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on Fri Jul 11, 2014 4:30 am

yes, it does, although the cannon uses both soul and heart to perform so the effects of it should be at the max that the site allows a technique to have since its a "final" class of technique but I'll try my hand at it and see what I can do =]

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on Fri Jul 11, 2014 4:32 am

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It could only use up all of Luke's power. So if he is tier 3-3, he could use up every drop of 3-3 power, probably giving him some sort of AR bonus offensively. Almost like a Resolve Drive. If it is 'final', maybe a AR+2 or so? If he is already in Bankai, that will be equivalent to AR+5 maybe.

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on Fri Jul 11, 2014 4:38 am

it is like a resolve drive technique, although I designed it like Ichigo's final getsuga tensho, where after use, he lost all his shinigami powers, in the case of my final heartbeat cannon, the effect is losing his entire soul, losing all ability for spiritual powers and death comes quickly after, effectively killing Luke so I doubt I'll be using against anyone just yet, the AR bonus seems reasonable but the technique is fatal to both Luke and his opponent, in my head, the technique would kill his opponent at the cost of Luke's life, like a suicide bomber or something along those lines

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on Sat Jul 12, 2014 10:22 pm

Kidō

Name: Ita tensō (Pain Transfer)
Number: Varies
Category: Kaido
Incantation: None
Effect: This is Kaido that is unique to Luke in the fact that his Kaido works in two parts; his left hand heals the patient and also heals mental trauma and takes away the pain from the wounds over the target area; his right hand takes that pain and applies to someone else; making them feel the pain of the patient's wounds like they were feeling it themselves; this only works until the target is fully healed, then the transfer effect of the right hand no longer applies. The right hand's transferring ability is more useful in battle while the left hand is used as battle support and as the way to feed the right hand's transfer ability

Left hand: Heals injuries as well as taking away pain and mental trauma

Right hand: Transfers the pain to opponents as long as Luke is touching them with his right hand

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on Sat Jul 12, 2014 11:17 pm

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Technique Name: Saigo shinpaku taihō (Final Heartbeat cannon) (Bankai only technique)
Technique Description: As the name suggests, this is the final technique of Luke's bankai; First, Luke tears out his soul core; which takes the shape of a black orb about the size of a tennis ball or basically, big enough to fit in his hand before he also tears his heart from his chest, his bankai going into the heart before he fuses his soul with his heart, which is still beating together, making the heart glow and become semi translucent, looking like black glass while still retaining fluid movement with two interlocking halos are around the heart like a atom's rings, he then raises the heart towards the target before a large blast fires when the heart does a deep beat that everyone within fifteen miles of his position can hear clearly; the blast end facing the opponent will take on the appearance of the heart as it blasts the opponent with a blast equal to a twenty megaton nuke, after the technique has completed, Luke will loose his reiatsu and spirit energy as he falls to the ground where it will take two turns for him to die as at the end of his second post, if no one has put his heart back in, Luke will die as is the fact of the attack being "Final", Reiatsu and Spirit energy recovery will be painfully slowly as well as the fact that even if they save Luke, he will be nothing but a empty shell, since using this attack costs him his soul and normally his life if no one saves him by the end of the two turns. Once per his entire life

Technique Effect Chart:

*The effect chart is for damage, durability, or any other after effect of a technique. The damage/effect/etc will be based off of tiers.*

Opponent is Two+ Tiers Lower: Target is taken to a near-death state with several broken bones, heavily internal and external bleeding and heavy burn and explosive damage; death will follow within two posts unless given medical attention
Opponent is One Tier Lower: Target will be barely be conscious with heavy burn and explosive damage, broken bones and heavy internal and external bleeding; unconscious in one post and death within three posts unless given medical attention
Opponent is Equal Tier: Target will be conscious but vision will be fuzzy and will be hard to see as well as extensive burns and explosive damage with badly damaged internal or external damage and some broken bones; unconscious takes two post to complete and death within four posts unless given medical treatment
Opponent is One Tier Higher: Target will be able to crawl but will have extensive burn and explosive damage with decent amounts of internal or external bleeding and a few broken bones; unconscious takes three posts to complete and death takes five posts unless given medical treatment
Opponent is Two+ Tiers Higher: Target will be able to walk slowly but have decent burn and explosive damage with some internal or external bleeding and with some bones being badly bruised; unconscious takes four posts to complete and death takes six posts unless given medical treatment

Bumping this technique =]

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on Sun Jul 13, 2014 5:19 am

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Luke Yasenha wrote:Kidō

Name: Ita tensō (Pain Transfer)
Number: Varies
Category: Kaido
Incantation: None
Effect: This is Kaido that is unique to Luke in the fact that his Kaido works in two parts; his left hand heals the patient and also heals mental trauma and takes away the pain from the wounds over the target area; his right hand takes that pain and mental trauma and applies to someone else; making them feel the pain of the patient's wounds like they were feeling it themselves and also giving them the mental trauma that the patient was feeling; this only works until the target is fully healed, then the transfer effect of the right hand no longer applies. The right hand's transferring ability is more useful in battle while the left hand is used as battle support and as the way to feed the right hand's transfer ability

Left hand: Heals injuries as well as taking away pain and mental trauma

Right hand: Transfers the pain and mental trauma to opponents as long as Luke is touching them with his right hand
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The part for passing on trauma borderlines into forcing another character's thoughts and powerplaying. Please remove that.

Also, final or not, auto-kill and mortally-wound abilities are banned. You need to fix that.

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on Sun Jul 13, 2014 3:25 pm

bumping my kaido aftering editing but about my final technique, I'm not sure what I can do, should I removed the death part?

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on Wed Jul 16, 2014 1:50 am

Kidō

Name: Kokumu shinkirō (Black Mist Mirage)
Number: #31
Category: Bakudo
Incantation: "The whisperer of silence, the book of solemn vows, The gatekeeper of the underworld breaks the sealed mound"
Effect: This bakudo hides the user's visual, spiritual presence, even smell by Luke disappearing into a black mist, appearing to start turning into black mist from the feet up within a few seconds; in addition, Luke can't be harmed in this state; in exchange for these abilities; Luke is unable to attack in any way and is reveal once detected, making it only useful to escape or to sneak and follow people; making it useful for infiltration missions. Lasts for four posts, then two post cooldown

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on Thu Jul 17, 2014 1:09 am

Technique Name: Kiri ken fukki (Mist Sword Return)
Technique Effect: This is a simple ability that allows the sealed form of Luke's zanpakuto to transform into black mist at will; the zanpakuto can be called from anywhere, as long as its the same world; he couldn't summon his zanpakuto from the soul society if he was in the world of the living for example and it can only be summoned from a distance of forty-five meters from him; Luke then extends his arm and the black mist collects and forms once again into his hand. The only practicalities in combat are being able to bring the sword back to him if a enemy has taken the blade from him or is out of reach, being able to return the sword at will is quite useful, the command for this is "Break down..." plus the name of the zanpakuto; although the command is not always necessary to return the blade as he can also simply will the blade to return in this manner but one key flaw is that the zanpakuto must be in its sealed form, if in it's shikai, Luke cannot use this technique to return it to him. Requires two posts before reuse.

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on Thu Jul 17, 2014 8:58 pm

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Luke Yasenha wrote:Kidō

Name: Kokumu shinkirō (Black Mist Mirage)
Number: #31
Category: Bakudo
Incantation: "The whisperer of silence, the book of solemn vows, The gatekeeper of the underworld breaks the sealed mound"
Effect: This bakudo hides the user's visual, spiritual presence, even smell by Luke disappearing into a black mist, appearing to start turning into black mist from the feet up within a few seconds; in addition, Luke can't be harmed in this state; in exchange for these abilities; Luke is unable to attack in any way, making it only useful to escape or to sneak and follow people; making it useful for infiltration missions
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Postcount and cooldown please. =]

For your technique, is that a general technique/ability?

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