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Zetsubō shēdo hasai (Crushing Despair Shade)

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on Tue Jan 20, 2015 5:26 am

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Bankai Name: Zetsubō shēdo hasai (Crushing Despair Shade)
Bankai Release and Appearance: to release the bankai, Luke holds his sealed zanpakuto in front of his chest and use his left hand to grab onto the blade near the guard until it bleeds and runs down the middle to the tip before he say bankai and then he grinds his hand across the blade, cutting into it and coming of the end with his left hand now fully straight to the left, the blade then erupts into black mist, surrounding Luke in a sphere of black mist, once this storm of mist dies down, Luke has now the features of his Zanpakutō spirit with some differences.

The first being he's wearing a plain black coat that reaches down to just below his waist with a hood that covers his head, only showing the front bit of his hair, no shirt so his chest is exposed, loose baggy trousers and thick mountain boots, but now, like Zetsubō, he has no facial features at all as they have been covered by the flesh of Luke's own skin, which is now entirely Matte black; he looses the ability to physically speak and smell while the flesh covering his face makes it appear that he has no face at all, leaving only his hair untouched, although he has his nostrils, they are covered by the flesh as well so they don't visibly appear but still make breathing possible within his bankai.

And he now floats a few meters off the ground like the aforementioned spirit, although if the hollow mask is applied while the bankai is being used, Luke regains his sight and ability to speak by seeing through the eyes of the mask and for a crack to appear, opening up as a crude mouth, the mouth has no features apart from a seemingly endless abyss of despair, although the crack will close if the mask is destroyed or removed.

He "speaks and hears" by his telepathic ability while in his bankai, he is able to talk with people directly to their minds while when they speak or think the answer back, he can pick that up mentally and response back.

Luke's face (after covered by his own flesh):

Bankai Ability: (Limit of 1) (What is your Bankai's Ability? Is it an enhancement of the Shikai ability or a whole new one?)

Ability Name: Shikai Enhancement
Ability Description: In bankai, the effect of Luke's shikai is increased as well as his strength and speed vastly increased to the point of creating large craters simply by punching or kicking with such force, it creates large shock waves and instead of creating the illusion from cuts or impalement, he replaces that for a touch or getting his hand or another body part inside the opponent's body as in a literal way, his body has become the mist of his shikai so any part touched gives Luke a chance to put a target under a illusion.

Bankai Techniques: Limit 6

Technique Name: Strength and speed enhancement
Technique Description: In bankai, his strength and speed is increased by AR+1, with this is one of his bankai's greatest strengths, as he's able to make small craters that are five meters wide by five meters high (subject to change with advancing tier) with a single punch or kick as well as being able to take down a good chunk of a small building with a single attack (is also subject to change with advancing tier).



Technique Name: Mist body
Technique Description: In bankai, Luke has the ability to change his body from a solid to mist to avoid damage, although if he turns his own body into a mist type, he cannot attack since he has no physical presence need to go offensive. Can last for three post, requires a three post cool down

Technique Name: telepathy
Technique Description: Luke has to use this technique when using his bankai to speak since he doesn't have a mouth to speak with, he projects his voice to his opponents or anyone he is fighting with to communicate properly with them but he cannot read their minds, this ability is only for him to talk in bankai only.

For the shikai enhancement:

Opponent is Two+ Tiers Lower: Will have the greatest effect on those lower down, being the easiest to trap within the illusion.
Opponent is One Tier Lower: will have a great effect on them, although they are slightly better at handling the emotions then the above tier and can resist the illusion better.
Opponent is Equal Tier: it will have a good effect on them, although, depending on their will, they can break through which would then need more then one attack to break them.
Opponent is One Tier Higher: It will have a good effect, although they will find it easier to break through the ability then most, again, depending on their will, will need at least two touches to break through
Opponent is Two+ Tiers Higher: Will has the least effect on them, being able to break through easily, especially if they have strong willpower, will need more then three touches and a body part inside them to break them.

on Fri Jan 23, 2015 11:55 pm

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Bankai Name: Zetsubō shēdo hasai (Crushing Despair Shade)
Bankai Release and Appearance: to release the bankai, Luke holds his sealed zanpakuto in front of his chest and use his left hand to grab onto the blade near the guard until it bleeds and runs down the middle to the tip before he say bankai and then he grinds his hand across the blade, cutting into it and coming of the end with his left hand now fully straight to the left, the blade then erupts into black mist, surrounding Luke in a sphere of black mist, once this storm of mist dies down, Luke has now the features of his Zanpakutō spirit with some differences, the first being he's wearing a plain black coat that reaches down to just below his waist with a hood that covers his head, only showing the front bit of his hair, no shirt so his chest is exposed, loose baggy trousers and thick mountain boots, but now, like Zetsubō, he has no facial features at all and now floats a few meters off the ground like the aforementioned spirit, although if the hollow mask is applied while the bankai is being used, Luke regains his sight and ability to speak by seeing through the eyes of the mask and for a crack to appear, opening up as a crude mouth, the mouth has no features apart from a seemingly endless abyss of despair, although the crack will close if the mask is destroyed or removed.

The removed facial features puts you at a huge disadvantage, you are aware? Luke will be unable to see, smell, hear, and the like. Because of that, he is pretty much blind and will not be able to see or hear enemies attacking. You will need to roleplay this properly and it can lead to you possibly overpowering or godmoding. Unless he is at a huge sensory disadvantage, you need to find a way for him to see/hear and all. Even Tousen relied on sound and other sensory to help him. So Luke fighting successfully like this may be slightly unrealistic.

Technique Name: Strength and speed enhancement
Technique Description: In bankai, his strength and speed is increased by AR+2, with this is one of his bankai's greatest strengths, as he's able to make large craters with a single punch or kick as well as being able to take down large-scale buildings with a single attack.[Technique Name: Strength and speed enhancement
Technique Description: In bankai, his strength and speed is increased by AR+2, with this is one of his bankai's greatest strengths, as he's able to make large craters with a single punch or kick as well as being able to take down large-scale buildings with a single attack.

Please only increase the tier by AR+1. Upon unleashing Bankai you are already moved up an advantage rating, so this is unnecessary unless you are trying to be OP. Razz

Ability Name: Shikai Enhancement
Ability Description: In bankai, the effect of Luke's shikai is increased to the point of bringing the illusion into reality in the form of shades that are manifestations of Luke's emotions but these shades can be dispelled easily by Luke and instead of creating the illusion from cuts or impalement, he replaces that for a touch or getting his hand or another body part inside the opponent's body.

Opponent is Two+ Tiers Lower: Will have the greatest effect on those lower down, being the easiest to trap within the illusion.
Opponent is One Tier Lower: will have a great effect on them, although they are slightly better at handling the emotions then the above tier and can resist the illusion better.
Opponent is Equal Tier: it will have a good effect on them, although, depending on their will, they can break through which would then need more then one attack to break them.
Opponent is One Tier Higher: It will have a good effect, although they will find it easier to break through the ability then most, again, depending on their will, will need at least two touches to break through
Opponent is Two+ Tiers Higher: Will has the least effect on them, being able to break through easily, especially if they have strong willpower, will need more then three touches and a body part inside them to break them.

Explain the part that says "increased to the point of bringing the illusion into reality".

I honestly think you have a small misunderstanding of the concept of illusions. They are optical usually and can possibly 'trick' other senses into seeing/hearing/smelling/tasting/feeling something that may or may not be ther, or altering the perception of something. Illlusions are on the outside and both opponents are physically moving on the outside with them whether or not witnesses can see the actual illusion. Oftentimes they are not physical themselves and people still pass through them. Illusions are basically a mirage. Does 'Shikai Enhancement' mostly just mean AR+1 for all Shikai abilities, plus you just touch and don't necessarily have to cut? The part on 'shades' also is confusing. Overall, I just can't grasp the concept of what you are wanting to actually do with this ability.

Technique Name: Mist body
Technique Description: In bankai, Luke has the ability to change his body from a solid to mist to avoid damage, although if he turns his own body into a mist type, he cannot attack since he has no physical presence need to go offensive, although he can touch to induce illusions but not get any stronger then that. requires a two post cool down

Opponent is Two+ Tiers Lower: Luke using the technique can avoid most attacks by this group of opponents
Opponent is One Tier Lower: Luke can use the technique to avoid a great amount of attacks from this group of opponents
Opponent is Equal Tier: Luke can use the technique to avoid some attacks with some getting through on parts that are not mist but solid
Opponent is One Tier Higher: Luke may use the technique to avoid a critical hit but cannot avoid multiple attacks
Opponent is Two+ Tiers Higher: Luke can avoid one attack in mist body before being unable to use it to stop others

The tier chart for this seems a bit redundant. He can turn his body to mist for one post, but I would say only can maybe dodge one attack no matter the tier or how powerful the attack is. Also, raise the cooldown a bit?

Please look through this, make corrections and edit in explanations, then bump! C:

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on Sat Jan 24, 2015 1:45 am

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Bumping edits Smile

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on Tue Feb 03, 2015 4:18 pm

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bumping edits Smile

on Thu Feb 12, 2015 7:41 am

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Thank you for making the edits mentioned in the chatbox! I approve of this Bankai!

I'll go edit it into your app. ^.^

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