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Kitasenshu Minamiya (Northern Bow and Southern Arrow)

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on Mon Mar 24, 2014 7:17 pm

Kido Name: Kitasenshu Minamiya (Northern Bow and Southern Arrow)
Strength of 70s level Bakudo
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Incantation: (Part 1) Soar beyond loneliness. Claw at the divide with untold fury.  (Part 2) Travel from top to bottom only to discover there is nothing.
Effect: This is a two part kido. The effect only takes place after both parts of the incantation are said. The kido can be said in whole before any of the conditions are met in order to make the entire multi-part spell/effect process seem instantaneous. The first part of the incantation creates a translucent black bow upon its completion. The bow allows the user to fire translucent black arrows one after another if it's said in full prior to its use. Otherwise a single arrow is all that can be used. The arrow(s) don't actually possess mass or weight but instead only carries a multi-part  seal. When the arrow strikes a target, it envelopes whatever is struck in a dim light. This symbolizes that the seal has been successfully placed. The second part of the spell's incantation divides the seal. The aura which enveloped the target stays but instantly splits apart and forms another arrow. It's launched from the opposite side of the target along the same trajectory that the arrow that first hit them would have traveled had it flown right through the target. This arrow contains a portion of the seal. After hitting the next object in envelopes it in a similar glowing aura symbolizing the placement of the separated seal fragment. To simplify: this kido wraps two objects in two separate layers of kido. These two layers of kido are drawn towards each other, along with the effected targets, as if they were both being pulled by extremely powerful magnets towards one another. The two parts of the seal are drawn towards each other almost as if by an extremely powerful magnetic attraction existed between the two. The effect lasts a minimum of one post after the kido's full effect is activated and one additional post for each tier higher the caster is than the target.

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on Tue Mar 25, 2014 5:03 am

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Because this was originally denied, this cannot be reposted for approval just as much as an app cannot be resubmitted for a different tier. Unless you get permission from staff- Epizon in particular-, this cannot be graded or looked over. Please PM Epizon and ask for him to unlock your app or for a second chance at re-submitting this kido. As a side note, please do not reply to this post or topic until you have received an answer. =] Thank you!

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on Tue Mar 25, 2014 6:42 am

I'm not interested in having Epizon look this over since it's clear that he/she did not read the suggested edits that I made the first time. I was given the option of having someone else look at it so I am taking advantage of that option now.

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on Tue Mar 25, 2014 7:00 am

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Mushami Shuuryou wrote:I'm not interested in having Epizon look this over since it's clear that he/she did not read the suggested edits that I made the first time. I was given the option of having someone else look at it so I am taking advantage of that option now.

Maybe not. And Epizon doesn't have to approve/grade this one. But you still need staff permission to re-open it. If you want, I can ask Epizon for you. =]

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on Tue Mar 25, 2014 7:06 am

Don't remember seeing such a thing stated in any rule that I voted for...

But if such an act is really necessary, go for it. I just want this to hurry up and get done.

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on Tue Mar 25, 2014 7:13 am

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Mushami Shuuryou wrote:Don't remember seeing such a thing stated in any rule that I voted for...

But if such an act is really necessary, go for it. I just want this to hurry up and get done.

I'd be happy to send Epizon a PM for you. ^.^ He should answer before long.

And no, this wasn't stated in any standard or rule. =] It's mostly just common courtesy and communication I am trying to exercise. He should be in the know if this spell he originally denied is re-submited for approval. I also don't wish to usurp his position or authority in any way. ^.^

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on Tue Mar 25, 2014 7:16 am

Correction, the spell he originally denied hasn't been resubmitted. He didn't actually read this one at the time of denial.


If it's not a rule then why am I being forced to honor it?  0_o 

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on Tue Mar 25, 2014 5:30 pm

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Mushami is right here and Yuki is wrong.

Yuki, you can't just make up rules and then not list them. That's legitimate corruption of power. If you want this to be a rule then go through the motions to get it added please.

In addition, if he's edited it in at least some way, then there is no reason why it can't be looked at again as it is no longer the exact same spell that was denied. That being said, I personally would still make edits to this, but I already mentioned all that stuff in the last thread and it's up to staff members to decide if the changes made were good enough or if they feel the spell still can't quite be approved.

EDIT: P.S. Sorry Mushami, but you don't get to decide that you don't want Epizon to be the one grading this. Your personal feelings for how he handled the last thread are irrelevant.

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on Tue Mar 25, 2014 8:35 pm

You're right, I should put my personal feelings aside and think about this purely from a "if he/she doesn't know what they're talking about should they even have a say" viewpoint.

I've done that here.

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on Tue Mar 25, 2014 11:02 pm

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I apologize for that. I did not mean to come off as controlling or add in my own rules, and must have not understood. I was comparing this to character apps, which cannot be re-graded for a new tier. I see I was wrong, and thank you for bringing it to my attention. I hope you can forgive me for this. ^^;

I shall re-grade it as soon as I get back from work.

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