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on Sat Oct 26, 2013 8:31 pm




Who are you?







    Name: Rha' Chonchiyo
    Alias:  The Hero of the Rukon
    Age:  120
    Age of Appearance: 19
    Gender: Male
    Race/Species:Shinigami
    Character Alignment:Good

    Appearance: Rha is 5’6” tall and weighs about 150 pounds.  He has soft to the touch skin that is not totally white.  It has a bit of a tan from working at the forge.  Rha has light blonde hair that goes down a little past his ears.  His eyes are a bright emerald green in color.

    Although Rha is of average weight for his height, most of this comes from his muscles.  His arm muscles are well built due to him working at the forge.  He has some leg muscles due to him standing for long periods of time as well from working in the forge.  His chest is also very strong and has a decent amount of muscles.  This is also due to him working at the forge.

    Style/Clothing: Rha wears what is considered the normal Shinigami outfit.  The main difference here is that blue where it would normally be black.  It is also green where it would normally be white.  His sword stays at his side using a green obi tied around his waist.  His socks are white and he wears black sandles to complete the outfit.

    When in the forge he wears traditional forging clothing.  His pants are long and, like his shinigami outfit, blue.  He wears a long sleeved shirt the covers his arms and that is also blue.  His forging apron is green and made out of a sturdy material that is fire proof.  He also has a pair of gloves he can wear that are blue and green as well.  On his feet is a pair of steel toed black boots and on his head is a green cap.

    Tattoo's/Scars/Etc: Rha has a scar that runs along his back. He received this scar from a hollow that attacked him when he was 8 years old.

    Personality:  Rha is a bit of a lone wolf and prefers to be by himself sometimes.  Though when he is around people his is a team player.  He works very hard by himself and when he is in a group.  Some might say he works to hard as he can be found asleep at times when he works at his forge.  He’ll evens still have his hammer in his hand.

    Rha is a very stubborn man.  He will get one thing in mind and be stuck on that and nothing more.  Also, when he makes a promise he keeps it.  He will do everything in his power and then some to keep the promise.  He’s avoided death many times due to his promise to his parents to keep living.  

    (For Likes, Dislikes, Ambitions, etc, go for 1-3 sentences per point, more if you wish.)

    Likes:


    • Rha likes to relax with  friends.  He may like to be a bit of a loner, but he does have many friends and likes to spend time with them when possible.
    • Rha likes to also make new friends.  While he has been a loner for most of his life, this is something he is trying to change.  That is why he likes to make friends.
    • Rha loves to make hollow jewelry.  He does this by working in the forge with hollow masks he has collected.
    • Speaking of hollow masks, he loves to collect hollow masks so that he can make his jewelry.  
    • Rha also likes to dress up and play the part of Hero of the Rukon.  No one really knows his true identity but Hikaru Shibata, who helps him.  He uses this to fight crime and hollows in the Rukon.


    Dislikes:


    • Rha does not like to be involved in a long fight.  If a fight starts to last to long he will escape if possible or try to end it.
    • Rha also does not like killing unarmed or innocent men.
    • Rha does not like to see women and children get hurt.  It’s his main reason for being the hero of the Rukon.
    • Rha, like most soul reapers, does not like hollows.  He will go and kill them for their masks.
    • Rha does not like the slums of the Rukon.  That is why he dresses as the Hero of the Rukon and fights crime there.

    Ambitions/Dreams/Goals:


    • One goal is to kill all the hollows so that no one has to suffer anymore.
    • Rha’s main goal is to kill the hollow that gave him the scar on his back.
    • He dreams to be the best jewelry forger ever.


    Strengths:


    • Rha has warrior like traits.  This helps him to end a battle quickly.
    • Rha works hard as the Hero of the Rukon to keep people safe.  He enjoys his work and the people appreciate what he does.
    • Rha has perseverance.  He keeps going till the job is done.
    • Rha is a strategist.  He is good at short cuts and works to find a way out of any situation.
    • Rha is kind and sweet hearted.  He loves to help all and will always take time out of his day to do so when needed.


    Fears & Weaknesses:


    • Rha has a fear of being alone.  Though he is a lone wolf, he is trying to change that.  He fears being totally alone.
    • He also hates to fight alone.  He prefers to be in a group.  The only time he likes to be alone is when he’s the Hero of the Rukon.  Even then he sometimes fights with Hikaru by his side.
    • Though Rha likes to be around people he fears getting to close to them.  
    • He fears he will loose his temper and attack innocent people.  
    • Rha has a small drinking problem that he is working to fix.  He also smokes.  Hikaru and his spirit, Aura, are working to help him stop.







    Battle Specs





    List of 'Known' Skills:



    • Shunpo
    • Basic Reiatsu Detection
    • *If more need to be added let a Mod/Admin know*


    Fighting Style: Rha is a strategist.  He likes to make quick work of a battle but does so using common sense and tact.  He can also be wild and unpredictable and is good at being a close to mid ranged fighter.

    Personal Abilities:


      (Shinigami may not start with more than ONE personal ability. Personal abilities are special powers unique to your character. They are obtained at birth or through freak occurrences. These cannot be things you would able to teach others or simply obtain through hard work along.)


      Name:  Rha does not have any.
      Effect:


    General Techniques:

    (Shinigami may NOT start with more than four general techniques. Techniques are not extra abilities, but rather, skills which use your abilities in more extreme forms beyond their basic use. For example... let's say I can shoot fire from my fingers. A technique might be gathering a whole bunch of fire for a few minutes and then shooting a fire-laser from my fingers, doing much more damage than what my ability normally would on it's own. Other special or basic techniques using your normal control over your spiritual energy can also be added here, like adding reiatsu to your punches to inflict more damage, and things like that. Think of abilities as special powers - and think of techniques as moves which use the powers you already have. These are moves your character was taught or trained and developed on their own. They are things anyone would be able to learn and perform unless they are dependent on your unique race or abilities. Examples are custom shunpo variations, hakuda/zanjutsu techniques, and using your reiatsu on an object to simulate telekinesis.)
    These are not used for extra shikai or bankai techniques, elemental techniques, extra abilities and powers.
    Limit 4.



      Technique Name:  None



      Shinigami's Partner





      Zanpakuto Name: Aura
      Zanpakuto Element: Poison
      Sealed Weapon Appearance: The hilt is green and light blue.  The blue continues up through the blade.  The blade is blue and black and is 26 inches long.
      Spirit Appearance: Aura is a normal tiger.  She does not have the normal coloration however.  She is orange in color and where there would normally be black strips there are green strips instead.
      Spirit Personality: Aura is nice for the most part.  The only time she can be a handful is when she is angry or lecturing Rha.  She is otherwise a good help to Rha and helps him out all she can in battle.
      Inner World: Rha's inner world is that of a lush jungle area with a pile of rocks hidden somewhere inside.  It rarely rains there but the trees and plants are always green.  The tree's are tall and the forest reaches out as far as the eye can see.
      Shikai Release Phrase: Reveal, Aura, Tiger of the poison mist.
      Shikai Appearance: a graceful nzappa zap (A throwing ax)
      Shikai Abilities:

      (Shinigami may start with ONE shikai ability; you may have two shikai abilities only if you can get the tier of 3-3 or stronger. If you have two anyway and fail to get that tier, you will simply have to lock one of the abilities so you can't use them until you hit the appropriate rank. Shikai abilities are only usable in Shikai - they do not apply in bankai or your sealed form.)



        Name:  Poison Mist
        Effect: Rha's shikai has a poisonous mist that surrounds him and the ax.  should someone touch it they will either be slowed down for a period of time, 5 posts, or have trouble seeing for 5 posts depending on what sense Rha chooses for it to affect.  No health is lost.


      Shikai Techniques: (Shinigami are allowed to start with no more than SIX shikai techniques)


        Technique Name:  Poison Cloak
        Technique Description: Rha can call upon a cloak that is made of poison.  When someone touches the cloak they are slowed down by the poison for 2 posts.  No real physical damage is done to the enemy.


        Kidou


        (You may posses up to 10 hadou and 10 bakudo. You may give up some of one for the other for example, a character with 5 hadou and 15 bakudou. Custom Kidou also go here. Spells do not have tier comparison charts as their power varies greatly depending on the caster. YOU MAY ONLY START WITH 1 CUSTOM KIDO. The exception is if you are starting as a kidou corp member. Then you may start with 3 custom spells.)


        Spell Name: Sai
        Spell Type: Bakudo
        Spell Number: 1
        Spell Incantation: Unknown
        Spell Effect: I will point my fingers at a person and call out the name of the spell.  This will bind the persons arms behind their back.

        Spell Name: Rikujokoro
        Spell Type: Bakudo
        Spell Number: 61
        Spell Incantation: Carriage of thunder, bridge of a spinning wheel. With light, divide this into six!
        Spell Effect: This is another restraint spell.  This immobilizes a person with six spiritual bands.  To use this spell I will hold up my index finger and point it at the target.  This will generage a yellow bit of energy which summons six thin, wide beams of light.  These in turn slam into the targets midsection to hold them in place.  The enemy is then unable to move any part of their body up to and including those parts where the beams hit the enemy.

        Spell Name: Tozansho
        Spell Type: Bakudo
        Spell Number: 73
        Spell Incantation: Unknown
        Spell Effect: The spell starts off a a single point.  From there blue energy extends upward to four points.  From there an inverted pyramid is created around me.  This then solidifies into a barrier that can be used around already active spells and can also be used to trap other people inside.  This includes enemy and friend alike.

        Spell Name: Sajo Sabaku
        Spell Type: Bakudo
        Spell Number: 63
        Spell Incantation: unknown
        Spell Effect: This spell is similar to Hainawa in that he will create a very thick rope from the yellow energy he creates and ensnare the target with it.  To create this rope he will raise his palm to the target and close his hand into a fist.  This spell will bind the upper body of the target.  According to Hachigen Ushoda, physical strength alone should not be enough to break out of a level 60 Bakudo spell.

        Spell Name: Byakurai
        Spell Type: Hadou
        Spell Number: 4
        Spell Incantation: Unknown
        Spell Effect: Rha will gather high-density spiritual energy.  He will this discharge this from both hands.  An alternative way to use this attack is for Rha to point his index finger at his target and generate a concentrated bolt of lighting to use against him or her.

        Spell Name: Shakkaho
        Spell Type: Hadou
        Spell Number: 31
        Spell Incantation: Ye lord! Mask of blood and flesh, all creation, flutter of wings, ye who bears the name of Man! Inferno and pandemonium, the sea barrier surges, march on to the south!
        Spell Effect: This spell has different uses and can vary depending on how much energy is used.  Rha will generate high-temperature flames either on his finger tips or in the palm of his hands.  The energy generated will range from a small orb to a large orb.  This destruction caused by this can either be small or large depending on the size of the orb and amount of energy used.  No matter the power the spell causes concussive as well as burn damage.

        Spell Name: Kurohitsugi
        Spell Type: Hado
        Spell Number: 90
        Spell Incantation: Sleeping crest of turbidity.  Arrogant vessel of lunacy! Boil forth and deny!  Grow numb and flicker! Disrupt sleep! Crawling queen of iron! Eternally self-destructing doll of mud! Unite! Repulse! Fill with soil and know your own powerlessness!
        Spell Effect: Rha has only used this spell once in his life and it was used in a life or death situation.  This spell locks a target in a back spiritual coffin.  Rha will then generate a purple/black spiritual energy using his own reiatsu.  This energy covers the target with a powerful torrent of gravity that takes the form of a box.  It then is covered in several spear-like protrusions which pierce the box and lacerate the one inside from head to toe.




        Tell me your story...





        History:  

        Rha was born to two loving parents, Sara and Jon.  He was raised by them and watched his father often as he worked at the family forge in the jewelry store his family owned.  He never knew his grandparents as Sara's partents disowned her when she married Jon.  Once in a while a friend of the family, Hikaru Shibata, would come by.  Hikaru was made Rha's godfather when he was born.  

        When Rha was 8 years old he was with his parents in the den when some hollows attacked.  Hikaru was suppoesed to be there earlyer in the night but did not make it due to sleeping in.  He maded it in time to save Rha, but just barely.  Rha had a large gash along his back from one hollow and his parents were dead.  Hikaru had taken Rha to the hospital from there but Rha had left on his own before Hikaru could check him out safely.

        Rha lived on the streets alone for may years, doing his best to survive.  He would steal when he needed to and found help from many people at times when he really needed it.  When Rha was old enough he got tired of being a thief.  He soon went back to his shop and opened it up.  He then began to make jewelry out of hollow masks.  Once he discovered his Zanpakuto he began to hunt different hollows in the area and taking them out.  He would also save the helpless.  He soon earned the title, "Hero of the Rukon." by the people of the rukon after a while.

        He keept this up for many years, getting to know his zakpakuto better and better with each fight.  Soon he was able to learn Aura's name as he fought and that made him just that much stronger.  He started off with a rock relationship with Aura.  They fought and did not get along at all.  It took some time, and a little help from a passer by, Hikaru Shibata, to get them to become friends.  Soon after Aura and and Rha became friends, Hikaru and Rha became friends as well.

        Eventually Hikaru helps Rha to discover who his parents are through use of the Shibata library.  Rha had asked Hikaru if he knew anything about his past.  Hikaru had not known that his hollow side was blocking some of his memories so he just refered Rha to the library.  Rha eventually found the book that talked about the Chonchiyo history.  Rha later found out that Hikaru is his godfather and found out that Hikaru was supposed to marry his mom, Sara.  He found out that his Grandfather cut off his mom from thier wealth due to the fact that she married Rha's father, Jon, instead of Hikaru. That soon lead to a big fight between Rha and his grandfather.  Eventually his grandfather was arrested for doing what he did and Rha became the head of the family.

        RP Sample:


      This comes from one of the older threads from this site.  Link below.  I will separate what each person put in each post.
      http://www.bleachstory.net/t3346p15-rha-s-day-at-the-chonchiyo-forge

      Rha started his day at the forge like any other day.  Warming the fires to a ghostly white and he gets the hammer and anvil ready for the day.  But this day was different his scare burned at him as this mark the day of his mother and father's death. This hurt Rha's body but he soon had the forge opened up for the day knowing the people of Rukon come first.  They all ways have they were his family in a way.

      Hikaru sat in his office filling out paperwork. He sighs and felt the need to get out of his office. He stands up and begins to go for a walk. He soon finds himself in the rukon district. He looks to the sky to see the smoke from Rha's forge. He smiles knowing his friend is hard at work doing something he loves. He takes this opportunity to pay Rha a visit. He walks over to the forge and knocks on the door. He says, "Hey Rha my friend. Are you in?

      Rha hears the knock and goes and opens the door and sees Hikaru he says. "Hay Hikaru good to see you " Rha opens the door to let his good friend into his forge as he letting his newest hollow custom jewelry piece cool on the anvil a bit before dunking it in water. And the steam goes out the window with a loud hiss.

      Hikaru walks in and watches Rha at work. He says, "Not to much Rha. I just needed to get out for a bit. I saw the smoke and thought I'd stop by to see what you were up to. I also felt you needed a bit of company knowing what today was and all."  Hikaru remained where he was, watching what he was doing with the hollow mask.

      Rha keeps working on his newest hollow custom jewelry piece.  He takes out of the water and keeps working on it. "Will you know this day is never easy for me but I do what I can". He keep shaping the hollow mask into what he wanted.  Then he dose a sharp whistle and Aura, his tiger, comes down and sees Hikaru. She goes over to him and nuzzles his hand to be pet as Rha works.

      Hikaru smiles at Aura when he sees her. He then begins to pet her and says, "Hello Aura. Hope your doing well.  Hope your getting along with Rha."  Hikaru then turns to Rha and says, "Is that a special order for someone?  Looks good so far."  He keeps petting Aura as he speaks.

      Rha keeps working and says "you can say that my friend"  Aura purrs softly as Hikaru pets her and she says "Hikaru I’m fine but Rha is being stubborn like all ways"  Aura sits so Hikaru can pet her more as Rha keeps working.

      Hikaru says, "I see. Keep up the good work."  Hikaru keeps petting Aura. As he does he knows all to well that Rha is stubborn. He takes a few moments to think and then says, "You know that he's stubborn Aura. What I want to know is what he's done this time to make you say that."

      Aura says "will it's  the scare" and Rha keeps working as aura talks with Hikaru.  Aura keeps purring as Hikaru keeps petting her.

      Hikaru looks at Aura and sighs. He says, "I know Aura. Its worse today than on any other day. I still can't help but feel partially responsible for not being there when I promised him I would be. I only wish that there was a way to be able to take away his pain.  He's a good friend and I hate to see him in pain.  Do you think that's normal Aura?"

      "Yes you what him to feel better and I’m sure Sara and Jon forgive you Hikaru and so dose Rha"  Aura says as Rha is soon putting his new piece in the forge to reheat it for the finishing touches on the piece in his own world as he works.  "But there is nothing we can do Hikaru.  He has been to every healer in the Fourth Division and with no results."  Aura says as she rests her paws on one of Hikaru's legs

      (there is more to this, but its very long.  You can read it fully if you click on the link.  It really starts fully on page 2)

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on Mon Feb 10, 2014 6:55 am

This app is ready to grade. Can someone please grade this as I can not since I helped him put it together? Thank you.

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on Sat Apr 05, 2014 9:14 am

Since no one will approve this app i will approve it at 4-2 and move it to approved apps. I feel this is fair and will at least allow him to play if he chooses to do so.

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on Sun Apr 06, 2014 3:43 am

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I apologize for this being looked over for so long. ^^; I second the approval of 4-2, whether it was needed or not.

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on Tue Aug 04, 2015 7:15 pm

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For new tiers I will grant this 3-1 good job!

on Mon Oct 24, 2016 6:56 pm

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3-1 approved. Same tier I gave it last time. Good job Rha'!


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