant time however and Anamist seriously doubted few enough still lived that could remember such a gruesome era.

He could see that Kuroi was inspecting him, Why does he inspect me so? Did he expect me to be different... or injured maybe? Then... possibly he knows about my previous fight in the White Sands. Surely he would know that picking a fight with me would be foolish. I believ I can trust his gentleman code. Anamist thought to himself as he stood up from his bow and motioned for Kuroi to come in. Please, come in. Forgive the bland taste of this place, I have only recently return- Uh, I mean...I have only recently taken up refuge here. If you give me some time, I will have this place presentable and in good taste for the late queen of England in the 16th century. He said teasingly but in a serious tone that implicated that he personally knew the queen during that era.

It felt strange, to look at a butler so similar to him and to wonder if she should be offering his new guest something to eat and drink. Serving a butler as a butler seemed a bit bizarre. No matter! A guest is a guest! Anamist would snap his fingers and a couple of lavish red leather seats would appear with a small table comfortably between them. On this little coffee table was a tray of silver with two cups of tea and some kind of sweet dessert. It is best to sit and talk in luxury, is it not? he would ask Kuroi as he motioned for the butler to sit down, afterwards he would sit down himself and hand Kuroi a cup of tea. A rare blend from France, it is a taste I remember quite well. he would explain the tea blend to Kuroi. He could no longer taste anything, but he could till remember each and every taste quite well even after two thousand years. He had perfected his skill of manipulating his reiryoku into a perfect mimicry of the dishes.

Kuroi - With his usual smile Kuroi watched as Anamist did a bow, he then formally introduced himself as Anamist Souigetsu and the red butler, his second alias came as a surprise to Kuroi but he showed only the slightest sign of surprise at the comment and it faded almost as quickly as it appeared. So Anamist was the crimson butler, I never made that link. Guess it never occurred to me but that still makes him at least 2000 years old. When Anamist welcomed him in he saw the room as something bland, it was tidy and organised but was very plain. He smiled wider when he heard the butler mention him changing up the place, fit for a 16th century Queen. Was he teasing me, he is trying to mess with me, well I guess I better play his game. As he walked past Anamist he would make his passive statement, although really he was retorting to Anamist's comment. 16th Century? Didn't the Black Death happen then? That was a huge mistake on my part, my apologies if I am wrong as it was so long ago. I do remember King Leonidas though, that man really loved to fight although he did do it quite to much when he got myself and 298 Spartans killed He said, if Anamist knew about the world timeline he probably would figure that Kuroi was more than 5000 years old, even older than himself. Not to mention he was admitting to have accidentally started the Black Death which killed hundreds of people.

When Anamist materialised a table and chairs out of nothing Kuroi seemed to appear stunned for a moment, he looked at Anamist with respect and admiration. Indeed it is good to live in luxury He said as he walked over and sat down, he noticed some tea had materialised in front of him. He took a sip after having it explained to him, he did like it very much, Very nice, I remember when tea was first discovered. It was quite the big deal in England, he would say before leaning back into the chair and waiting for Anamist's response. His certain question and discussion would come up later, but he could not just do that the moment he met this man. Do you require any staff or help, I have a few human maids to help you, after all we have things to discuss, Kuroi said smiling, if Anamist said yes he would flick his hand and a garganta would open to a staff area of a restaurant and two young girls would come through, Meet Anastasia and Flora, they are two spiritually aware humans who have served me well, tonight they are at your disposal, he would say kindly while the two girls in maids outfits stood awaiting his command.

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Bumping for Completion.

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Hey, it's Erida here. This is quick review ^_^ The history looks good, and I think it should be added as official history for modified souls, as we discussed (probably rewording it, so it won't be about Izuna, but the mod souls in general - however, this has no effect on your character.)

The species should say; Kaizo Konpaku/Mod Soul, not Shinigami - Mod Soul, etc. A modified soul cannot be a shinigami - although, since Izuna inhibits a Reigai, he appears like a regular soul/shinigami to others.

And gosh, I love the choice of face claim ~ ♥!

Izuna Kimura wrote:
Name: Extrasensory Perception
Effect: Izuna being a Mod Soul has been modified to be an "ESP Soul", a mod soul which is modified to have psychic-like abilities. Being one he has gained the traits of Psionic Manipulation although the abilities he can unlock haven't yet revealed themselves to him and as such he hasn't scratched the surface of his unique form.

Extrasensory Perception is often referred to as the Sixth Sense, it allows he user to learn things by means which the human senses cannot obtain information, when Izuna uses his senses he can see through things such as walls and gain telescopic sight. Izuna's ability extends further though, due to the strange nature of Izuna's senses he can learn almost any information he desires by "seeing" it through the sixth sense. Although certain things are harder and sometimes impossible to see because he is yet to be able to fully control his Extrasensory Perception.

Clairalience: A form of extrasensory perception wherein users are able to sense smells/aromas from the past, present, or at locations not relative to them.
Clairaudience: A form of extrasensory perception wherein users are able to mentally pick up sounds from the past, present, or at locations not relative to them, including hearing supernatural sounds, etc.
Claircognizance: A form of extrasensory perception wherein users are able to acquire psychic knowledge primarily by intrinsic means. This is the ability to know something without a physical explanation why you know it.
Clairempathy: A form of extrasensory perception wherein users are able to perceive the emotions, emotional imprints and emotional links from the past, present, or at locations not relative to them.
Clairgustance: A form of extrasensory perception wherein users are able to taste a substance from the past, present, or at locations not relative to them.
Clairomancy: A form of extrasensory perception wherein users are able to sense events from the past, present or locations not relative to them
Clairometry: A form of extrasensory perception wherein users are able to obtain information from any source.
Clairsentience: A form of extrasensory perception wherein users are able to perceive the condition of subjects from the past, or present, by touching them or focusing on them. One with this ability could even feel auras, psyches, and that which would be otherwise intangible.
Clairvoyance: A form of extrasensory perception wherein users are able to acquire knowledge by visual means.

I've done quite a lot research on the subject of mental powers; and my favorite source for all powers is superpower wiki (which I assume the list is a copy of).

You should forget the definition and tell the reader what it actually does; I mean, not all people you're going to roleplay with are well-versed in the field of psychic powers. For example, clairvoyance can mean a lot of things; others say it's visual precognition, others can it the ability to see through the eyes of another, others recognize it as a synonym for psychic navigation, while others just propose it's like seeing without one's eyes. However, x-ray vision could fit here too. So, expand on every area, and decide what you need and what you don't - as it is now, the list is pretty big. You could just limit it to one or two, three at max (but alongside these three, which he can control, I'd approve like two very weak, uncontrolled and minor types).

Also, you should describe what he has mastered, what he is decent at and what he sucks in, in terms of ESP.

Izuna Kimura wrote:
Name: Telepathy
Effect: Izuna has also mastered Telepathy, the ability to read/sense, communicate with them mentally and even affect their minds and thoughts. It works in two forms, Telepathic Communication which is the form to transmit information from one to another and the other being Telepathic Perception, which is the form of receiving information from another person's mind or consciousness. By using this Izuna is able to create a physic link with a person by touching them to communicate  with them and allow the person to communicate with him, even if they don't possess Telepathy of any sort.

This ability is one of Izuna's greatest abilities and has shown great competence in its use while Izuna's ability can be described in levels: Basic, Advanced, Master and Ultimate. The ultimate level has never ever been seen but Izuna wishes one day to achieve it. Although currently Izuna is able to learn skills of the advanced level.

Basic Level
~ Mind Reading: The ability to read/sense the thought of others.
~ Psychic Communication: The ability to open up secret conversations and relay covert information.
~ Telempathy: The ability to communicate through emotions.
~ Telepathic Speaking: The ability to speak telepathically.

Advanced Level
~ Binding: The ability to restrict the movements of others via the mind.
~ Download: The ability to quickly process, store, or download information through another's mind.
~ Emotion Manipulation: The ability to make one feel pleased, happy, pained, or any other emotion.
~ Illusion Manipulation: The ability to manipulate what others perceive, such as making them see things that aren't actually present, or not see things that are.
~ Knowledge Projection: The ability to project knowledge onto another mind.
~ Telepathic Language Instruction: The ability to teach languages telepathically.
~ Knowledge Replication: The ability to replicate the learned knowledge and skills of others.
~ Memory Reading: The ability to read the target's memories.
~ Mental Inducement: The ability to temporarily push the targets mind into the wanted state.
~ Mind Control: The ability to manipulate the minds of other via thought process.
~ Mind Image: The ability to project one's image to the mind of another.
~ Mind Link: The ability to develop a permanent mental bond with any person, also called imprinting.
~ Mind Melding: The ability to fuse one's consciousness with another.
~ Mind Walking: The ability to enter the mind of another.
~ Omnilingualism: The ability to intuitively understand all languages.
~ Psionic Inundation: The ability to launch psi-bolts to cause mental damage.
~ Neurocognitive Deficit: The ability to shut down an opponent's higher brain function.
~ Telepathic Static: The ability to project telepathic static.
~ Psychic Inhibitors: The ability to place inhibitors in the mind to limit target's capabilities.
~ Psychic Navigation: The ability to create a mental map of the area.
~ Psychic Shadow: The ability to mask psychic presence, hiding from other psychics.
~ Psychic Shield: The ability to erect a psychic shield to protect the minds of oneself and/or others.
~ Psychic Torture: The ability to torture victims mentally and spiritually.
~ Pushing: The ability to implant memories, thoughts, and emotions into others.
~ Sensory Scrying: The ability to perceive through the sense of other beings.
~ Speaking Inducement: The ability to make others say whatever one wants.
~ Telepathic Combat: The ability to use telepathy in physical combat
~ Telepathic Hijacking: The ability to hijack telepathic communication.
~ Telepathic Prediction: The ability to know an opponent's moves and attacks by reading their brain waves.
~ Telepathic Relay: The ability to act as a mental relay station for a group of minds, allowing said minds to "speak" to one another through the user.
~ Thought Manifestation: The ability to make ones thoughts visible to all.
~ Thought Manipulation: The ability to control the thoughts of others.


I see, that this at least is a copy from the wiki. You can remove the master and the ultimate list entirely; you won't need them right now - in addition, advanced list is also unnecessary. You're just listing tons of techniques under a single name? Telepathy is about communication between two minds (reading surface thoughts, communicating with emotions and words within the minds; at maximum). The other things listed can be made abilities.

Basically, this is the base of your techniques. Not a place for hundred different techniques.

Speaking of techniques;

Psychic Binding needs a completed effect chart. Download/Upload and Mental Invasion could be made into a single technique; as Mental Invasion would have the same effect as Download/Upload, if the target doesn't resist.

Izuna Kimura wrote:
Technique Name: Augmented Body (Passive)
Technique Description: Having the body being able to alter itself allows Izuna to develop superhuman abilities, his body naturally enhances his physical power by adding +2 FAR to strength and speed, this allows him to preform incredible feats such as lifting cars with ease and moving incredibly fast. This can also be changed up a bit which allows him to loose -1 FAR from one of the stats to temporarily add +1 to another physical stat.

Otherwise this wouldn't be acceptable, but since your character is a mod soul, and doesn't have a release... I'll say it's okay. However, the default augmentation must be changed to +1 FAR to strength and speed, since he can manipulate the boosts; the technique has potential to be OP, but I am counting on you, that you won't abuse it.

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Aaaand, I so forgot the tier assignment, didn't I... -_-

Tier: 3-3

Quality: I like it. There's grammar errors and misspelled words here and there, and the paragraphs do not meet the needed length (more than five lines), but I think the story/character itself is worth of being said well-done. I would give you a one tier better grade, if I got an idea of the other side of the coin; it doesn't come off as a Gary Stu or as an author's pet, but it does have a certain lack of the ingredients, that make the character "flawed".

Appearance: 6 (if the paragraphs were longer, there'd be 12 for appearance)
Personality: 3 (again, if they were longer, there'd be more)
History: 7 (You'd get 10, if the paragraphs were a little longer)
Roleplay Sample: 10+ (I'm looking forward to seeing how you play Izuna)

Note: If I were you, I wouldn't be satisfied on this. The app could easily get a 3-2 or even 3-1, if you'd make the paragraphs like one or two lines longer. I encourage you work on the quantity, and run a spelling check on it - for a better tier, I'd like to see the flaws of Izuna's character.

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Appearance: 2/borderline 3 (requires two more sentences)
Personality: 2/borderline 3 (requires one more sentence)
History: 7 Paragraphs
RP sample: 7+

Overall quality: it looks decent to me, although I kinda agree with Erida in a way as yes, there are parts that require a bit more additional details, but possibly for a higher mark, maybe either revise or add to the likes/dislikes/etc section with less generic likes and dislikes and maybe some more unusual C: Currently, it stands at a low tier 3-3, go with the suggestions that Erida has suggested as well as mine ^_^

Ready to Approve: not yet

Honest, if we really look at this, Izuna is a shinigami mod soul because Erida just explained that he's a mod soul in possession of a body/Rengai that was constructed and built to be the same as a shinigami with the possibility of gaining a zanpakuto and therefore, his own zanpakuto with shikai and bankai latter down the line, so when all is said and done, why can't he be a shinigami mod soul since from all intensive purposes, he's a shinigami who happens to be a mod soul, so I don't see the issue here.

yh, I had a laugh when I saw the faceclaim XD hurr suits that he's coming to squad three #sasuketheemo xD

With the extrasensory perception, besides Erida's assessment about it, it would appear to be both a personality ability and it's techs all at once, the first thing is to more clearly define what of those techs Izuna is currently able to perform at his current level and ones that need to be locked and trained at a later date.

Izuna wrote:Claircognizance: A form of extrasensory perception wherein users are able to acquire psychic knowledge primarily by intrinsic means. This is the ability to know something without a physical explanation why you know it.

Clairometry: A form of extrasensory perception wherein users are able to obtain information from any source.

Clairvoyance: A form of extrasensory perception wherein users are able to acquire knowledge by visual means.

Besides these three; honestly, this is borderline god modding powers and being able to gain any knowledge and simply know it? no, please remove these from the list of trainable abilities. Yes, it may not make sense from a technical stand point, but from a rp prospective, this wouldn't be much fun to play against if he simply knew everything beforehand, but I get back to this in a moment.

Izuna wrote:~ Mind Reading: The ability to read/sense the thought of others.

~ Download: The ability to quickly process, store, or download information through another's mind.
~ Emotion Manipulation: The ability to make one feel pleased, happy, pained, or any other emotion.
~Memory Reading: The ability to read the target's memories.
~ Mental Inducement: The ability to temporarily push the targets mind into the wanted state.
~ Mind Control: The ability to manipulate the minds of other via thought process.
~ Mind Image: The ability to project one's image to the mind of another.
~ Mind Link: The ability to develop a permanent mental bond with any person, also called imprinting.
Neurocognitive Deficit: The ability to shut down an opponent's higher brain function.
Psychic Inhibitors: The ability to place inhibitors in the mind to limit target's capabilities
Psychic Torture: The ability to torture victims mentally and spiritually.
~ Pushing: The ability to implant memories, thoughts, and emotions into others.
Speaking Inducement: The ability to make others say whatever one wants.
Telepathic Prediction: The ability to know an opponent's moves and attacks by reading their brain waves.
~ Thought Manipulation: The ability to control the thoughts of others.

just in case you missed it, this stuff is banned, listed here in the banned powers and I quote: "-Any form of forced manipulation of another players actions/thoughts.." and mimicry is also banned.

the rest that are not in the above lists, I would like expanding on and I would like to restrict the mind melding to a resolve drive or a one off power that can only be used once and once used, cannot be used anymore.

some seem really interesting like the telepathic combat tech, I could imagine that like the ability Naruto possesses in sage mode when he's able to attack with nature chakra, which is normally invisible to sight, although it needs expanding on how they would be used and what downsides there is to using it, especially for long periods of time.

Since doing anyone of these techs for a long enough time is going to give him move then a headache, the number one that comes to mind is brain damage and extreme exposure to psychological issues, especially if you were allowed to read people's minds and stuff, but the main issue would the brain damage you would receive as well as the extreme metal strain of having to use them for long periods of time, doubly so if you were using more then one technique from this, so please give a post count of how long each tech lasts for and how long they are on cooldown for to allow Izuna to recover from the strain. plus add on what would happen if you used more then one tech at once and what effect it has on the post count and cooldown. a few I don't mind u using a unlimited amount of time like the ability to speak to someone telepathically since it's a core ability which the others revolve around, but for most of them, please add reasonable post counts and cooldowns.

Izuna wrote:Technique Name: Psychic Binding
Technique Description: The use of psychic binding allows Izuna to implant his willpower on another person's mind, while using this abiltiy Izuna must maintain almost flawless concentration to even use it let alone hold it. He can only hold a person for a maximum of five posts and afterwards he suffers a terrible headache. When binding someone he cannot move and even then a he can't hold more than one person so a group can easily overpower him and negate the entire purpose of the technique.

Technique Effect Chart:

*The effect chart is for damage, durability, or any other after effect of a technique. The damage/effect/etc will be based off of tiers.*

Opponent is Two+ Tiers Lower: The target of this tier are bound with little resistance, because their mind is weaker than his own he is able to bind their mind and in turn their bodies for as long as he desires so long as he isn't distracted.
Opponent is One Tier Lower: A target of this tier is bound with a small struggle,
Opponent is Equal Tier:
Opponent is One Tier Higher:
Opponent is Two+ Tiers Higher:

besides from the tier effect chart being unfinished, the cost for doing it seems low for just getting a headache, I would suggest maybe more visible signs of metal and physical deterioration (nose bleeds, psychosis, etc) especially for having to concentrate for a long period of time, although make the punishment fit the crime as it were and balance what happens to him the longer he keeps the tech up; less wear and tear for low posts and more risk for higher posts.

Izuna wrote:Technique Name: Illusion Gaze
Technique Description: Izuna is truly a mentally dangerous person, along with all of his other techniques he is able to cast illusions by eye contact. When he activates it his eye becomes red with three tomoe in it, the eye often makes people refer to him as "the demon that enters the mind" which is not entirely true, he can cast an illusion by eye contact although he has no control over it. The illusion mainly takes on the form of whatever Izuna wills though for example is he wanted them to feel fear then the illusion would make them perceive what they feel is "scary", he can also use this to inflict pain but the effects are not physical. He can even slow down the brains perception of time so every second feels like a minute so he can mentally torture them.

Whenever the ability is used the world becomes red, the ground becomes black and all colours disappear to shades except red. The world is modeled by Izuna before cast which means he cannot manipulate it after it is cast, it takes fifteen posts to recharge after the eye is finished at eight posts upon finishing the illusion is still active though until either Izuna can't mentally maintain it or the victim somehow over powers him mentally.

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Technique Effect Chart:

*The effect chart is for damage, durability, or any other after effect of a technique. The damage/effect/etc will be based off of tiers.*

Opponent is Two+ Tiers Lower: The target is unable to escape the illusion without outside assistance from another person.
Opponent is One Tier Lower: The target will have a hard time trying to escape from Izuna's illusion realm, with outside help someone can help the victim.
Opponent is Equal Tier: A person on equal tier with Izuna is able to fight his will and slip in and out of reality. An outside assistance can help the victim.
Opponent is One Tier Higher:A person who is stronger than Izuna is easily able to resist the effects of his illusion and drift in and out of reality.
Opponent is Two+ Tiers Higher: These people's mental strength is to powerful for Izuna to bypass alone, with another psychic then the victim would be on the level of an opponent just higher than Izuna's power because of the outside help.

I understand this is the sharingan illusion or standard version, but you seem to pass by that, similar to the last technique, it requires focus and concentration so maybe add this in. Also, I don't know if the demon who enters the mind is very catchy ^^; just a style opinion, but possibly maybe give him the alias of "Mie hitomi Oni" or "Triple pupil demon" in relation to the three tomoe pupils which produce this illusion. Also you don't mention this eye change in your appearance and possibly, could it activate in other ways to indicate something else, either a emotional response or a technique in activation? or maybe have it come one when he feels threatened or in combat.

Izuna wrote:Technique Name: Augmented Body (Passive)
Technique Description: Having the body being able to alter itself allows Izuna to develop superhuman abilities, his body naturally enhances his physical power by adding +2 FAR to strength and speed, this allows him to preform incredible feats such as lifting cars with ease and moving incredibly fast. This can also be changed up a bit which allows him to loose -1 FAR from one of the stats to temporarily add +1 to another physical stat.

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Technique Name: Shape-Shifting
Technique Description: Using his genetic alteration Izuna is capable of shape-shifting his form into whatever he desires although currently he is limited to humanoid forms, he can change his entire appearance from anything, gender, hair colour and overall genetics. Basically anything really, it is perfect for infiltration and disguise although after using the ability it takes two posts to cool down. He is completely different making him unable to be recognised by anything other than his psychic footprint and his reiatsu or reiryoku.

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For the former of these techs, I suggest only a FAR+1 to speed and strength, besides, you can already take away from either speed or strength to temporary increase it to FAR+2 for a set amount of time (please add) so I don't think the FAR+2 is necessary or fair, also, this will mean you will have to choose between needing better speed or strength, which would make things in rp more interesting.

for the later, Idk if there is really a point for the cooldown, maybe just explain that either he becomes very tired after doing it or becomes stuck in that form for the rest of the thread, up to you, but my suggestion is either make it so using it tires him/her/it out a lot or make it so he won't be able to change forms once used till the end of the thread or something.

besides that, you mention Izuna has a stuffed animal form, yet you don't mention what he looks like in that form or what effect being in a stuffed animal form has on his powers since in stuffed animal bodies in the anime, the mod souls have server restrictions on their powers due to their smaller and weaker bodies, meaning their powers can't reach their full power.

on Thu Oct 15, 2015 6:12 pm

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Bumping for completion, multiple changes made including some reviews of old areas.

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on Thu Oct 15, 2015 6:34 pm

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Well, going by the app, most changes I'm happy with, besides this:

Izuna wrote:Technique Name: Mental Invasion
Technique Description: na does this by forcefully projecting his will into an opponent, at its weakest he can cause headaches although in reality it allows him to forcefully obtain information and other personal knowledge. This ability is also able to enter others illusions and if he is the strongest there he can manipulate it to a small degree. The possibilities are endless, this also allows the chance to predict what they will do although he can't predict things which is done off impulse.

It also grants him a strange effect known as upload/download. the purpose is to be able to quickly give or receive information at an almost instantaneous rate, when Izuna touches someone he can insert some of his consciousness and in turn create a temporary pathway which allows him to take and give information to anyone he desires, although it is needed to be with the target's consent he will find it harder depending how much harder their mind is to enter as some who mentally suppress things from him when he enters makes it harder for him to use the technique.

Technique Effect Chart:

*The effect chart is for damage, durability, or any other after effect of a technique. The damage/effect/etc will be based off of tiers.*

Opponent is Two+ Tiers Lower: Someone of this tier allows Izuna to enter their mind very easily although if they revolt wildly then it begins to make it harder on Izuna, in particular if someone has an inner hollow it makes it much harder.
Opponent is One Tier Lower: Someone of this tier allows Izuna to enter their mind easily although if they revolt wildly then it begins to make it harder on Izuna, in particular if someone has an inner hollow it makes it much harder.
Opponent is Equal Tier: Someone on par in power with Izuna allows Izuna to enter their mind with some difficulty though if they revolt wildly then it begins to make it harder on Izuna, in particular if someone has an inner hollow it makes it impossible for him to invade their mind.
Opponent is One Tier Higher: Someone of this tier allows Izuna to enter their mind with a big struggle although if they revolt wildly then it begins to make it harder on Izuna.
Opponent is Two+ Tiers Higher: Someone of this tier makes it impossible for Izuna to enter their mind. It would be like trying to go through someone with a psychic shield.

this I'm not cool with; I'd already said that forcibly going into someone's mind in this manner isn't allowed; I don't mind you just talking with telepathy with either allies but this isn't allowed, revise it or remove it. Otherwise, I'll grade this at 3-1, depending on what the next grader says

on Thu Oct 15, 2015 6:46 pm

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Is it okay if I call it a "special technique" basically that would be something that has to be agreed upon by both role-players. Thi means I order to use its invasive properties I must have approval from the affected party. Would that be okay?

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on Thu Oct 15, 2015 7:08 pm

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by that you mean that you have the rper's permission to invade their head? I guess so, but please mark your tech as locked unless given permission, ok?

on Thu Oct 15, 2015 7:11 pm

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Sure aside from that I guess it is simply one more approval. @Graven Fel

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