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on Mon May 26, 2014 12:56 am

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Have you trained for all of these, or at least purchased them? o.o

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on Mon May 26, 2014 12:58 am

Yuki Akies wrote:Have you trained for all of these, or at least purchased them? o.o
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no, I haven't got them approved yet so I couldn't train for them if I tried, especially my bankai technique which I don't even have yet, these are just ideas I came up with so I need some to go over them and check them for me hurr

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on Mon May 26, 2014 1:13 am

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Well you can tell I'm out of sorts today. xD Sorry.

Technique Name: Deathly hollows/Deadly silence
Technique Description: When Luke cuts or impales a target with his shikai, he can state the command "Silence them..." along with the name of his zanpakuto, the target is put into a illusion designed to drawing out the feelings that silence brings, designed to put on targets so they can't call out for help or rise a alarm, they will still be aware of what's going on but will no longer have the ability to speak for a certain amount of time until the effect wears off. Lasts for two posts, then a two post cool down before reuse

Technique Effect Chart:

*The effect chart is for damage, durability, or any other after effect of a technique. The damage/effect/etc will be based off of tiers.*

Opponent is Two+ Tiers Lower: Will have the greatest effect on those lower down, being the easiest to trap within the illusion.
Opponent is One Tier Lower: will have a great effect on them, although they are slightly better at handling the emotions then the above tier and can resist the illusion better.
Opponent is Equal Tier: it will have a good effect on them, although, depending on their will, they can break through which would then need more then one attack to break them.
Opponent is One Tier Higher: It will have a good effect, although they will find it easier to break through the ability then most, again, depending on their will, will need at least three slices from Zetsubō to break through.
Opponent is Two+ Tiers Higher: Will has the least effect on them, being able to break through easily or only seeing the feint outline of the illusion, especially if they have strong willpower, will need more then three slices and a impalement to break them and to put them under Zetsubō's control.

Not sure if this crosses into controlling another person's actions. I'll wait for a second opinion on that. In the meantime, saying 'will have the greatest effect on them' is very vague. Maybe give me a post count per tier until they can speak again?

Technique Name: Shade conversion/Sphere of silent death or "Muon shibō kyūtai" (Bankai only technique)
Technique Description: While in Bankai, Luke can trap a opponent/s inside a sphere of mist, made up of the shades of his inner world, when inside this space, the opponent will start to slowly turn into a shade, starting with their body as it slowly starts to turn into a black mist version the affected limb, the opponent can still move the limb and fight as normal but may cause them to fall to one side as the opponent no longer has a physical limb to stand on, which continues with the opponent's other leg, then travels further across their body to the lower pelvis, then the entire torso, then the arms, then head is last to be affect as it is covered up, the opponent loses their eyes and their mouths are covered up with skin that grows over their mouths (see images at the bottom for a better idea of what this would look like but do note that they do keep their hair, only the hair turns black, regardless), if conversion is successful, the opponent will join the sphere with the others shades and lose all sense of personal identity as they are contain in permanent state of semi-death and despair as part of the mass of shades that make up Luke's inner world, the only way to escape is to finish the fight and escape the sphere before the transformation into a shade is completed, if opponent does escape, the transformation wears off with one body part returning to normal with every post until full restored or in better terms; X amount of posts per limb affect to return to normal so for every limb affected, it takes that amount of posts for the limbs to be fully restored.

Completed Shade's face:



Technique Effect Chart:

*The effect chart is for damage, durability, or any other after effect of a technique. The damage/effect/etc will be based off of tiers.*

Opponent is Two+ Tiers Lower: Takes four posts to complete the shade transformation as the conversion can work twice as fast on these tier then others
Opponent is One Tier Lower: Takes five posts to complete the shade transformation as the opponent can put in some resistance but only delaying it by one post, hence the five post mark
Opponent is Equal Tier: Takes six posts to complete the shade transformation as they can resist it better then the last two tiers, giving someone of equal tier plus two posts more then those two tiers below
Opponent is One Tier Higher: Takes the full amount of time to convert into a shade of seven posts; one limb every post for the duration of seven posts
Opponent is Two+ Tiers Higher: Takes even more time then previous tier of eight to ten posts to full convert into a shade as the overwhelming reiatsu these higher tiers produce are able to slow down the conversion process, if exactly two tiers above me; it takes eight posts to complete, if three tiers higher; it takes nine posts to complete and four tiers above and beyond that; it takes the full ten posts to fully complete

Most definitely borderlining on controlling another player's actions/thoughts. I'll wait for a second opinion on this too.

Name: Kusari gensōkyoku (Chains of fantasia)
Number: #86
Category: Bakudou
Incantation: "Depart from the circle. The blackening shades. Temple of pain that stands on bones. Go mad! Crawl among the burning sand! The hourglass tips on its scale as the sins of men hold them to ruin!"
Effect: When speaking the incantation, a glowing red pentagram with appear around the caster on the ground as the user's body is covered in the red aura of the pentagram while they hold their dominant hand's wrist with their other hand while speaking the incantation or not, the user, either once the incantation is complete or after saying the name of the bakudou, the user will normally release their dominant hand and slam it directly beneath them, the rim of the pentagram will glow brighter before countless black, blood-stained chains erupt from the rim of the pentagram and shoot towards the target/s with great speed, trapping their wrists, ankles, upper torso and the lower part of the head, covering the mouth and their neck, all the chains are connected to the rim of the pentagram and are normally invulnerable to all sort of damage but the simpler way to get rid of the chains is that if the caster is knocked from the pentagram but the caster, in the case that someone comes to help whoever it is that is trapped, the caster can gesture with his/her hand and summon more chains to bind the new opponent, making the technique quite versatile in its use and, as the name suggests, the targets caught within the chains slowly start to descend to madness, which, depending on tier, can be complete from two posts to seven posts

Mind describing that part I bolded? Manipulating another person's actions/thoughts is now allowed, as I have said before. =]

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on Mon May 26, 2014 1:27 am

Yuki Akies wrote:Well you can tell I'm out of sorts today. xD Sorry.

Technique Name: Deathly hollows/Deadly silence
Technique Description: When Luke cuts or impales a target with his shikai, he can state the command "Silence them..." along with the name of his zanpakuto, the target is put into a illusion designed to drawing out the feelings that silence brings, designed to put on targets so they can't call out for help or rise a alarm, they will still be aware of what's going on but will no longer have the ability to speak for a certain amount of time until the effect wears off. Lasts for two posts, then a two post cool down before reuse

Technique Effect Chart:

*The effect chart is for damage, durability, or any other after effect of a technique. The damage/effect/etc will be based off of tiers.*

Opponent is Two+ Tiers Lower: Will have the greatest effect on those lower down, being the easiest to trap within the illusion.
Opponent is One Tier Lower: will have a great effect on them, although they are slightly better at handling the emotions then the above tier and can resist the illusion better.
Opponent is Equal Tier: it will have a good effect on them, although, depending on their will, they can break through which would then need more then one attack to break them.
Opponent is One Tier Higher: It will have a good effect, although they will find it easier to break through the ability then most, again, depending on their will, will need at least three slices from Zetsubō to break through.
Opponent is Two+ Tiers Higher: Will has the least effect on them, being able to break through easily or only seeing the feint outline of the illusion, especially if they have strong willpower, will need more then three slices and a impalement to break them and to put them under Zetsubō's control.

Not sure if this crosses into controlling another person's actions. I'll wait for a second opinion on that. In the meantime, saying 'will have the greatest effect on them' is very vague. Maybe give me a post count per tier until they can speak again?

Technique Name: Shade conversion/Sphere of silent death or "Muon shibō kyūtai" (Bankai only technique)
Technique Description: While in Bankai, Luke can trap a opponent/s inside a sphere of mist, made up of the shades of his inner world, when inside this space, the opponent will start to slowly turn into a shade, starting with their body as it slowly starts to turn into a black mist version the affected limb, the opponent can still move the limb and fight as normal but may cause them to fall to one side as the opponent no longer has a physical limb to stand on, which continues with the opponent's other leg, then travels further across their body to the lower pelvis, then the entire torso, then the arms, then head is last to be affect as it is covered up, the opponent loses their eyes and their mouths are covered up with skin that grows over their mouths (see images at the bottom for a better idea of what this would look like but do note that they do keep their hair, only the hair turns black, regardless), if conversion is successful, the opponent will join the sphere with the others shades and lose all sense of personal identity as they are contain in permanent state of semi-death and despair as part of the mass of shades that make up Luke's inner world, the only way to escape is to finish the fight and escape the sphere before the transformation into a shade is completed, if opponent does escape, the transformation wears off with one body part returning to normal with every post until full restored or in better terms; X amount of posts per limb affect to return to normal so for every limb affected, it takes that amount of posts for the limbs to be fully restored.

Completed Shade's face:



Technique Effect Chart:

*The effect chart is for damage, durability, or any other after effect of a technique. The damage/effect/etc will be based off of tiers.*

Opponent is Two+ Tiers Lower: Takes four posts to complete the shade transformation as the conversion can work twice as fast on these tier then others
Opponent is One Tier Lower: Takes five posts to complete the shade transformation as the opponent can put in some resistance but only delaying it by one post, hence the five post mark
Opponent is Equal Tier: Takes six posts to complete the shade transformation as they can resist it better then the last two tiers, giving someone of equal tier plus two posts more then those two tiers below
Opponent is One Tier Higher: Takes the full amount of time to convert into a shade of seven posts; one limb every post for the duration of seven posts
Opponent is Two+ Tiers Higher: Takes even more time then previous tier of eight to ten posts to full convert into a shade as the overwhelming reiatsu these higher tiers produce are able to slow down the conversion process, if exactly two tiers above me; it takes eight posts to complete, if three tiers higher; it takes nine posts to complete and four tiers above and beyond that; it takes the full ten posts to fully complete

Most definitely borderlining on controlling another player's actions/thoughts. I'll wait for a second opinion on this too.

Name: Kusari gensōkyoku (Chains of fantasia)
Number: #86
Category: Bakudou
Incantation: "Depart from the circle. The blackening shades. Temple of pain that stands on bones. Go mad! Crawl among the burning sand! The hourglass tips on its scale as the sins of men hold them to ruin!"
Effect: When speaking the incantation, a glowing red pentagram with appear around the caster on the ground as the user's body is covered in the red aura of the pentagram while they hold their dominant hand's wrist with their other hand while speaking the incantation or not, the user, either once the incantation is complete or after saying the name of the bakudou, the user will normally release their dominant hand and slam it directly beneath them, the rim of the pentagram will glow brighter before countless black, blood-stained chains erupt from the rim of the pentagram and shoot towards the target/s with great speed, trapping their wrists, ankles, upper torso and the lower part of the head, covering the mouth and their neck, all the chains are connected to the rim of the pentagram and are normally invulnerable to all sort of damage but the simpler way to get rid of the chains is that if the caster is knocked from the pentagram but the caster, in the case that someone comes to help whoever it is that is trapped, the caster can gesture with his/her hand and summon more chains to bind the new opponent, making the technique quite versatile in its use and, as the name suggests, the targets caught within the chains slowly start to descend to madness, which, depending on tier, can be complete from two posts to seven posts

Mind describing that part I bolded? Manipulating another person's actions/thoughts is now allowed, as I have said before. =]
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all fair points and I'll go through them:

1. With deathly silence, I stated for all tiers that it lasts for two posts, although if it requires that I need to do it for each tier, then I will do without question, like all my techniques that I have designed in this, they ain't designed to control another's actions as I stated that the ability draws out the feelings of silence, it is up to the person to fight it, which keeps it out of my hands with that technique

2. With my Sphere of silent death, again, this technique doesn't control someone else's actions, its a affect of the sphere to convert and I've even stated that higher tiers can resist the conversion to the level of their tier and in turn, their level of reiatsu so the opponent can willing fight against the conversion, if this isn't clear in the tier effect chart and the description, then I reword it to make it more clear

3. With my custom Kido, again, like the others and my shikai abilities, it's a descent into their madness and like all things in this case, the opponent can fight against it with their will and reiatsu and, checking the fact that a well placed hit on Luke that is hard enough to knock him from the pentagram ends the bakudou instantly, undoing the madness and consider that this is a level #87 bakudou, it's not something Luke can use very often in this stage and i properly won't even be learning this even when its approved until I reach either tier 3-1 or 2-3 when it can be fully effective

hopefully this makes sense, don't hate me >.< i'm just trying to explain myself as best i can

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on Mon May 26, 2014 2:31 am

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1. Just revise the technique chart how I suggested. =] I think it's okay, to be honest. But I always like the second opinion of other staffers, which is required anyways. xD

2. Definitely waiting for a second opinion. It just seems like something that goes completely against Bleach mechanics. Maybe an illusion of them turning into something, but not literally.

3. I like the kido itself, but madness goes into controlling another player's thoughts. Remove that and you are good. =]

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on Mon May 26, 2014 2:43 am

Yuki Akies wrote:1. Just revise the technique chart how I suggested. =] I think it's okay, to be honest. But I always like the second opinion of other staffers, which is required anyways. xD

2. Definitely waiting for a second opinion. It just seems like something that goes completely against Bleach mechanics. Maybe an illusion of them turning into something, but not literally.

3. I like the kido itself, but madness goes into controlling another player's thoughts. Remove that and you are good. =]
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fair enough, although with chains of fantasia, if I removed the madness from it, it loses the "fantasia" bit of it and just becomes chains that have the same properties to the hell chains of sinners, so I kind of want a madness like effect, I'm open to suggestions since none of this is set in stone

but I thing with the shade conversion, it was kind of inspired by Daemon's statue of bone technique where he kills someone over the course of a fight by sealing them in bones so I took a similar approach and created my sphere of silent death technique where, over the course of the fight, they slowly turn into a shade, although like I've stated before, I'm not controlling their actions and they can fight and the effect is reversed after they escape the sphere so it's not permanent unless the entire process is completed, which is possible, especially with those of the high tiers like you, Yuki-chan as it would take about eight to ten posts to fully complete and I'm sure you could escape easily before the process was completed

I'll make changes where I can but I'll wait for the second option like you so we can decide what to do although even if I unlock the sphere of silent death, I can't use without my bankai so its useless to me at this stage until I'm a high enough tier to unlock my bankai, then train for that technique

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on Mon May 26, 2014 4:18 am

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Luke Yasenha wrote:
Yuki Akies wrote:1. Just revise the technique chart how I suggested. =] I think it's okay, to be honest. But I always like the second opinion of other staffers, which is required anyways. xD

2. Definitely waiting for a second opinion. It just seems like something that goes completely against Bleach mechanics. Maybe an illusion of them turning into something, but not literally.

3. I like the kido itself, but madness goes into controlling another player's thoughts. Remove that and you are good. =]
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fair enough, although with chains of fantasia, if I removed the madness from it, it loses the "fantasia" bit of it and just becomes chains that have the same properties to the hell chains of sinners, so I kind of want a madness like effect, I'm open to suggestions since none of this is set in stone

but I thing with the shade conversion, it was kind of inspired by Daemon's statue of bone technique where he kills someone over the course of a fight by sealing them in bones so I took a similar approach and created my sphere of silent death technique where, over the course of the fight, they slowly turn into a shade, although like I've stated before, I'm not controlling their actions and they can fight and the effect is reversed after they escape the sphere so it's not permanent unless the entire process is completed, which is possible, especially with those of the high tiers like you, Yuki-chan as it would take about eight to ten posts to fully complete and I'm sure you could escape easily before the process was completed

I'll make changes where I can but I'll wait for the second option like you so we can decide what to do although even if I unlock the sphere of silent death, I can't use without my bankai so its useless to me at this stage until I'm a high enough tier to unlock my bankai, then train for that technique
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Madness would be a no, unfortunately. This is a bakudo, binding spell, not some magic that makes people go mad. Razz

Daemon's statue of bone technique is merely a shield of sorts, really. It both stops the enemy from attacking, or if used on an ally, protects them. Same is with my Nami Shirudo. But turning them into something else entirely just seems a bit OP. I mean, what if the person doesn't want that? Anyone could break out of Dae or Yuki's technique if they had the right power. =]

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on Mon May 26, 2014 4:57 am

Yuki Akies wrote:
Luke Yasenha wrote:
Yuki Akies wrote:1. Just revise the technique chart how I suggested. =] I think it's okay, to be honest. But I always like the second opinion of other staffers, which is required anyways. xD

2. Definitely waiting for a second opinion. It just seems like something that goes completely against Bleach mechanics. Maybe an illusion of them turning into something, but not literally.

3. I like the kido itself, but madness goes into controlling another player's thoughts. Remove that and you are good. =]
Quote do post: 72599

fair enough, although with chains of fantasia, if I removed the madness from it, it loses the "fantasia" bit of it and just becomes chains that have the same properties to the hell chains of sinners, so I kind of want a madness like effect, I'm open to suggestions since none of this is set in stone

but I thing with the shade conversion, it was kind of inspired by Daemon's statue of bone technique where he kills someone over the course of a fight by sealing them in bones so I took a similar approach and created my sphere of silent death technique where, over the course of the fight, they slowly turn into a shade, although like I've stated before, I'm not controlling their actions and they can fight and the effect is reversed after they escape the sphere so it's not permanent unless the entire process is completed, which is possible, especially with those of the high tiers like you, Yuki-chan as it would take about eight to ten posts to fully complete and I'm sure you could escape easily before the process was completed

I'll make changes where I can but I'll wait for the second option like you so we can decide what to do although even if I unlock the sphere of silent death, I can't use without my bankai so its useless to me at this stage until I'm a high enough tier to unlock my bankai, then train for that technique
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Madness would be a no, unfortunately. This is a bakudo, binding spell, not some magic that makes people go mad. Razz

Daemon's statue of bone technique is merely a shield of sorts, really. It both stops the enemy from attacking, or if used on an ally, protects them. Same is with my Nami Shirudo. But turning them into something else entirely just seems a bit OP. I mean, what if the person doesn't want that? Anyone could break out of Dae or Yuki's technique if they had the right power. =]
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it's the same with mine, you can escape mine just as easily and I've state over and over again, you can resist it and the effects of it are reversed once they escape the sphere

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on Sun Jun 08, 2014 12:43 am

Technique Name: Dreamwalker
Technique Description: This technique is available in both shikai and bankai, this allows the user to enter the illusion of the target when hit and can fight them inside the illusion, he also has some abilities to change the environments like creating mazes, parks, cities, etc, anything within reason as well as walls to defend against basic long range attacks as well as other illusion based ability.

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on Mon Jun 09, 2014 2:08 am

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Luke Yasenha wrote:Technique Name: Dreamwalker
Technique Description: This technique is available in both shikai and bankai, this allows the user to enter the illusion of the target when hit and can fight them inside the illusion, he also has some abilities to change the environments like creating mazes, parks, cities, etc, anything within reason as well as walls to defend against basic long range attacks as well as other illusion based ability

Technique Effect Chart:

*The effect chart is for damage, durability, or any other after effect of a technique. The damage/effect/etc will be based off of tiers.*

Opponent is Two+ Tiers Lower:
Opponent is One Tier Lower:
Opponent is Equal Tier:
Opponent is One Tier Higher:
Opponent is Two+ Tiers Higher:
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I approve of this technique. I would get one more approval though. =]

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