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on Sun Nov 03, 2013 4:24 am

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Who are you?






Name:Alastair Knightfield
Alias: The Magician's Apprentice
Age: 500
Age of Appearance:25
Gender:Male
Race/Species:Shinigami
Character Alignment: Neutral

Appearance:Alastair has the appearance of a young man in his early twenties. He  has a light caramel skin tone with midnight blue eyes with a purple tent. He has a blackish gray hair color dressed in spiky short tips. He has a slim swimmers build with a very visible six pack. His shoulders and arms  are a more fair caramel then the rest of his body. There also well toned and sculpted for his age.

His lower body consists of strong firm legs and well defined calf’s. Alastair weighs about 175 pounds of lean muscles. He height is 5’11 with a waist of 36 inches. While in battle he may seem shorter due to his zanpakuto being about to change its length.  Also in battle he may seem weak and naive teenager with the appearance of a waiter. But in actuality he is a strong warrior of the soul society.

Alastair has a beautiful seductive smile, which is complemented by his pearl white teeth and smooth light pink lips. His midnight blue eyes are surrounded by narrow eyelids and soft think eyebrows. His ears  are a fair size there also well sculpted. His hair is very rough yet manageable seeing as the longest strand only touched the back of his neck. He has a very small soft nose that complements his eyes and mouth giving him his sex appeal.

Alastair Knightfield:

Style/Clothing:For clothing he usually wears the standard black shinigami kimono and balloon pants. His footwear consist of a thin cotton linen socks and basic Asian style flip flops. When his off duty or representing the soul society he wears his favorite two piece black fitted Armani suit with hidden built in pockets. His pants are always folded and creased with a black belt with a silver loop. His shoes are normal black dress shoes buffed and cleaned often. When he visit the human world he usually wears loose fitted jeans with a blue t-shirt with cheap sneakers.

Under his suit jacket Alastair wears a basic white button up shirt that’s tucked into his pants. On tops of the button up shirt he was a fitted black fest. And to tie off his outfit he wears a light blue scarf given to him by a close friend long ago. He may also wear reading glasses to improve his sex appeal or set off his style.

Tattoo's/Scars/Etc:One his right shoulder blade Alastair has a tattoo of a pentagram surround in a thick circle. Also on his back are three huge claw marks running down the length of his back.

Personality:Alastair’s a very relaxed person. He loved free time to himself and enjoys sleeping his days away. He usually ignores everything besides thing that help him reach his goals or whatever he’s doing. He focuses only on the positive thing and thing that makes things better for others. There’s are times were his ego gets the best of him and he reacts on impulse by wildly lunging at a person on yelling. Other then that he is a very passive person he intends to let peoples rude comments and attitudes be fuel to his goals and passions. He enjoys studying other people and learning human behavioral Patterns which makes his a curious person.

He comes off as a happy person around people also smiling and lifting up others. When he is sad or upset he tends to isolate himself from other to regroup. When alone he only has one goal to hone his abilities and skills which usually leaves him with a serious side. Towards his enemies he will present himself as a serious opponent but also he will as if he were trying to get into his opponents head. He often tries to replicate professor behavior.

He is very fascinated by fighting. He enjoys partaking in them but even more watching them. While fighting his personality changes the most . He takes serious to the next level by adding sadistic movements and hostile attacks. He at the start of the fight he will become an Analyst constantly blocking attack with his sword to adjust to his opponents current strength and fighting patterns.

In battle Alastair is very slick, over confident and cunning. He at times can be very vulgar and childish. He can be very rebellious and hard headed to must authority figures. But when needed is very reliable and trustworthy.  He is brave and fearless looking at each situation as a accomplishment. He is very optimistic and bright, may not be the smartest apple in the tree but he's definitely not one of the fallen ones.

He is very disassociated with the public and tends to be a loner. He loves to participate in heinous acts outside the Soul Society. Alastair is loving and supportive. He considers himself a abomination for not being able to save his loved ones. He is a protector and a destroyer definitely worthy of his family name.



(For Likes, Dislikes, Ambitions, etc, go for 1-3 sentences per point, more if you wish.)

Likes:

  • Alastair like  eating candy. It improves his thought process and give him energy.
  • He like to drift aimlessly. He believes where ever his feet take him he’s meant to be there.
  • He like children. He loves playing with kids and teaching them things in his free time.
  • He enjoys training with friends. He think training along will only get you so far.
  • He like supportive and positive people. He tends to want to be around them more and lives up himself.
  • Takoyaki


Dislikes:

  • Alastair dislikes rude people. He believe people who hurt or disrespect others are a waste of time and are trash.
  • He dislikes loud noises or sounds. They disturb his current mood or increases it.
  • He has a strong hate for hollows. He vows to destroy anyone that crosses his path.
  • He has mixed feelings about technology usually bad ones. He believes the brain is the best technology you can ever have.
  • He dislikes selfishness. He wants to share everything he can with people that deserves it.

Ambitions/Dreams/Goals:

  • Alastair biggest dram is to become the soul society’s greatest physiologist.
  • His greatest ambition is  to help those who deserves help the most and to protect the weak.
  • He main goal is to become a captain or lieutenant level shinigami in his deceased friends memory.


Strengths:

  • Ability to focus on something study it and break it down.
  • The way he treats and listen to people knowledge.
  • Ability to adapt to most situations quickly.
  • Intelligence he uses his knowledge in physiology as a weapon against his enemies to anger them and throw them off there game.
  • Ability to listen.


Fears & Weaknesses:

  • Fear of a hollow killing a close friend.
  • Weakness is his anger towards hollows causes him to focus on them only and leave himself open for other attacks.
  • His passive nature tends to lead him into dangerous situations
  • Deep concentration may let him forget the little things.
  • Fear of not being able to protect others.







Battle Specs





List of 'Known' Skills:


  • Shunpo
  • Basic Reiatsu Detection
  • *If more need to be added let a Mod/Admin know*


Fighting Style:Alastair prefers to fight one on one battle but will fight multiple people. He switches between close to mid ranged attacks based on his zanpakuto. Defensive measure may include a normal block counter, to a parry and attack. He knows Taekwondo, Tang Soo Do, and Muay Thai. While he trains he visions he is fighting a opponent so he uses all his might and force not holding back at all, When he fights he takes everyone seriously fighting with his all holding nothing back. When having the upper hand Alastair tends not to toy with anyone and ending the fight and there life swiftly without hesitation. When fighting someone stronger he gives it his all only to retreat when he life is in certain danger. He is as very passionate Kido user and tends to rely on it alot.

Personal Abilities:

    Name: Magician HelpEffect: Alastair when using Kido gains the ability to decrease a Kido Spell he uses by one post.


General Techniques:

    Technique Name:Shunpo Daburuchīmu (Flash Step Double Team)Technique Description:This technique is basically is a advanced shunpo. But while using it the opponent may see a afterimage by moving in a circular motion around his opponent. (Cool down three post. Charge: None)Technique Effect Chart:Opponent is Two+ Tiers Lower:Opponent will see two of the user.Opponent is One Tier Lower:Opponent will see two of the user but they may be able to see difference.Opponent is Equal Tier:Opponent will see fuzzy details of the user but still full shape.Opponent is One Tier Higher:Opponent will see the users body outline.Opponent is Two+ Tiers Higher:Opponent will see slight shadows, practically making this a normal shunpo.Technique Name:Spear HandTechnique Description:By extending his finger and bringing them together in a forward points motion. The user will the surround there hand in a dense reiatsu giving there hand a piercing ability.Technique Effect Chart:Opponent is Two+ Tiers Lower:This move pierce threw its opponents body leaving a small hole and crushed bone.Opponent is One Tier Lower:This move would pierce the body leaving a small hole and no cracked bones.Opponent is Equal Tier:This attack may be able to deeply cut and opponent.Opponent is One Tier Higher:This attack would slightly cut his opponent.Opponent is Two+ Tiers Higher:This attack with no effect. Maybe a slight cut.





Shinigami's Partner





Zanpakuto Name:Houdini
Zanpakuto Element:Kido
Sealed Weapon Appearance:: Sealed Houdini in its normal state takes the form of a rather long ninja to blade at eight feet long. It's hilt is a standard diamond red and black pattern with the black making the diamonds. On the top of the a small misty white opaque orb the size of a golf ball is attached.
Spirit Appearance:A twenty five year demonic cult weirdo, who dark purple and navy blue cloak which sorcerers wore, medium length blue spiky hair and a weird red tattoo or scar that started from his forehead down to his neck (Jellal Fairy Tail). His clothes consist of black slacks and long sleeve gray button up shirt with a black tie and buttons with creepy magician hand gloves. His shirt would be tucked into his pants which are being held up by a belt made of chain and a metal skull head. In Bankai he remove's the cloak revealing a black top hat with a red silky ribbon around the hat and a black one foot wand with a gray tip.

Spirit Personality:Houdini is one of the most goofy zanpaktuo in the society. He likes to play tricks on any and everyone including Alastair whenever he materializes him. Being around him is a very magically experience his personality is power and potent enough that everyone around him will be filled with happiness. He is a master of magic tending to pull all sort of disappearing acts against Alastair whenever they train for or with Bankai. He is overall one of the most hard befriending zanpaktuo spirits preferring to only like Kido users like Alastair.
Inner World:A comedy club one of which he had visited in the world of the living. It was a appeared to be a giant room full with bar tables and tall stools decorate with various beautiful dinnerware and origami. Red smooth silk elegantly laid all across the room leading to a thick shimmering curtain which covered a stage were the actors of the club preformed. The most beautiful part was the chandelier that hung above his head. It illuminated the whole room with a rainbow aura filling Alastair and anyone lucky to visit with life and happiness.
Shikai Release Phrase:“Take the stage...”
Shikai Appearance:The orb on the hilt grows drastically being as large as a basketball being supported by a golden spiral pattern which acts a as support but keeps it from moving as well. The hilt completely takes over the blade and becomes a thick seven foot black staff with golden borders and a purplish hue. Inside the orb is the same rainbow aura which illuminated his inner world but also deep within the center of the orb being release from around a rather medium sized crystal. This is known as Mage Mode.

((See Shikai Ability Before Reading This Next Part.))

When this weapon enters Assault Mode from Mage Mode its form changes from a Magicians' Staff into a Reapers Staff with its blade being fifteen inches long. The rainbow aura changes to a dark purple and black sandy like mist that's secreted from all over the staff.

Shikai Abilities:



    Name: Magic Show Effect:Houdini has the ability to make Kido spells become an ability of the weapon ridding all the kido cool down and effect durations. Instead Alastair has the ability to use up to ten Kido spells freely before this ability goes into a five post cool down. He also has the ability to increase the size of the spell which he desires up to three times bigger. When this weapon is active all Kido Alastair uses will be conjured through the orb. (Incantations would still apply.)(This form is also know as Mage Mode). This weapon also possesses a healing property upon releasing the rainbow aura from the orb also to cast stronger healing spells. This weapon holds a second ability... To transform into a purple and black scythe which upon transformation which turns the gorgeous rainbow aura into a black and purple mist that holds the ability to create illusions to further Alastair's offensive capabilities. Alastair can make up to three illusions before this ability goes into a 5 posts cool down. At this point Alastair can only make illusion as far as replicating himself and his weapon.

    ((This weapon can only switch Modes once every three posts. ***Assault Mode cannot Utilize the Kido Ability as well as Kido/Healing not being usable while in this mode.
    ***Mage Mode cannot Utilize the illusion ability or perform.))


Shikai Techniques:


    Technique Name:Chen Burasuto (Chain Blast)Technique Description:By charging rieatsu into the tip of the scythe. You can then send the rieatsu threw the chain into the sword and out the tip as a red blast at my opponent. Charge one post. Cool Down Three.Technique Effect Chart:Opponent is Two+ Tiers Lower:This attack will leave burn on the opponent and explosion damage.Opponent is One Tier Lower:This attack wiill leave scorch marks.Opponent is Equal Tier:This attack will sear the opponent.Opponent is One Tier Higher:This attack will sting and leave a warm touch.Opponent is Two+ Tiers Higher:This attack will just tingle the skin.Technique Name:Kama Disuku (Scythe Disc)Technique Description:Alastair will slightly extend the chain of his Shikai, he would then rapidly spin the scythe. He would then cover it in rieatsu  that turns red and appears to seem like a red cd disc spinning. (Charge: One Post) (Cooldown: 3)Technique Effect Chart:Opponent is Two+ Tiers Lower:This attack will slash and burn opponent.Opponent is One Tier Lower:This attack will cut and scorch opponent.Opponent is Equal Tier:This attack will slice and sear opponent.Opponent is One Tier Higher:This attack will graze opponent and leave a warm touch.Opponent is Two+ Tiers Higher:This attack will graze and sting.Technique Name:Akuma No Dansu (Devils Dance)Technique Description:Alastair will extend his chain up to three feet. He would then tighten his grip on both the scythe and sword. And Lastly he will relase a flurry of elegant spin and ballerina attacks.(No Charge or Cooldown.)Technique Effect Chart:Opponent is Two+ Tiers Lower:This attack will slash and cut the opponent. times.Opponent is One Tier Lower:This attack will slash the opponent.Opponent is Equal Tier:This attack will cut the opponent.Opponent is One Tier Higher:This attack will scratch the opponent.Opponent is Two+ Tiers Higher:This attack may tingle the opponent or miss completely.KidouSpell Name: Spirit CannonSpell Type: CustomSpell Number: 5Spell Incantation: Spirits lend me your energy form a holy cannon. Let god purify this energy and form this cannon.Spell Effect: This attack fires collected reiatsu to exploded and burn your opponent by heating the rieatsu to the point where it explodes resulting in a explosion of white energy. Blast range 3 meters.Spell Name: Shakkaho (Red Fire Cannon)Spell Type: HadouSpell Number: 31Spell Incantation: "Ye lord! Mask of blood and flesh, all creation, flutter of wings, ye who bears the name of Man! Inferno and pandemonium, the sea barrier surges, march on to the south!"Spell Effect: The user gather a red aura into there palm or the finger tip of there hand which manifest into a flame then shapes into a ball . When released the attack shoots forward and when contact is made it explodes into a blast of red flames.Spell Name: Byakurai (Pale Lightning)Spell Type: HadouSpell Number: 31Spell Incantation: UnknownSpell Effect: The user shoots a white concentrated bolt of lightning from there fingertips.Spell Name:  ShoSpell Type: HadouSpell Number: 1Spell Incantation: UnknownSpell Effect: The User uses the force of there reiatsu to push there target away from them.Spell Name: SokatsuiSpell Type: HadouSpell Number: 33Spell Incantation: “Ye lord! Mask of flesh and bone, flutter of wings, ye who bears the name of Man! Truth and temperance, upon this sinless wall of dreams unleash but slightly the wrath of your claws."Spell Effect: The user fire blue spiritual energy at the target which looks to be flames. This attack is similar to Shakkaho but with a wider range and more power.Spell Name: Soren SokatsuiSpell Type: HadouSpell Number: 73 Spell Incantation: “Ye lord! Mask of blood and flesh, all creation, flutter of wings, ye who bears the name of Man! One the wall of blue flame, inscribe a twin lotus. In the abyss of conflagration, wait at the far heavens.”Spell Effect: Same as Sokatsui but two blast with a even wider range and twice the power.Spell Name: SaiSpell Type: BakudoSpell Number: 1Spell Incantation: UnknownSpell Effect: The user uses there spiritual pressure to form a rope that locks the target arms in place behind there back.Spell Name: Shitotsu SansenSpell Type: BakudoSpell Number: 30Spell Incantation: UnknownSpell Effect: The user draws a triangle in the air around his opponent and his spiritual pressure creates three golden beams of light that slam into the target creating a equilateral triangle.Spell Name: GekiSpell Type: BakudoSpell Number: Spell Incantation: “Disintegrate, you black dog of Rondanin!! Look upon yourself with horror and tear out your own throat!” Spell Effect: Surrounds target in a red light causing paralyses.Spell Name: SekientonSpell Type: BakudoSpell Number: 21Spell Incantation: UnknownSpell Effect: After activation the user releases a huge blast that leaves behind a red smoke sort of like ninja smoke bombs.Are you a Visored?Tell me your story...History:Alastair Knightfield was born November 25, 1918 in the soul society by two soldiers. Shortly after his birth both of his parents where killed. No one ever discovered who killed them and why. He was adopted by the 3rd seat of the 6th squad at the time. He names was Hitori Knightfield. His childhood was very interesting. He grew up around powerful shinigami. Although his adoptive father and the rest of his family were soul reapers. Alastair didn’t want to become one. He wanted to be the soul societies greatest physiologist. A man who could listens to other problems break them down in his head a slove them. So that’s what  he did, He studied physiology in the human world but also took classes in the soul society. He was well on his way to achieving his goal until he met her.A beautiful girl short curly hair sandy brown eyes and caramel skin. She also has a smile to kill for. One day Alastair gathered the courage to talk to her. He found out her name and he loved the way it rolled of her tongue, “Hi my name is Lilynette Amagi.” After that day they quickly become best friends. It was then that Alastair found out that she disliked everything he wanted to be. He knew telling her that’s what he planned to become would harm there friendship so he decided to keep it secretHe also discovered that she has a strong hate for people who are not shinigmai but lived in the Seireitei. It was then he knew he had some work to do. He finally start practicing shinigami arts. His father taught him how to expertly use swords. He would then teach him basic sword styles and moves. Finally he taught him basic hand to hand combat and reiatsu control. It was then that he asked Lilynette to go on one of her basic patrols trips. Little did they know this patrol would be far from basic. He used the limited knowledge he had to take down simple hollows. While fighting a low class hollow a higher class managed to slip pass Lilynette to take down Alastair. He managed to block its attack and back up. He unlocked his full potential at the time by taping into his rieatsu and raising his spiritual pressure dramatically. Alastair focused the rieatsu into a single sword slash destroying the hollow. He then collapsed on one knee as Lilynette finished her hollow and ran to help Alastair. When she reach him she laughed, “Are you ok Allar?” He smiled himself as she was helping him back to his feet. Once he gain his footing back he replied to he question, “Im fine now, lets get going.” He continued walking forward heading into the forest clearing. It was then he turned to see what was taking Lilynette so long. When he did she had the most terrified look on her face and screamed, “Alastair watch out!.” He turned around but it was to late. He managed to see the out line of a huge hollow. About teen feet and green with three long claw like nails on each hand. The beast screeched and raised his arms for an attack. Alastair tired to block it but the beast slammed him into a tree which caused him to fly into various others trees a few feet away. That attack left him with  three broken ribs and a twisted ankle, He screamed and pain as he searched for his sword. He attempted to stand up but the hallow was right in front of him once again ready to administer the killing blow.He still was searching for his sword. He found that it was across the field on the opposite side. He found himself helpless as the hollow once again sung at him. He braced for the hit but Lilynette blocked it with her sword struggling, “Get out of here Alastair.” He wasn’t going to leave her but he would use this chance to get his sword. He hopped to it quickly and prepared a attack. He saw the Lilynette wouldn’t last much longer. He started to spin on the one leg that was normal he attempted to spin slash the hollow and that’s what he did.  He slashed as hard as he could at the hollows right arm chopping it off. But this caused the hallows attention back to Alastair. The  worst part  was that Alastair’s back was turned towards the hollow. The beast screeched and lunged his three claw at Alastair’s back. As that connect that only made three long gashes when Lilynette pushed him out the way taking the rest of the attack to her own body. This resulted in the hand piercing her destroying he spleen and abdomen. Blood spilled from her mouth and that life instantly disappeared from his face, “LILYNETTE!!” He quickly recovered from the pushed he lunged forward jumped into the air and cut the hollows head clean off it’s shoulders.As he fell back onto the ground he landed on the twisted ankle which caused him to fall forward unto on the ground. He started to crawl to Lilynette who was quickly bleeding out, “I’m… so sorry. I….. I… Love you!.” He continued to crawl to her as tears fell from his eyes. He started to tell her everything , to how he lied to how he felt when he first met her. As he finished speaking he reached her and she weakly placed her hand on his  cheek and told him, “I know I knew for a long time now and I lo….” she had passed away right there in his arms…..Her death was a very hard thing for Alastair to go threw. He grades in school dropped and he begin getting involved with the wrong people. It was not until his father knocked some sense into him by telling him this is not what Lilynette would want and how she would live.. It was then he vowed to become a full fledge shinigami in her memory but also continue towards his dreams. He begged his father to continue teaching him everything he knew. The father taught him very well and he even learned how to incorporated his psychology into tactic to anger his opponents. Suddenly one night he father caught a strange disease that sadly took his life a month later.. He decided to take his lessons even further and enroll into the Shin'o Academy.While in the academy he honed  his skills further and became a master in kido. He excelled far beyond his classmates in swordsmanship. He invented a shunpo variation known as the Super Shunpo. This shunpo was different from a normal one because it leave behind a afterimage. Throughout his studies he kept seeing a strange man that has the appearance of a thirty five year old stalker. Long dark black trench coat, long spike black hair and a weird hat constantly covering his face. His clothes consist of  black slacks and long sleeve gray button up shirt with a black tie and buttons. His shirt would be tucked into his pants which are being held up by a belt made of chain and a metal skull head. He kept trying t tell him something but the words where mute and his lips where unreadable.Everyday the man would appear repeating the same thing but the more he trained  the more he understood what the man was trying to say.  The most he could decipher was, “M* **m* is *eng***.” It was not until that fateful day when he heard the full sentence of what the man was trying to tell him. The was a group of hollows causing a disturbance in the human world so Alastair and two of his squad members where dispatched to handle to handle it. When they arrived that discovered the hollows were stronger then expected. They managed to take down his two teammates. He found himself being surround by the hollows. He knew he wouldn’t last long because he was already exhausted from there first clash. He was  ready to except death . He then close his eyes as the hollows lunged forward. He found it strange when he didn’t feel or hear anything. When he opened his eyes he found himself in a dull and boring place… It was made of white, gray, and black colors. It is basically the regular world without colors. It is a open field of an abandoned graveyard. There lied withered dead tress and cracked gravestones. When he turned to observe the world he was faced by the strange man who told him everything. This man was the spirit of his sword and this was Alastair inner psyche. He told him when they first met he could not hear him because he was strong enough yet.. Now was the time to learn exactly what the man was saying.  The man lowered his hat and began to speak, “My name is…” It was then Alastair found himself back in the world of the living with hollows still lunging at him. At the same time the memory of his zanpakuto saying his name was released at the same time the thought flew through his head, “BENGAZI!”  At those words the sword changed drastically. From its normal sealed form the blade changes slightly. The skull on the hilt falls off and transforms into a three quarters of a foot scythe. The scythe develops a handle for holding. The chain connect to the swords and the skull size increases as well. It becomes the size of half of that of a normal chain. The hilt it self also changes instead of it normal oval shape it becomes more of a cylinder. The spot where the skull fell from morphs into a cross like emblem. The blade it self become thicker and longerWith this newly evolved sword he took down the hollows. Gather his teammates and headed home. Since them he has been honing his skill further tapping into his Shikai’s full power. He learned that the hilt now has the ability to stretch out the chain up to five feet. And his spirit has taught him a few of his techniques known as Chen Burasuto, Kama Disuku, and Akuma no Dansu. Every sense then he has been focusing on his psychology degree and honing his skills to become a great shinigami.RP Sample:


http://www.bleachstory.net/t4992-a-helpful-meeting-closed-rp-and-is-for-the-rp-sample-of-alastair-knightfield#67627[/lis

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on Sun Nov 03, 2013 4:27 am

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You are missing the template code. This app wont be graded until it's fixed.

You can find the template code here:
http://www.bleachstory.net/t4231-shinigami-vizard-template

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on Sun Nov 03, 2013 10:49 pm

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Appearance: 3+
Personality: 3+
History: 10+
RP Sample: 6+
Overall: Good character that has a lot of potential but needs some changes and doesn't have a whole lot of depth. Approved for 3-3

I will now grade your powers on a pass/fail basis.


Technique Name:Super Shunpo
Technique Description:This technique is basically is a advanced shunpo. But while using it the opponent may see a afterimage. This will cause them to miss the real one flying at them. (Cool down three post. Charge: None)

Technique Effect Chart:


Opponent is Two+ Tiers Lower:Opponent will see two of the user.
Opponent is One Tier Lower:Opponent will see two of the user but they may be able to see difference.
Opponent is Equal Tier:Opponent will see fuzzy details of the user but still full shape.
Opponent is One Tier Higher:Opponent will see the users body outline.
Opponent is Two+ Tiers Higher:Opponent will see slight shadows, practically making this a normal shunpo.
You really couldn't come up with a better name for this than "super shunpo"? D: 

Anyways, you should probably change the wording on this so your character doesn't have to fly towards the enemy afterwards. That will trap you into a pattern and your opponents will be able to see through it.


Name:Chensakasu (Chain Circus)
Effect:The ability to manipulate the chain of the sword to increase or decrease its length to switch in-between close and mid ranged attack The chain limit is five feet.
5 feet is nothing. Change this to 5 meters. That is medium range in the bleach universe.


Technique Name:Akuma No Dansu (Devils Dance)
Technique Description:Alastair will extend his chain up to three feet. He would then tighten his grip on both the scythe and sword. And Lastly he will relase a flurry of elegant spin and ballerina attacks.(No Charge or Cooldown.)

Technique Effect Chart:


Opponent is Two+ Tiers Lower:This attack will slash and cut the opponent 7-9 times.
Opponent is One Tier Lower:This attack will slash the opponent 5-7 times.
Opponent is Equal Tier:This attack will slash the opponent 3-5 times.
Opponent is One Tier Higher:This attack will slash the opponent 1-3 times
Opponent is Two+ Tiers Higher:This attack may slash the opponent 1 time or miss completely.
The number of attacks shouldn't change depending on the strength of your opponent. Whether your attacks miss or hit depends on how you describe them IC. Instead the tier chart should be used the same way it is used for other attacks. To describe the degree of damage one would get IF it hits them.


Spell Name: Spirit Cannon
Spell Type: Custom
Spell Number: 5
Spell Incantation: Spirits lend me your energy form a holy cannon. Let god purify this energy and form this cannon.
Spell Effect: This attack fires collected reiatsu to explode and burn your enemy.
Please be a bit more descriptive about the scale of the spell effect. How bit is this explosion and what kind of range does it have?

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on Mon Nov 04, 2013 9:38 am

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Super Shunpo Named edited and attacks fixed. :D

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on Mon Nov 04, 2013 9:42 am

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You just need Pallas' approval now

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on Mon Nov 04, 2013 11:54 am

Appearance: 3+
Personality: 3+
History: 10+
RP Sample: 6+
Overall: I'd have to agree. Very good read and seems to have a few things in common with my own Shini. Hope they can be friends. Thank you for your hard work. I know the RP sample is not finished, but i do want to say I belive in you from what i've seen. I also give this a 3-3.

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on Mon Nov 04, 2013 10:47 pm

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Locked and moved!

Now you need to go check out the Gotei 13 position list and sign up for a squad:

http://www.bleachstory.net/t4742-gotei-13-position-list

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on Sun Jan 18, 2015 1:39 pm

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Making Major Edits to this Charrie!

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on Sun Jan 18, 2015 3:34 pm

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Who are you?




Name:Alastair Knightfield
Alias: The Magicians Apprentice
Age: 450
Age of Appearance: 25
Gender: Male
Race/Species: Shinigami
Character Alignment: Neutral

Appearance: Alastair has the appearance of a young man in his early twenties. He has a light caramel skin tone with midnight blue eyes with a purple tent. He has a blackish gray hair color dressed in spiky short tips. He has a slim swimmers build with a very visible six pack. His shoulders and arms are a more fair caramel then the rest of his body. There also well toned and sculpted for his age.

His lower body consists of strong firm legs and well defined calf’s. Alastair weighs about 175 pounds of lean muscles. He height is 5’11 with a waist of 36 inches. While in battle he may seem shorter due to his zanpakuto being about to change its length. Also in battle he may seem weak and naive teenager with the appearance of a waiter. But in actuality he is a strong warrior of the soul society.

Alastair has a beautiful seductive smile, which is complemented by his pearl white teeth and smooth light pink lips. His midnight blue eyes are surrounded by narrow eyelids and soft think eyebrows. His ears are a fair size there also well sculpted. His hair is very rough yet manageable seeing as the longest strand only touched the back of his neck. He has a very small soft nose that complements his eyes and mouth giving him his sex appeal.

Style/Clothing: For clothing he usually wears the standard black shinigami kimono and balloon pants. His footwear consist of a thin cotton linen socks and basic Asian style flip flops. When his off duty or representing the soul society he wears his favorite two piece black fitted Armani suit with hidden built in pockets. His pants are always folded and creased with a black belt with a silver loop. His shoes are normal black dress shoes buffed and cleaned often. When he visit the human world he usually wears loose fitted jeans with a blue t-shirt with cheap sneakers.

Under his suit jacket Alastair wears a basic white button up shirt that’s tucked into his pants. On tops of the button up shirt he was a fitted black fest. And to tie off his outfit he wears a light blue scarf given to him by a close friend long ago. He may also wear reading glasses to improve his sex appeal or set off his style.

Tattoo's/Scars/Etc: One his right shoulder blade Alastair has a tattoo of a pentagram surround in a thick circle. Also on his back are three huge claw marks running down the length of his back.

Personality: Alastair’s a very relaxed person. He loved free time to himself and enjoys sleeping his days away. He usually ignores everything besides thing that help him reach his goals or whatever he’s doing. He focuses only on the positive thing and thing that makes things better for others. There’s are times were his ego gets the best of him and he reacts on impulse by wildly lunging at a person on yelling. Other then that he is a very passive person he intends to let peoples rude comments and attitudes be fuel to his goals and passions. He enjoys studying other people and learning human behavioral Patterns which makes his a curious person.

He comes off as a happy person around people also smiling and lifting up others. When he is sad or upset he tends to isolate himself from other to regroup. When alone he only has one goal to hone his abilities and skills which usually leaves him with a serious side. Towards his enemies he will present himself as a serious opponent but also he will as if he were trying to get into his opponents head. He often tries to replicate professor behavior.

He is very fascinated by fighting. He enjoys partaking in them but even more watching them. While fighting his personality changes the most . He takes serious to the next level by adding sadistic movements and hostile attacks. He at the start of the fight he will become an Analyst constantly blocking attack with his sword to adjust to his opponents current strength and fighting patterns.

In battle Alastair is very slick, over confident and cunning. He at times can be very vulgar and childish. He can be very rebellious and hard headed to must authority figures. But when needed is very reliable and trustworthy. He is brave and fearless looking at each situation as a accomplishment. He is very optimistic and bright, may not be the smartest apple in the tree but he's definitely not one of the fallen ones.

He is very disassociated with the public and tends to be a loner. He loves to participate in heinous acts outside the Soul Society. Alastair is loving and supportive. He considers himself a abomination for not being able to save his loved ones. He is a protector and a destroyer definitely worthy of his family name.

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Battle Specs





List of 'Known' Skills:

• Shunpo
• Basic Reiatsu Detection
• *If more need to be added let a Mod/Admin know*


Fighting Style: Alastair prefers to fight one on one battle but will fight multiple people. He switches between close to mid ranged attacks based on his zanpakuto. Defensive measure may include a normal block counter, to a parry and attack. He knows Taekwondo, Tang Soo Do, and Muay Thai. While he trains he visions he is fighting a opponent so he uses all his might and force not holding back at all, When he fights he takes everyone seriously fighting with his all holding nothing back. When having the upper hand Alastair tends not to toy with anyone and ending the fight and there life swiftly without hesitation. When fighting someone stronger he gives it his all only to retreat when he life is in certain danger. He is as very passionate Kido user and tends to rely on it alot.

Personal Abilities:

Name: Magician's Help
Effect: When not using a released zanpaktuo Alastair gains the ability to decrease a Kido's cool down post by one.

General Techniques:

Technique Name: Kido Combine
Technique Description: This technique will all Alastair to combine Kido to form a Mega Spell. This can only be used one time every four posts and requires the incantation of both spells if possible.

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on Wed Aug 12, 2015 8:58 pm

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There has been no change to this app in over a 1 month. Either you've become inactive, or have chosen to stop working on it. This app will be moved into the Inactive section until a Mod is told you wish too work on it.


Actually, moving to approved since this was originally approved.  Will move back if you wish when ready.

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